Sandhir SS - Dancing with the star - Thread 2 - completed!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey!!!! am so excited to start a new thread!!!!!!!!! Thank you all for your wonderful support and encouragement.
link to thread 1

Chapter 52 - Page 1
Chapter 53 - Page 3
Chapter 54 - Page 4
Chapter 55 - Page 5
Epilogue - Page 7



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 52

Early in the morning, Randhir skillfully slipped out of the room before anyone else came to the room and alerted the others too. It was the day when the rituals were to begin. Everyone started doing their respective jobs. All the couples were exchanging serene smiles at each other thinking about the time they spent together the previous night. Suddenly they heard a noise from the garden and all of them rushed there.

Yoyo: No. I don't wanna get married.

Kruti: Kya?? Par kyun??

Randhir: You love her na.. then whats the problem

Parth: Pagal ho gaye ho kya?

Kastuki: Yeh kya mazaak hai?

Sanyu: All arrangements have been made.

Jiggy: Arey bhai if you have any problem we can sort it out

Yoyo: Arey Bas!!! I will get married only in one condition

All: Kya?

Yoyo: I want you guys to get engaged right now!

All: What? Why?

Yoyo: You guys also love eath other na. mein toh shaadi karne jaa raha hoon. Why should I do it alone. You guys also get married

Vidushi: you guys are older than us

Dhwani: Haan... and you guys have also achieved big in your career. We have just started.

Ankit: Exactly.. we wanna romance as GF BF now and not be finaces..

Yoyo: Agar tum log chahte ho ki humari shaadi ho I want you guys engaged.

Kruti(crying): Guys please maan jao na...

Randhir: Hmmm.. ok we will get engaged

Others: What?

Randhir: Haan. But no arrangements have been made na. No rings, humare dress, cards, invite.

JIggy: Yup. Kuch bhi ready nahi hai. So once its done we will get engaged

"Sab set hai. We are all ready for the engagement" came a chorous voice from behind.

Harsh: Thank god yoyo and kruti acted well. And you guys accepted.

Renuka: Harsh!!!! You are not supposed to let out the secret that we arranged the whole drama.

Kishor: Hahaha... pagal!! Acha girls your dresses are with your respective in-laws. And guys go to Vardhan. He has yours.

Anju: Get going.. I want you all to assemble here soon.

All of them were shocked, excited, scared. They were going through a lot of emotions. Within 30 minutes all of the couples were standing next to each other. JiKi in Red, WanKit in Maroon, VidaRth in blue andSanDHir in Green. Soon all of them exchanged rings and now they were officially couples.

Niharika: How was my surprise?

Harsh: Look at their faces Niha. They are blushing.

All the elderly people had a hearty laugh while the youngsters turned the deepest shade of red and slipped away from their eyes. Soon mehendi function started and all of them participated in it.

Vardhan: PArth, Vidushi, Randhir and Sanyukta please come up on stage

Once the four of them had assembled, he continued "So now you four will be giving a special performance. Just dance to the song which is being played. Other couples can also join if you feel like dancing." Saying this he went down without giving anyone a chance to deny. Soon the song played and the lights dimmed and focused on the couples.

Main Wari Jawan
Main Wari Jawan
Sathhoya Ki Ho Ek Sur Re
Main Wari Jawan
Main Wari Jawan
Dil To Hoya Majboor
Main Wari Jawan..
Main Wari Jawan

The girls were blushing and didn't take any step. So the guys took the lead and held the girl's hands in theirs and pulled them closer to themselves. Realising that they had to dance the girls immediately placed theit hands on the guy's shoulder and started dancing to the tune.

Chuliya Tune Lab Se Ankho Ko
Mannate Puri Tumse Hi
Main Bari Jawan

Tu Mile Jahan Mera Jahan Hai Waha
Rounke Sari Tumse Hi

Chuliya Tune Lab Se Ankho Ko
Mannate Puri Tumse Hi
Tumile Jahan Mera Jahan Hai Waha
Rounke Sari Tumse Hi.
Piya O Re Piya...
Piya Re Piya Re Piya..
Piya O Re Piya...
Piya Re Piya Re Piya..

Soon JiKi, Wankit had also come upto the stage and were grooving to the song.


In Duriyo Ne Nazdiki Yose
Sauda Koi Kar Liya
Ho..O..O
Chupke Nigahone Dil Se Isk Ki Ka
Wada Koi Kar Liya.
Main Vari Jawan
Main Vari Jawan
Satho Ki Hoya Ek Sur Re
Sau Sau Tarose Bhar Ke Ye Daman
Le Chal Mujhe Kahi Dur..

