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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#551

MB I'm so in love with Maya I can't tell you how much. The image of a pixy woman with child like antic and especially her "K.I.S.S.I.N.G" is not leaving me and I'm going hysterical thinking about it.

I'm glad Arnav had him by his side as friend, than a life partner and now as a best friend and a confidante. Though it was her digging to brought out the info from Arnav about khushishee...😉

"She wasn't free and I wanted to be free" he declared. Then why has she stayed with me since?

"There isn't anything to it anymore. This is a futile conversation." She faked a smile that spoke the truth. Then why do I fight to keep him out of my mind?

Above lines were gems and brought forth what they wanted to portray and how they actually felt about there one week of unexpected tryst. Something left incomplete, some emotions never found it's rightful place and some feelings yet bubbling in there heart at the thought of meeting each other again or even texting each other.

It was good to see Lavanya portraying her best friend role to the T, Khushi looked up to her to seek strength and to know that she was doing right by texting Arnav. And Lavanya could see the life back on Khushi's cheek and in her eyes at the task of texting Arnav along with the upward curve of her life. And that's how Lavanya knew Khushi will be fine.

And so there flirting through text start. Can't wait to see what happens when they meet.

Another wonderful update MB. 👏

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#552

Thank u for gmail...😃

The update is fabulous...👏

You are awesome... 🤗You have beautifully written the way Arnav & Khushi share their past to Lavanya & Maya... Though it was in brief, it aptly stated the true feelings Arnav & Khushi have...⭐️

Finally Lavanya gave the push that Khushi needed to talk to Arnav...😛

Khushi has a right to live her life again... Khushi is still young, so she has the right to choose a life partner for her... & who better than Arnav? ? 😉 😉

Finally Khushi is coming to Delhi...

Please update quickly...

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SharuAG

@SharuAG

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#553

Wow! What an update. You realy know how to play with patience and ask for more. Can't wait for the next update.

while I was reading I wanted peek at the end to check for khushi's text. But, tried very hard to follow the writing. I'm a very impatience person, but trying to improve that weakness. Somehow your story helps me to improve that weakness.

Thank you for the email and looking forward for the next update.

Edited by SharuAG - 10 years ago

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hararnav

@hararnav

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#554

so happy tht khushi texted back... glad tht she has fren like lavanya,.. she deifinitely needs the push...

i cant believe that i will like arnavs wife even if she isnt khushi :-)) i lov Pix.. she is adorable...

more of their past please

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geitahchamate

@geitahchamate

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#555

Wat a cute chapter..finally they have started communicating..😉😉😉 and moreover Khushi is coming to Delhi so now I am keeping all my hopes high..and moreover I am smiling end to end as if it's actually me in the story hoping for a silver lining...

Very well written Mirabell..i just love your style of writing where emotions are so well written that you can feel the moment while reading. 👏👏👏

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#556

Woohoo what an update
The Ping pong of messages brought a huge smile on my face
Maya is a real true friend

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Brishti

@brishti84

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#557

Oh I can't stop smiling. I'm SO happy Khushi texted him that led to their cute convo. I have loved their convos sofar. They are so different. Such a unique flirty/quirky type...ah something I can't describe as I am clearly NOT as good with words as you. Looking forward to her coming to Dehli.

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#558

Hi MB

Loved the update

The sentence about 3 generation's loss and pain I really choked there really touched my heart but with kushi sms change my mood as well like arnav.

Maya is really sweet

I am loving her character

Thank u

Why next Saturday seems so far dear

I know I am greedy can we get like 26 th special update on republic day special something like that ha ha ha

Any ways thank u Pls consider my repuest

Ok bye

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#559

I chuckled when both of them were in denial mode on their memories of each other..Yes..they both had really tried to forget one another. And now delving into the memories it feels like it happened just a while ago..i think both didn't realize till now the hold one had against the other..!!

They have forgone formalities...accepted that they wanted to keep in touch. The highlight apart from Arnav- Kushi, was maya..I loved her insistence and spunk..it must have been natural for Arnav to drown himself in her liveliness and forget about Kushi..She understands Arnav deeply..even when he is not sure of himself..best of friends indeed..

And Lavanya is a true friend..understanding and giving silent support..