Arshi FF : Pyar Ka Intezaar : Thread 2 : Epilogue : Apr4th : Completed

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hesinahi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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nice update..chala chala bavundi..,,khushi costumes are too good...
so waist band imported from SBH is too good and khushi is looking so sexy with this waist band and the secong costume...
and the last scene in Arnav's bedroom is so romantic and hot...
even though u didnt expand the rituals but the way u described the presence of every body , nanis intros and the mandap made enough justice..we r very happy that u had put more concentration on Arshi..
sheetals teasings are too good...

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madhu1210

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Posted: 10 years ago

#402

Lovely update!

Like khushi's reply to sheetal. .he is all mine..

What a dialog with great responsibility cones great privilege.
.being ASR's wife certainly have tons of it..
The way you have expressed their feelings as every rituals is bringing them closer is superb. .

only 2 more updates 😭 ...

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Kiran

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: hesinahi
nice update..chala chala bavundi..,,khushi costumes are too good...
so waist band imported from SBH is too good and khushi is looking so sexy with this waist band and the secong costume...
and the last scene in Arnav's bedroom is so romantic and hot...
even though u didnt expand the rituals but the way u described the presence of every body , nanis intros and the mandap made enough justice..we r very happy that u had put more concentration on Arshi..
sheetals teasings are too good...

Siri I miss you so much. When will you be active again in IF yaar. It's been long time since we both talked for hours.

Hehehe I am glad you liked it. Kadaa... I too liked the dresses. That half saree too good. That waistband too good.. I could easily connect to Khushi with those. Mmm everyone knows about the rituals right .. Here what we need is how those rituals are bringing both of them more close shedding the tiny threads hanging in the middle of their relation. Thanks Siri for getting the ambiance. Sheethal is the reflection of me..😉

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Kiran

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: madhu1210
Lovely update!

Like khushi's reply to sheetal. .he is all mine..

What a dialog with great responsibility cones great privilege.
.being ASR's wife certainly have tons of it..
The way you have expressed their feelings as every rituals is bringing them closer is superb. .

only 2 more updates 😭 ...

Madhu .. Thank you dear. All these rituals are formed to make the new couple comfortable to each other. So that's what we should concentrate,.. Not the elaboration...

Yes dear 2 more updates .. Every story has to reach its end. By March 12th it will one year since I started PKI. Don't know how this year went.😛

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arshi_sarun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#405

Very nice update thanks for the pm

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hesinahi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#406

kirru ...vuru velli monday ne vacha..
just settling ..office lo kuda work pending undipoyindi interview valla...anduke konchem tight..but i m not missing to read pki and sbh...
yes.. i too missing the chats with u..2 maro we will chat...