ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED

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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#991

Loving this story. Loved maturity of the teens along with their immaturity. If Khushi is mature enough to make a deal with Manorama in her love for Arnav but the same love for him makes her immature enough to keep up her end of deal. If Aman is mature enough comes in terms with Arnav's betrayal and correctly accessing others characters involved in this mess,shows his immaturity by brawlIng with Arnav to show his anger. When Arnav maturely handles Akash for his behavior towards him against Khushi but shows his immaturity by being indifferent to her for her decision. Love this character contrast of this story. Thx for the PM.

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crazyff-fan

@crazyff-fan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#992

Time for a new thread and hopefully we get an update with the new thread!!

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#993

Awesome! So khushi finally realized ki she really wants arnav... Kab tak arnav khushi se dur reh payega? Glad that aman and arnav have given their friendship a chance...the kiss was wonderful...*swoons*

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RenuHooda

@Hrithiksmile

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#994

Thank for pm
Loved the update 👍🏼

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Jay

@jduke

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#995

Finally I caught up with last four updates 😊.You know my AD is bitch 😕. Simply superb chapters and I enjoyed reading all of them. Did Manorama oppose Arnav and Kushi relationship because of Kushi's religion?. What would she do now?

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955548

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#996

I had to go back & read the Notes.

Soaking up the Flow of 'One Winter...'

Been reading some amazing comments.

I love this chapter.

The Family Scenario or call the Family Tableau is Heart Warming.🤗

Yet 'Sigh'. It is Incomplete.

There is one space unfilled. (Khushi)

Decision made to stay Away has it come back to Bite Her?

Ego:- it has an ugly Head.

Yet how can one stop those stupid Hormones.Deeply Musing her mind. Those Hormones playing 'Havoc' as You put it.😳

The Impish Thoughts. Yearning for the Glance of One Only.😉

'Love' for Eternity. Revelation to her inner Soul.

Those Eyes just looked up.

As if He knew her Thoughts. Yet they stayed Blank Canvas.

'Happy Birthday ARNAV ' footsteps faltered.

A 'Soft Kiss ' no Response

Placed another One & Again .

The hand encircling the Waist & Oh That Gentle Kiss turned Deeper.

Urgency. Holding On. Yet Pushing Pulling. Wanting More

Caving into this WANT for a fleeting second.❤️

'Sorry there is no U.S.'💔

Ouch that did Hurt.

You have Inked it Beautifully.

The Justice You have done to every Character is To be Applauded.

Look forward to the next Update.

My POV.

❤️S

PS:- I am not going to assume what Your next update is going to be.

Just would love to read Your Uptake of the Story

:-))***

Edited by scorpio47 - 10 years ago

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#997

Unreserved here

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ZAIDI

@Miss.Zaidi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#998

Originally posted by: rulama
Sayyu... Sorry for the late comments... AD has been not just donkey but a mule too...
That is why I usually don't reserve but on the day I read I thought I'll be able to comment later at night... But it was not so! Only when I saw Lolwas scrap saying she has commented that I realized that you have already posted a new chapter and I am yet to comment on the previous one!

That was an interesting chapter...
Arnav giving tit for tat making Khushi realize one can never take unilateral decisions in a relationship!
Did Khushi think just because Anjali knew and was asking Arnav not to mess up the relationship she had paved way for her...
Anjali took the pic. of both Arnav and Khushi holding Ahaan showing how they fit in together as a family... One thing that amused me was was Shyam going to name the kid Ahaan even if it was a girl???
no .. i think shyam had already decided a name for girl and a name for boy .. is that ?😕
Sarita seems to be a wise girl... a true friend not pampering Khushi while she wavers...
Loved the update...