Sandhir SS - Dancing with the star - Thread 2 - completed!! - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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firstly congrats for the new thread...👏👏👏
n secondly i just luv the story..😃
keep writing n pls pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats for new thread!!!
super cute n romantic update!!!
loved their chemistry!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thnk god u updated!!i m feeling soo boared!!n yea pst nxt pt asap n plz dnt frgt to pm me!d storylin iz awwsome..finally dey r engged!!nw wat ll rd ans??!!suspnse!i hp o ehi ruk jaya...hayy!my cutie pie!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats fr new thred nd superb prt finally sandhir got engaged
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congo for your new thread and awsome part. Engagement karwa di. Loved it. Next update asap.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats on ur new thread Sam!!!👏😃
the update was lovely n beautiful
love it to the core
Beautifully you've describe the scenario
all got engaged!!! Yippee😳😃
update ASAP
Eagerly waiting
Thx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey... i know am pretty late in updating. Sorry for that.. Getting time out of work seems to be really impossible except for weekends. Lemme know how this was and i will be ending the ff in a few parts maybe 2-3 more.


Chapter 53

Randhir stiffened with her question. "Bolo na." she sniffed. "why don't you go and sleep sweetheart? Kal haldi hai na. And abt me going back. We will talk later. Ok?" She nodded her head and he gently pecked her forehead and led her inside the mansion.

Both the girls and guys spent the night together as it would be the last night before the D-day. Everyone were enjoying themselves in each other's presence where as Sanyu was totally lost which was observed only by Dhwani apart from Randhir. So being curious and concerned she said "Ummm guys I think its time that we girls take your leave. And you people also sleep. Kal bahut bada din hai. So good night."

Once the girls reached their rooms, Vidushi and Kruthi immediately slept whereas Dhwani stopped Sanyu and pulled her out "Kya baat hai? Why are you looking lost? What is bothering you?" Meanwhile Kastuki had also come up to them

"Kuch nahi Mish." "I know you well. Ab bataogi. Yaa mein bhai se complain karoon?"

"Nahi. Batati hoon. Wo.. hmmm.. you guys will be going back to Swiss soon na. I just realized it."

Once she said, the other two girls froze in their places. "Why didn't this thought cross my mind?" said Kastuki "I don't wanna go back!" said Dhwani crying.

"Ssshhh!! Mish... don't cry baby please. Career is also equally important. Don't you think that just because of love we should give up our passion? I know I was also kiddish in crying to Gabbar. But I realized that its just not done. We should be more supportive to the other. Right kastu? Jiggy ko bhi tumhari support ki zaroorat hogi na? If we get weak what will happen to them?"

"But how long will we be like this? I mean... Long distance relationship? Work karega?" asked Kastuki

"Kyun nahi? You guys love and trust each other. That's all that matters. So we have to promise ourselves that we wont stand as a barrier for them to achieve things. And Mish.. you came to India to find out about Ankit. And now that you have, you should get back and finish things which you have left unfinished."

"When did my sister become so intelligent?" said ankit from behind

The girls turned to see Randhir, Jiggy and Ankit standing there and watching them intently.

"Kisske saath hai yeh." Randhir pulled his collar up and smiled at Sanyu who just blushed.

"Hmmm lets go to the terrace?" asked Jiggy

All six of them went to terrace and settled themselves on the garden swing and relaxed themselves. "Sorry Gabbar. I just got umm hyper of thinking to stay away from you."

"Its natural darling. But I promise I will be back here in 2 years time. Actually Jiggy and me have decided to train our four top assistants there and later shift the head office to Delhi or maybe amalgamate with O&S Industries."

"Matlab you already realized that we are gonna be away from each other for a while?" asked Kastuki

"Hmmm. It was Ankit who first brought this up when we were at Mumbai. And he has also given a few ideas. So lets see what happens. But 2 years is all we ask for. You will be giving us that time right?"

The girls nodded their head. "But what will I do? I have finished MBA and my internship is gonna end in a few weeks."

"Hmmm. Mish I want you to join our office and help us out. Anyday 3 is better than 2 right. You can handle the marketing issues whereas Jiggy and me will take care of the rest."

"Gabbar?" sanyu called out

"Will your and Jiggy's dad accept? As in it is their company, harwork which has made the company so huge in Swiss."

