My Heart Will Go On~AK~Ended on Pg 127~ - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41

OMG i typed up a humongous part and it was so good but somehow it got erased and didnt come up!😭😭, so i guess ill have to type it over and post it tonite maybe..i m so sorry

Edited by erier101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
aww! i hate when that happens! well good luck and i hope it pops up [that actaully happend to me once 😆 i thought i lost it and then i found it in another folder. 😆] K well cont wen u can! ill b waiting!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh thats a shame that happens to me aswell anyways the part we got was gr8 and i cant wait to read on pls cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Recap: Err Check pg 7 I m too lazy to post it.

Part 3

Kripa's ankle was throbbing and she was pretty sure she had twisted it. She tried getting up, but "owwwwwww!!" she screamed. But she was in the middle of the garden and the Sharma mansion was huge, no one heard her. She decided to scream for her siblings, but all of a sudden it started raining really hard. Then came the thunder and soon it was raining and hailing at once. "Oh great" Kripa muttered, "Just what I needed!" She knew it was useless to try calling her brother, sister or anyone for that matter. The pounding rain and strong winds were very destructive and there was a lot of noise. Kripa helplessly sat there soaking wet, for she couldn't even crawl.
Meanwhile, our dear Angad was slowly descending the stairs of Khanna Mansion. When he got out, he saw that it was raining real hard, and instantly knew that a thunderstorm was coming, he quickly ran inside and got a umbrella. He could clearly see Kripa lying there helplessly, shivering. As he walked toward the Sharma Mansion, a thought came to him that made him smirk. (Thought-)Too bad she is stuck in her garden, it would've been nice if we were stranded in a lonely road, and… He got out of his thoughts as he arrived at the combined garden gate of the Khannas' and Sharmas'. He quickly opened it and headed towards where he could see Kripa lying on the grass. Kripa could see a figure approaching her so she screamed at him, "Help!" Angad approached her. He could clearly see her face and was lost in her innocence and beauty. Kripa snapped her fingers in front oh his face, "Hello?" Angad got out from his trance, and asked innocently, "What happened ma'am?"
K- umm well I tripped on my heels and I think I broke my ankle.
A- Oh, I see, can u stand?
K- No I can't
A-..hmm well hold on to my shoulder for support and try to lift yourself up
Kripa obeyed, but her ankle hurt even more, "Ouch!!" she screamed and winced at the pain. :"I can't!"
An idea came to Angad and he smirked, but it was too dark for Kripa to see, (she hadn't really seen his face yet).
A- Well then there is only one option left, and we'll use it.
K- which is?
In response, he scooped her up in his arms and headed towards the front door or the Sharma mansion. Kripa screamed in disagreement, "Hey put me down"
A-I thought you couldn't walk?
K- I can't!
Angad arched an eyebrow, "So?"
K- well….. argghhhhhhhhhh
Angad went up the front steps and rang the doorbell while Kripa checked him out. He was wearing a white shirt that was pretty much transparent now, since they were both wet. (umm he left his umbrella while picking up Kripa!)
K-thinking- he is pretty hot!!
Angad looked down and caught Kripa staring at him, he smiled wickedly, and stared back. They both stood there, in the rain, Angad holding Kripa, and stared into each others eyes for like 5 whole minutes. Finally, someone opened the door.
Ananya- Kripa di?
Both A-K broke out of their trance and looked at Ananya.
An- Where were you? She asked questioningly and then she realized Angad was there holding Kripa. "What are you doing here? Wait do you guys know each other?
A-K looked at each other, "No" they said simultaneously.
An- Well, then, uh, why are you holding her? She asked Angad
Angad and Kripa realized the position they were in and Kripa felt awkward. 😳
K- Well, I tripped and twisted my ankle, and I couldn't move my legs so, uh, Angad came and helped me.
An- Oh come on in.
Angad took Kripa inside and placed her on the sofa.
Ananya- Di are you ok? Does it hurt?
K- Whaddya think?
An- oh, um, I guess I should call a doctor, because you probably need a cast.
K- yeah, I guess
Ananya left to make the phone call, while A-K sat across from each other in an uncomfortable silence.

Okay, so they met, I am still thinking about the next part and what I should do, I have a little something planned, and I'll probably post that tomorrow. The part I had written before was much better but unfortunately it got erased, somehow. So, tell me if you liked it, please keep the comments going, for they inspire me to write better parts! 😊
Lots of Love, erier101



Edited by erier101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
it was awesome! i loved it...man i can jus imagina angad wet in a white shirt 😳 sighhh 😆 lol...cont soon.

x3 Prakriti
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: prakriti

it was awesome! i loved it...man i can jus imagina angad wet in a white shirt 😳 sighhh 😆 lol...cont soon.

x3 Prakriti

thanx...lol i can too😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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lol kripa checking him out LMAO!! lol plz continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Numera89

lol kripa checking him out LMAO!! lol plz continue soon!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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a WHITE TRANSPARENT SHIRT!!! omgg im soo jealouss!!! 😳 😳

lolz.. continue soooooonnn

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