AR/ARSH FF Sunn Leyna #2 Part 47 Pg 114 (26 Aug'17)

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Crystal Saya

@CrystalSaya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#791

Can function without affection but not without respect...is that what u believe!!!???? I know all these characters are your creation but I can see u in shilpa's character the most!!! I know I might be wrong cent percent...I just love this line.In any kind of relationship,respect is the password to enter.

Coming back to this wonderful update,what can I say!!! It's full of entertainment. Firstly u kind of keep us glued to the next update that what's gonna happened with Shilpa being in labor?! I hope she n baby will be fine...

I don't know what people see on death's bed but I heard from my mother that my Nana said to her while dying that"" so many people have come to take me!!!!""" So everyone guessed that he has seen all his dead relatives...

I just love ahaana's cribbing scene abt ayaans friends birth day party n ayaans insecurities about ahaana's extra khatirdari in his absence...really pure sibling fight

Nikki's interaction with Shilpa n their conversation is so real...I wish after marriage friends cud really talk like this with the responsibility of children...

Atul is the coolest devar in the world

N Nikki's conversation with ahana is so delightful...it's so true baacche man k sacche

I am so happy finally Shilpa understood that every people has a different place in life.its Better not to compete with everyone. Arman has said that Riddhima is his past n she is present but Shilpa has a different mindset of having thing just for herself on the contrary she finds angad her love n friend over Arman first...but finally she understands her thinking loopholes

Lastly I just love the transperancy be Arman n shilpa's relationship. Their dialogue exchange is so entertaining.

Waiting for next update. Hope it will be soon

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ritika malikk

@Yudkbhislove

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Posted: 8 years ago

#792

I am commenting after a long time... i love BD ... i actually look forward to its updare ...sunn leyna update kar deti thi tum toh i used to read i did not look forward to it maybe due to it being so serious and all ...but yeh jo update tha specially last ke 2 3 update ...they touched me... this is a beautiful story which most people can relate to one way or the other ... and thus i have come to love this ff ...both your ff are the only one i still read on indiaforums .. and truly you should try to write professionally...you have that potential... you can capture human emotions really well...looking forward to the next update...

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Natalya Bedi

@Natalya_bedi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#793

I loved it...I seriously loved it!!!!!

Pata nahi kyu mujhe Armaan par bada pyaar aa raha tha ..is part ko padh kar...khair wo to hamesha hi aata hai 😉
I love Ayaan-Ahaana scenes...the way they tease each other...I so miss having a sibling when I read these scenes.
The way Ayaan teased Ahaana about the cake ...was so cute and what followed was even cuter.
"Mamma ne chicken pie bana kar to nahi diya hoga" ha ha...yahi ghum kha gaya bechare ko...

Ayaan pretending that he got hurt while talking to Shilpa was so natural...I think every kid must have done that...mai to abhi bhi karti hun...

Ahaana is toh chhotu Shilpa ..full on patakha...ghar k saare raaz khol kar rakh diye...
Her "It's ok " to Nikki 😛

I REALLY LIKED THE DIALOGUES ...THEY WERE SUPERB...
Armaan-Shilpa conversation was fun...
Armaan was on his teasing spree...
Jab insaan samne nahi rehta tab ehmiyat pata chalti hai...Shilpa ko bhi pata chal gaya that she can't live without Armaan.

Armaan-Shilpa's chemistry in this ff is so so dhamakedaar and unique...
I loved Angad with Shilpa...but yahan Armaan-Shilpa ki baat hi kuch aur hai...

I love this ff and so wait for the updates...and this time you were really quick...so pls continue with the same pace.

Love you 😊

Edited by Natalya_bedi - 8 years ago

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#794

The last part was the best part of the Update..

I always felt ridhima didn't deserve this at least

And u captured that bang on..

I want to know what shilpa will do with those pics

Continue soon.

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fict

@fict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#795

Brilliant part in every sense.👏 Beginning was scary and I hope nothing wrong happens with Shilpa or the baby. They can't take anymore grief now.