Yoyo and Kruti had joined the group and all of them were dancing in perfect sync as though they had practiced it for a number of times.


Piya O Re Piya...
Piya Re Piya Re Piya..
Piya O Re Piya...
Piya Re Piya Re Piya..

In cue, the guys lifted the girls in their arms and were dancing to the song without breaking the eye contact.

The song ended but still all the couple were just looking into each other's eyes and only when they heard the audience applaud for them they came back from their world to reality and let go of each other and descended the dias. Soon it was time to fill mehendi in Kruti's hand and so all the girls excited too. The guys were watching their girls who had turned like small kids to fill their hands with beautiful designs. Soon it was dinner time and the guys took the responsibility to feed their loved ones. So they took a plate and went to their girls.

Sanyukta saw Ankit and Parth feeding their girls. Randhir took a plate and went to Sanyukta and started to much something in his mouth. Sanyukta saw that and was irritated as she was already hungry. "You have come to irritate me."

Randhir: Hmmm. Yea!!

Sanyu: Tch!! Jao na kahi aur.

Randhir: How will I irritate you if I go somewhere else.

Sanyu: Gabbar. Dimaag mat khao. Jao yahan se

Randhir: Acha? Is this the way you talk to your fianc?

Sanyukta immediately fell silent as she heard the word fianc. She blushed and started going away from there while Randhir held her arm carefully not disturbing her mehendi and stopped her.

Randhir: Acha.. My basanti knows to blush. Haaayy!!!

Sanyu: Gabbar.. Mujhe bhook lagi hai..

Randhir: Why am I here baby? Muh kholo

Sanyu: It was for me?

Randhir: Hmmm.. Kholo..

Randhir started feeding Sanyukta and withing seconds the plate was half empty. "Bas. How much you brought. Dekho ab yeh waste ho jaayega." She pouted

Randhir: Hello. I know how much you eat.

Sanyu: then why so much?

Randhir: Woh kehte hai na, if you eat from the same plate, pyar badtha hai..

Sanyukta blushed even more and Randhir started eating from the same plate. Suddenly Sanyukta took the spoon from his hand and fed him. Both of them shared a cute eye-lock until they heard a chuckle from the other side. They both moved their vision and saw Yoyo and Kruti standing there and giving them teasing looks.

Yoyo: Kya hua?

Kruti: Kuch nahi. Bas they were checking something. Haina?

SanDHir: Haan. Nahi. Wo...

Yoyo and kruti burst out laughing, while SanDHir were embarrassed. "Acha Koi na. Sab ke haal yahi hai.. Only you two were missing so we came in search of you two."

Kruti: Sanyu jao, kal haldi hai. So jao..

Yoyo: That does not mean you leave Randhir and go immediately.

Kruti hit yoyo in his chest and they both left from there. After they left, Randhir pulled Sanyukta and hugged her tightly. But she started crying. "Kya hua Basanti?"

Randhir: What happened darling?

Sanyu: I never thought of this.

Randhir: Of what?

Sanyu: I don't wanna stay away from you

Randhir: Who is asking you to?

Sanyu: Don't you have to go back to Swiss?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg,they r engaged! Yipeee
Aww love theses cute sandhir moments
Aeh le,abhi sab theek tha,yeh swiss baba beech mein tapak pade
I hope everything will be fine
Update soon
Love
Pari
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratulations for the new thread!!
Mind blowing update!!
All engaged... Wow!!
Fabulous job!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsm they are engaged waooo but going back to swiss ye kab hua...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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heya dear
yaaay they engaged
in sab ka face dekhne layak tha when elders told them
about their engagement arrangements..
he he he
the dance was so romantic
and loved the sandhir scenes
i agree with pari
abhi sab kuch theek chal raha tha
ab yeh swiss kahan se tapaka??
keep writing
update soon
thank you for pm
with lots of love
RIDDHIMA
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for the thread
Awesome update..loved it
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow sandhir got engaged
but now twist randhir go back to swiss
update ASAP
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsme update

They all r engaged
Really what a surprise
I luved it

Yoyo n kruti drama kre the
Bt now they all r engaged
They all were blushing n so happy

Sandhir n others dancing
They all r so lost in each other
Rd teasing sanyu .
Both eating together


Sanyu crying
Ab ye Swiss kaha se aa gya bich me
Plz don't separate them

Congo shongo for new thread
Prty tym
Cnt wait for next

Update soon

Luv u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Firstly thnx 4 pm
I lv ur story alot
N congo on new thread
D update ws superb the romance btwn all d couples was too gud

bt d last line brought anothr twist
W8ing fr d nxt update
Update soon n do pm me if it does nt troubles u alot

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