CHAPTER-9 only
For your Note - You have got Khushi's habit - using
Hum instead of
Main. 😆 I know, her clothes could have been so better. Plain cotton kurtas would have looked so better.
Payal did the right thing but what to do nobody is bothered about a girl's interest in this nation. 😆She is denying and yet everyone is busy matching kundalis, asking the boy if he agrees.. As if ladki ki marzi ki koi value hi na ho 🤢. Payal is right in her analysis, at least normal. Sometimes elders really forget to look in to the details or consider any ulterior motive especially when it's someone who has known them for long. I know it's more because they are thinking that Akash is not going to live in their house but Payal is going there, also that he is a nice guy and everyone in the family is nice. Even Mami isn't hostile exactly. I know Mami's thoughts would be the same too. Everyone is so busy rejoicing over Payal's luck and positive points that they are not thinking much.
So this whole Arnav-Khushi fiasco has brought Payash together. Jo hota hai achche ke liye hi hota hai. 😉 Payal may not be very interested in marrying Akash but they are becoming friends with the way they are easily sharing their thoughts, not to mention sneakily meeting too. I loved how Khushi openly teased Akash and later Arnav shared with Payal his thoughts about this proposal openly in a single line. But Akash acting as the nervous guy was quite amusing after seeing him as the confident one throughout this story. 😳
I want to know what did Akash talk with Payal regarding them. No ramanchi, I want complete details.😛 Waise I think they are already behaving as an ideal couple. Both are looking out for each others siblings even if Khushi has always been a sister to Akash but Payal put in some serious efforts to make Arnav talk to her. I'm sure this has led Akash to have this "us" conversation. Obviously he won't let her go now after knowing she is the right girl for him.
Khushi befriended Aman even when he was an equal contributor in the pranks Arnav played on her but maintained her distance with Arnav. Talk about preferential treatment.😉
Aman understands Mami so well, at least better than many others. When everyone around except Payal and Khushi is not questioning Mami's sudden U-turn from her class-conscious attitude or even thinking why has she proposed for this marriage Aman has provided a very fitting reason. Also he is right that now nobody can stop Payash marriage as Mami has singled her out as the bahu of Raizadas. 😆 Mami ke plan kabhi fail nahin hote except in Arhi's case. She will have to come around here bas zara der lagegi. 😛
Khushi's words of wisdom to talk, openly communicate fell on dumb ears. They didn't need words to clear the air but few punches, fist-fighting and kicks. Boys will be boys. 😆 But as I've said above in this update "Jo hota hai achche ke liye hota hai". Now they are back being friends and Arnav got a small but tight hug too. Issey kehte hain ek panth do kaaj😉😳. Now he should know that for Khushi it's only him. She didn't hug Aman but her concern overpowered her when she saw Arnav in a disheveled state. Anyways samajhne wale samajh gaye hain (read Aman) jo na samjhe woh anari hain (Arnav in all probability) 😛
Mami is nice except she is just too occupied with thoughts of keeping Khushi away. Waise her actions are in complete contradiction. On one hand she wants Khushi to stay away from Raizadas and on the other hand she wants Payal to get married to her one and only son. For the latter to be done she would have to adapt herself to tolerate more of Khushi. 😊
I feel bad for Aman. He is going to go through so much in the future but what's the point in having his parents remain legally binded when they don't love. It'll more be a societal blow because Aman already knows how his parents are and I'm sure he can handle it bravely. 😊 Mami's concern and love for Aman is quite touching. So now that Lavanya is most probably talking to NK, is it going to be Savita for Aman or do you have a new candidate? 😉 Ab koi toh Aman ke liye bhi banani hi padegi. Also I have a one genuine kostin - Are all Gupta girls (direct or related) going to marry Raizadas only? 😆 Mamiji is going to have a blast in the future. 😃
I loved all the chapters with every chapter bringing us face to face with their mature side.
Aamn is the
heartbroken, friendzoned, bestie betrayed and Savita is Khushi's bestie who's nursing a soft corner for Aman. 😳
Yes you're turning into SP. You also remove your stories like they removed the episodes and blocked our VMs 😛. Now you better don't ever remove this story to prove that you're different😆
Take some rest and then start writing next update. I want to read Payash conversation asap😛
*Edited
I realised now that you have posted another chapter...😳
Edited by aquagal - 10 years ago
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