Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed) - Page 21

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

awww!! heemuuu🤗what is it..what he is going to ask her...oh!! I just cannot wait for it..simply fantastic..the way Iimagined our karna in leather black coat and mukut..😆..really nice..and swarnali tries to make karna's kingdom healthy..that was sweet..

Originally posted by: sankadevimaha

Here karn doesnt want to leave hr.. nd der hr dad wants hr to return.. Ohhh noo.. wat s gng to happen nw??? Karn s falling nd falling in live wid Swarnali... nd dt s soo cute...😳😆 I am soo curious to knw wat ll happen wen Swarnali returns?? Wat ll karn do???

Omg!! Next update draupadi swayamvar.. I didnt even thnk abt t.. wat ll b d reaction f t frm Swarnali!!!😲

Originally posted by: 8520NK

Wow! Sorry I didn't comment earlier but I'll comment here about the last two parts!

Awesome Hema dear!

Wow, I was wondering what would Karna's reaction be like after that excited peck on his cheek and it was amazing!

Seriously, this update had a lot of science though! And you are connecting the little things of past and present in a brilliant way!

Wow, looking forward to the face-off!

Well, I have something in mind, do you mind if I pm you the idea just as a suggestion?😳

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

Awww... Thank You Dhiviii 🤗 🤗

What's he's going to ask her...hhmmm u think it dear 😉 😆

Karn in rubber coat with the mukut yeah... thanks to you for the conductor wala idea, otherwise I wont be able to give this new look to Karn 😆 😆

And yes Swarnali is trying to make Karn's kingdom healthy & wealthy make other kings & queens jealous 😉 🤪...thats why Karn was thinking of making her a minister...he will have less work to worry about 😆 😆

Thank U Dhivii for ur sweet sweet comments 😳

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady

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Okay I should not be unresing so fast . U took such a long time to update I should also be taking long time to unres but still could not resist . First if all Swarnali kissing Karn was 😳 and Karn feeling shy and blushing was just 👏 I loved it . And this part was awesome . Total true . I was laughing at this one 🤣

"W...What? I m not blushing. I m... yes I m angry with you. The way you act, all of a sudden...so...so strangely sometimes...it startles me...and ...and"

"Oh...you are a terrible liar"

"What do you mean...I m not lying."

"Yes, you are. Its clearly written in your face that you will be the coy bride' if you ever decide to get married in your wedding night," she said crossing her arms over her chest raising her one brow and a teasing grin in her face.

Karn's cheeks become more red after hearing Swarnali. With a pouting face he said, "Will you tell me what have got you now or otherwise I have no intention to get my leg pulled."

Love u di for keeping this part ❤️ .

Hehe...Isn't Karn blushing & all look cute 😳 😳. You will come to in future chapters why I inluded this part here 😉

"Officer Brookes, the in-charge of this case from now on. And all the clues and facts sum up against her including the statement from her senior colleague Dr. Greg."

"Dr. Greg...made the statement against Swarnali. Oh..why am I not surprised?"

😡 What the ... ! This idiot . Poor Swarnali and her father . They have to face so much and everyone thinks she is a traitor !
Dont worry, Swarnali's dad, her friends will not ever let taint her name. Moreover, I will make sure Dr. Greg ko uski karma ka phal zaroor mil jaye...u know how Dushy baby got his prize 😉 😆

"You speak Ancient Greek language," Swarnali spoke shocked.

"I have a lot of other qualities you are still not aware of," replied Karn in a teasing tone.

"Don't worry, I will dig those out soon," replied Swarnali.

I m waiting for u to find it out and Karn speaks Greek ! Wow
Yes...even Karn has lots of secrets...which are needed to be discovered 😉😆

Look Buddy, you got this kingdom of Anga from Duryodhan as a token of friendship and now its your responsibility to develop and nourish this kingdom to new heights so that no other rival kingdom cannot compete with its richness of culture, strength in military & economy. Make your kingdom self-sufficient, and prove those wrong who carries the notion that kingdom of Anga which resides the suta class is the most uncivilized kingdom in Aryavart. You have a great opportunity in hand to make Anga a dream kingdom for everyone. In your kingdom, no one will be denied to practice any skill or occupation of their choice because of their caste. You can understand this better than me. And the people of Anga are very fortunate to have a great, strong & far-sighted king like you to lead them."

God Swarnali's words are so good and totally correct . 👏Hats off to u Swarnali .
Yes & she will definitely see to it

"It worked...it worked," exclaimed Swarnali.

"Yes, it worked, its magical buddy. I never expected that I will get to see such rays of light at night," replied Karn in an excited tone.

Yes yes it worked 🥳 iss Baat pe party toh banti hai 😆😆
Yeah... 🥳

She suddenly felt warm hand above her left upper palm holding the railing. She turned towards Karn who was looking at her in an exciting way she never saw before.

"May I now ask you a question."

What question which question ? Di I hate u for leaving in this cliff hanging part . I would kill u for this . By the way if the question isn't a worth waiting one then Hemangi di 😡 Meh itne ched kardungi 😆😆

@Blue :OMG...buddy help meee 😆 😆 😆

~TBC~

If u don continue soon then ...

~SPOILER~

Karn-Draupadi Swayamvar Face-off 😳

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Well I can avoid this part, so the next chappy will be a bit emotional one