My Heart Will Go On~AK~Ended on Pg 127~ - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
hey, jus started readin d ff n i must say.. its mindblowin!! its very very very gud!!
cant w8 2 reda d nct parts so, continu soon 😛
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
awesome part!!!

loved it!!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
fab part!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 hehe can imagine angu in the rain!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Chotii

hey, jus started readin d ff n i must say.. its mindblowin!! its very very very gud!!
cant w8 2 reda d nct parts so, continu soon 😛
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx

thanx😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: blah_blah

awesome part!!!

loved it!!!! 😳

thanx, but i didn't think it was that good, these parts are boring, i need to come up with something good.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: fizzypop

awesome fanfic cant wait till nxt part

thanx i am typing the next part up!😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 4

Angad and Kripa both sat there in an uncomfortable silence. Angad was thinking about his plan and intentions, and then he looked up to see Kripa shivering. He took his jacket (lol I just added the jacket to his outfit 😉 ) and handed it to her.

Finally, Kripa broke the ice: "Uh, thanks, for, um everything."
Angad, acting all modest said: "Oh it was no problem, I was going somewhere when I saw you sprawled up in that garden, so I helped you, and if there would've been someone else in my place they would have done the same." (Yeah right buddy, surely you were going somewhere in this wonderful weather! 😉 😆 )


Kripa, extending her hand, "Well I am Kripa, Kripa Sharma."
Angad shaked hands with her, "Angad Khanna." That name sounded vaguely familiar, but Kripa ignored that fact, for Angad still hadn't let go of her hand. When he had picked her up, a chill had went down her spine, but she had ignored it, the same had happened to Angad but he thought it was because of the cold. Now, when he had shaked hands with her, they both felt the shiver and electric currents in them and both sat there Confused. Finally, Angad let go of her hand and Kripa quickly took her's back.
A-So, I haven't seen you around here before, are you just visiting, or, what?
K- Oh, well I am Aaliya and Aryan's sister and will be attending high school here, my parents are shifting their business here,so, yeah, they will be coming next week.
A-thinking- Do I look like I care? (He was bored but he had a look on his face that showed he was real interested, 😉 . Angad noticed Kripa was staring at him, expecting more of an introduction.
A-Oh, I see, well, I am your neighbor, I live in the Khanna mansion and I am Aaliya's brother.
K- Aaliya? Oh isn't she Ananya's best friend?


"Yes, Aali is my best friend di, the one I told you about and this is her brother Angad." Ananya said as she entered the room. "Oh, and the doctor will be dropping by to check on your ankle, in an hour or so."
K- Oh okay, thanx sis, I know you have a lot of things planned, but I probably won't be able to walk on this foot for a while.
An- it's okay, di, we have the rest of the year, I hope it gets better soon! 😊
Angad felt awkward sitting there while the 2 sisters were talking, he felt like he was the wallpaper or something. (lol! 😆 😆 ) "Well, I better be leaving, now, I have to meet my friend, uh, Kripa hope to see you around, bye."


K- Oh, um, I'm sorry I didn't ask you for coffee or anything, you can sort of see I am not in the condition to move around or even get up, but Aali can get you something, would you like coffee or soda?
A- uh no thank you I am running late.
K- Bye, and thanx once again
A- no prob, so friends?
K- I guess 😕


Ananya was watching all this silently and she also watched as Kripa and Angad shook hands. Uh-oh, I better talk to di, she thought. Finally, Angad left, and Ananya closed the door behind him. She then went to talk to Kripa, but before she could,
Kripa interrupted, "Hey Ananya, why were you so shocked and irritated, and well, disgusted when you saw Angad?"
Ananya- "I was that obvious?"
Kripa- "Well, you know how observant I am, so I noted it, but i am not sure if he did."
An- "Well even if he did, I really don't care, and that is what I was going to talk to you about."
K- About?
An- About Angad, di, didn't I tell you about him?
K- Uh, I think so, a loooong time ago, but I can't remember so will you please refresh my memory?
An- Okay, well, Angad is nice and all, and he is very popoula,r plus a really good football player, but he is a total flirt. He has a new girlfriend everyday and there are so many that he doesn't even remember their names. He is hot and all, but I'd suggest you stay away from him.


K- hmm I remember, that's why his name was so familiar, you had talked about him a few times, well, you're making me feel like you are the older sister and I am your younger sis, don't worry dear I can take care of myself. I hate playboys like him, and he wanted to be friends.ha! I want to see his next step, this was probably all panned, I was a little suspicious when he said he was going out somewhere, in this weather, and how did he know I needed help? He will never get a date with Kripa Sharma, no matter how much he tries, this is going to be real interesting.
The doctor came later on, and he told Kripa that she had twisted her ankle badly, and needed a cast. She also had to rest for 2 weeks and couldn't walk for another week.
This meant that Kripa couldn't go to school for another two weeks. This made Kripa half happy and half sad. Since her grandparents were visiting her aunt, and her brother and sister had school, she would be all alone at home. She'd rather go to school and do some work, she couldn't even walk around because of her ankle. She cursed herself for wearing the stupid heals.


But she also had other things in mind, such as, a master plan to get back at Angad, for she was sure that he had a plan, her friend Prithvi was a flirt like Angad but he wasn't all that bad. But he ALWAYS had a plan, he knew never to even TRY to flirt with Kripa.
So Kripa sat in her room,(which was now temporarily on the first floor) and typed up a plan on her computer wih a wicked grin.
Kripa was coming up with a master plan, but she was very dissapointed when she heard about Angad from Ananya, she didn't know what she expected him to be like, but there was something about him that attracted her. But she ignored the feeling.


Preview: Kripa's days at home, master plan under action, and.....? (u'll see!)


Okay, here is the next part, these parts are sooo boring, I need to come with a good storyline, I am just making this up and going along. But I'll try and maek the next part nice, and I am so messed up. I wanted A-K to meet and that is why I made Kripa twist her ankle, but I know that on a twisted ankle sh can't walk and stuff for atleast 2 weeks, so I included that but in the next part I think I am just gonna zoom by the weeks and then make her start going to school. Cuz she will have some encounters with….....guess? 😉
Thanx for the wonderful comments and keep 'em up!
Love,
Erier101
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Edited by erier101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
awesome part! ok so does angad go to the same highschool? plz continue soon! lol angad a playboy-- hot!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
awwww cool part dude!
n ye, im glad ur gona skip d 2 weeks kripa's gona hav 2 stay at home n get her bak 2 skool 😆
cant w8 4 d nxt parts!!
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
awww coool part....hmmm wonder what the plan is....update sooon

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