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apekshash

@apekshash

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#561

awesome. i wonder why you stopped.. could you just not continue writing.. need to wait another week for an update from you.

awesome story.. the way arnav and khushi r hesitating to talk back.. ah!!

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jisa

@jisa

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#562

loved it sooo much..
had read the first chapter long ago...
but
then lost track..
read the other chapter at a go..!!!
waiting eagerly for the next..!!

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#563

I undressed, MB, on page 79. 😉

If you don't know the undressed joke, ask me. (I bhill tellz you)

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barbiebala

@barbiebala

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#564

Nice one

La gave her the support Khushi needs to the happy start

Arnav still remembers his memories with Khushi

Maya stirred his emotions back.

Wow and finally Khushi msgd him.

Happiness is oozing out of Arnav.

Loved the msg chat 😃

I'm excited for Khushi's India trip.

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Angels11

@Angels11

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#565

Oh I am really in love with this story. Why is the Kushi in all these FFs so wonderful while in the show she was a big screeching pain in the ass. And as for Arnav OMG he is too gud to be true. I check this thread every day to c if there is an update 😳

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Kiran

@lovedrops

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Posted: 10 years ago

#566

Wow MB.. it is brilliant. The way you started the update it simply took my breath away. The parallel conversation is intriguing, The way you are steering the story is very interesting. especially the words you use .. simple yet sharp... the phrases you use.. I always wonder how could you frame such sentences. with simple words.

Here I should particularly talk about Maya... she is really a wonderful woman. She is happy now.. and she wants Arnav to be happy like her. She is really a nice person. I am very curious to know the reasons for their divorce. They seem like very understanding and they care for eachother... they knew very well about eachother. then what made them separate while they are having a son. Are the reasons solid enough for the breakup.

Lavanya.. she is really being a good friend to Khushi. she knows how to tackle confused khushi.

Arnav and Khushi.. there is so much chemistry going on between them although they are far and they didn' see each other since ten years. Its quite intriguing. I am very much excited to know what made them find their own paths. But you dont have to rush becasue to answer our questions... they are just for us to think over.. and you go in your pace and give us such beautiful updates every time. I am really in love with your writing.

Edited by lovedrops - 10 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#567

Brilliant..Awesome Update..👏

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#568

aweee lovely update...the text messages exchange brought big grin :)...not only to arnav but i guess to readers too...lol..

maya and arnav friendship awesome...the way u have started the chap thats cool too...:)...so maya wanted to bring happiness in arnav's life same like the way she is happy in her current life ,thats very sweet thought..:)...awesome chapter :)

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supervin76

@supervin76

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#569

Wow! An awesome update. Reading it gave me the goosebumps! I am so excited for the next update.

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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#570

Thanks so much for the pm. Just loved the update. 😊 Before anything I have to say you are a brilliant writer. You write so well, it's really a pleasure reading your work. I loved the way you described the many ways that couples adjust to break ups. Your insight to relationships was fantastic. 👏So happy that khushi finally texted Arnav and that she is coming to India. I also really liked Arnav's pixie, she seemed like a genuine well wisher of Arnav. Can't wait to read about khushi and Arnav's next meeting in the airport. 😳