Trip down the memory lane was awesome. Shilpa sensing Ahaana's noticing everything related to baby shows her connection with the kids. Loved Ayaan and ahaana too much in this. Their innocent talks, sibling jealousy and rivalry, all were penned down beautifully. These were so natural and relatable ,be it Ayaan bragging about the food he ate at the party or worried sick that Ahaana will get pampered more in his absence. Ahaana sharing her family secrets with Nicky was so cute. Freinds meeting again by chance and reliving old time was lovely.

Best part was the dialogues of Armaan, Shilpa and Angad. I have always liked Angad as he is a truly wonderful person. He is also the only person who could point out the faults in Shilpa's thinking and say to her all he said because if anyone else had said all that to her, she would have blasted them. As Angad said Shilpa was his first love and he will always love her and want the best for her. Shilpa also loved him and still respects him. His talks made her to introspect her thoughts and actions.

Shilpa finally was able to sift through her past memories, feelings and came to the realization that she is the one who is causing herself the most pain. Her realization that in her insecurties and bitterness, she is being selfish and uncaring of Armaan's feelings. This was the much needed step in my opinion for her to embrace life again and enjoy it to the full.

Loved the song choice. so apt for this scenario. waiting for next already and again a fabulous part👍🏼

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Mansi

@mans22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#796

Armaan in the beginning when shilpa was being taken to the OT was kist too emotional and well portrayed just hope all goes well. Next it was a super Super fun update with nikki ahana chat and the twin duo getting jealous of each other. Their choo choo after they get home from somewhere is soo cute. Shilpa and gang was fun to read along with the dog. Loved shilpa armaan talk and also the flashbacks of shilpa while she was going through the albums. Love how shilpa accepts that she can't function without armaan by her side. Her realization about her insecurities makes me wonder of she will be normal after this as armaan said sochna mat or she will go back to thinking again after after a few days uz its shilpa after all because even after the realization of riddhima not deserving what was happening there are these gossip relatives and friends of the family who have thoer fav target shilpa.

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Shriya Shetty

@Shriya_11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#797

An excellent part with excellent dialogues.

Yaar I loved Angad. ...I think bahut bura hua bechare ke saath...I really feel for him...he is such a good man...Shilpa didn't deserve him.

But at the same time I feel no body can Shilpa except Armaan...agar use koi seedha rakh sakta hai toh wo wahi aadmi hai...and here my love for Armaan takea over. He has been the best husband for both the sisters which is anything but easy.

I really like the way Shilpa realised that Riddhima cannot be blamed for any of the things happened with her.

She really needs to let go of that baggage which is killing her every day...

Armaan's condition when Shilpa was being taken for the surgery was so heart wrenching.

Apart from emotional moments...this part with filled with cuteness of the bacha party.

Sometimes I feel Ayaan is naughtier than Ahaana...Ahaana toh bhai bam ka gola hai...apni maa ki tarah.

Ahaana presenting her family facts before Nikki was adorable...

Ayaan has a habit of bragging about everything...he is too cute.

I really enjoyed the part😊😊

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#798

okay thr starting stanza actually is very scary
i still have goosebum n m nervous like hell
n ur very bad didnt disclose wat happen to shiilpa suddenly n how is she
started the story on flashback
frankly i dont really like it
when shilpa is confused abt ridhz n angad fiasco
comeon i m not saying ridhz n shilpa is wrong but the person is not anymore y have grudges against her
shilpa or ridhz ka relation ab kuch tym kuch alag way me show horha h
i dont want to comment on that but i m not liking it
arsh scenes were amazing how he started to come home early took care of her
irritate is really cute n funny their sarcastic comment on each other
then ahana n ayaan are munchkins
then the gang reunion
finally shilpa realization
but idk wat she is planning by putting ridhz n angad photo on ahana bag
scared of how the kids will react !!;
n wat happen to shilpa hopw baby n she will be fine