"Hmmm.. we will talk to them once the wedding is over. Waise bhi bhaiya se bhi baat karna hai." Replied Randhir

"Chalo so jao sab. Warna kal kruthi paka hume maaregi" they all chuckled and went to sleep.

Next morning all were up and as usual the whole house was buzzing with a lot off commotion.The girls were in combinations of green and yellow while the guys were in cream sherwani. Kruthi was in a simple yellow and white chiffon saree while Yoyo was in white sherwani. After applying haldi to Kruthi and Yoyo, the girls were trying their best to apply it on the guys who escaped tactfully by smearing the same on the girls.

"Ouch!!!!" shouted Sanyu and caught her ankle while she was chasing Randhir. He stopped abruptly and rushed back to her and helped her get up.

"Kya hua? Sprained? Cant you ever walk properly? Hamesha girna hai? Agar mein nahi hota toh?" he kept questioning her while she was just looking at him with a lot of love in her eyes.

"Abhi bhi dard ho raha hai?" he asked. She nodded her head and still gazed at him. Then Randhir too matched her intent gaze. Suddenly she moved her gaze and started walking but Randhir held her wrist and said "Haldi lagana keliye hi act kiya na? Lagaogi nahi?"

"Tumhe kaise pata?" she widened her eyes and mentally kicked herself for being so foolish.

"Mein Randhir Singh Shekwat hoon. Sab jaanta hoon.Ab lagao."

"Par mere paas nahi hai haldi" she pouted.

"Then why did you chase me? Pagal ho?" But he stopped midway as a naughty thought crossed his mind. "Ahaan. Mujhe pata hai tumhare iraada kya hai."

"Irada? Kya?" she asked confused.

He pulled her gently towards him and brought his face close to hers. "Ky kya kar rahe ho? Koi dek dekh lega?"

"Kya yaar hamesha ek hi line bolti ho?" he asked irritated. "Ab chup raho. Tumhe mujhe haldi lagana hai yaa nahi?" she nodded her head in yes.

He kept his cheek on hers and haldi from her cheek got smeared on his "Ab ho gaya. And truly speaking, our haldi is also over. Ab bas ek hi rasam baaki hai. Mann toh kar raha hai ki aaj raat mein bhi tumse shaadi karoon."

"but.." she said

"I know. And.." he continued

"we will get married after you are back." She completed

Both of them smiled and walked back as in a few more hours the main event - the wedding would start. It was evening soon and the whole mansion was flooded with people. All of them were doing the allotted jobs. SanDhir were the most important people as they were given the responsibility of wedding arrangements.

All the guys were clad in amazing designer sherwanis in red, blue, green, silver and the bridegroom was in the traditional gold and red combination. The girls who had brought Kruthi were clad in simple but elegant lehangas in violet, yellow, pink, orange and bride again was in traditional maroon which made them look gorgeous.

The bride and bridegroom were beaming with happiness as it was the most special day in their life as just in a few hours they would become one in the eyes of society though they were one from the time they vowed to be with each other at all times. Soon the rituals started and when they were taking their 7 vows, the other 4 couples too took the same vows.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Arre I missed it that you already have a new thread... Many Many congratulations for the same...

And about the last two updates in this thread

They were amazing.. I luvd it how the couples were coaxed into an engagement. The convo between the gurls about the distance etc. was also amazing...

And the haldi sequence... OMG - it took my heart away.

Looking forward to the wedding sequence if there is more than the wows and can't wait to read what happens next...

And what did you say ? you are going to wind this up ??? You better have another story lined up... coz i am addicted to your work.

Edited by anuaskif - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its beautiful nd plz start a new story as i don't want to miss ur writings.
Edited by gudia11 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Update after a long tym
Bt it was wrthwtng
Rd dhwani n jiggy will be going back soon
N they need 2 years tym to settle everything n came back
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Everybody upset Bt they know its imprtant

Haldi ceremony
Sanyu chasing rd
To caught she start acting of getting hurt
Bt rd b kaam ni h
He knows everything


Finally the d-day arrived

Everybody so happy n enjoying

U r going to end dis in two three updates
Gonna miss it lyk hell

If possible write sum thing new

Wtng for nxt
Update soon

Luv u
Keep smiling

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