Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed) - Page 47

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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry Di 4 commenting so much lately 😔
was a bit busy with studies 😒

the update was so mesmerizing Di 👏
I just loved it 😃

Bryan's part was very funny 🤣

oh so now dushy is a good prince 😊

vrushali n swarnali's convo was very heart touching ..

aww swarnali drinks her aray's milk that was very cute n funny

karn helped her with the jewelry 😉

wow 1st night at machine 😉 n swarnali busy with karn's kavach n karn was doing his job ☺️

n about the hair n the tattoo I can imagine karn's face 🤣

now about the last part
it was so hot Di ☺️ I was blushing badly while reading ☺️

can't wait 4 the next chapter Di update soon 😃

n thanks 4 the pm Di ⭐️
Edited by sadiasaba68 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sadiasaba68

Sorry Di 4 commenting so much lately 😔
was a bit busy with studies 😒

the update was so mesmerizing Di 👏
I just loved it 😃
Thank u Sadia 😊

Bryan's part was very funny 🤣
He was emotionally atyacharred by Swarna's Dad... poor him 😆 😆

oh so now dushy is a good prince 😊
A change from the usual character he was usually portrayed

vrushali n swarnali's convo was very heart touching ..
Yes... it was but they both were speaking the truth... this will be topsy-turvy ride for them

aww swarnali drinks her aray's milk that was very cute n funny
She was so nervousness... she forgot what to do with the milk 😆

karn helped her with the jewelry 😉
He was all full of mischief 😉 😆

wow 1st night at machine 😉 n swarnali busy with karn's kavach n karn was doing his job [:")]
See he was all naughty & when his wifey was behaving nerdy 😆

n about the hair n the tattoo I can imagine karn's face 🤣
He could not have imagined to discover such peculiar things from his new wife on the wedding night 😆

now about the last part
it was so hot Di [:")] I was blushing badly while reading [:")]
That was my plan... to blush u all while reading it 😉 😳 ☺️ 😆

can't wait 4 the next chapter Di update soon 😃
Will try to update it asap 😊
n thanks 4 the pm Di ⭐️



Thank u for the sweet comments Sadia 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi



<font color="#6633CC">Thank u for the sweet comments Sadia 😃</font>



Your Welcome Di 😃 .. Update soon ..can't wait for the next part ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally Swarna and Karn togather Vrushali has a big heart as her Arya.
Wonderful update Hemu di 🤗
The description of their first night
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aartii26

Finally Swarna and Karn togather Vrushali has a big heart as her Arya.
Wonderful update Hemu di 🤗
The description of their first night


Thank u Aarti 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago



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~ Thank You all for liking the previous chapter and for your sweet comments. The story has come has reached its mid-journey and will soon start its another phase. I thank you all for your support and your ideas. Hope you will like the rest of the story as well ~
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Posted: 10 years ago


nope its res for my supremely late comment

first of all i wud say no sorry to u cos this is the first pm i chose to read out of 42 pms i managed to shuffle ur name thru 40 pms

ok after lots of self appraisal shall i start wid the comment

chappy 13 was nice but chapter 14 was a fire man thumbs up

bryan chala tha swarna ko patane time machine ke bahane a small poem on bryan

well swarna s dad shib ask r u a gay

lmao

then his justifications of being straight were just... speechless

then on top of tht bryans doubtful ex

the way he said I DID NO HANKY PANKY WID UR DAUGHTER

i love that

well shib is proud of swarna after seeing her lab

abhi ke liye itna hee

Literally my dharma dushy

Well only one thing ch14 u r el james
Edited by angrani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
oyyye update 😡 u resed since soo long... Dnt force me to curse u nd remember u dont have that durvasa boon siggy too now😆
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Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

oyyye update 😡 u resed since soo long... Dnt force me to curse u nd remember u dont have that durvasa boon siggy too now😆



Yeah... I know I was planning for a 3 parts chapters thats why a teaser post...but I was too stressed out these days🤢
I will update the teaser tonight 😊

Edited by ...Hemangi - 10 years ago

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