Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed) - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angrani

Lovely post hemangi eagerly awaiting for your next post thr title is quirky though which sort of electricity are they producing hope the a.c. mains current one or maybe the l o v e ... Current


Thank you so much dear 😊

I think this is the first time we are interacting. How should I call u dear ?
Electricity...yes Swarnali being a scientist...she cant stay away from discovering something new in Dwapar Yug 😉 😆...which type of electricity...AC/DC or love wala...hhmmm do check the next chappy for it 😉 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aartii26

Awesome update. Loved Bhanumati swayamvar part .. Please update soon. :)



Thank you Aarti 😊

Yes...I thought KaDu bromance will be cute with Dury blushing & Karna teasing 😉 😆
Yes... I will update the next chappy soon 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago






~Thank You all for your sweet & valuable comments~

Edited by ...Hemangi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hema very cool update dear
Electricity in Angadesh hmm woww ofcourse this FF is going very logical... Def Swara needs a backup source for carrying out her work!! My special thanks to Indra dev for doing the needful b4 monsoon:p
nd there were also some veryy cute moments of Karna nd Swara
Arya as a coy bride lol I giggled there hayee he is so shy when it cums to girls:p:*
also the state in Kaliyug is well described it is gonna worsen for sure!! Also Karna wants her to stay with him? What will she do??
Nxt part swayamvar faceoff its gonna be emotional!
All d bst:)
Edited by .Sanskruti - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi


Thank you so much dear 😊

I think this is the first time we are interacting. How should I call u dear ?
Electricity...yes Swarnali being a scientist...she cant stay away from discovering something new in Dwapar Yug 😉 😆...which type of electricity...AC/DC or love wala...hhmmm do check the next chappy for it 😉 😳


Yes indeed we are interacting for the first time I am ... well you can call me just J for the time being or something else you like and you know I was considering that you updated it but you just posted the title well you know very well how to generate curiosity don't you.

Lol I hope the current is the latter one ...
Make sure you update it on 28th ... or this angrani will turn into rage rani ... Please no more suspense



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Posted: 10 years ago

Sansii baby...please come out of your emo game...pleaseee 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angrani


Yes indeed we are interacting for the first time I am ... well you can call me just J for the time being or something else you like and you know I was considering that you updated it but you just posted the title well you know very well how to generate curiosity don't you.

Lol I hope the current is the latter one ...
Make sure you update it on 28th ... or this angrani will turn into rage rani ... Please no more suspense


Hi J. Sorry I saw this post quite late.
Anyways I have posted the chappy today. You can go thru & read which type of electricity I was referring too 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay I should not be unresing so fast . U took such a long time to update I should also be taking long time to unres but still could not resist . First if all Swarnali kissing Karn was 😳 and Karn feeling shy and blushing was just 👏 I loved it . And this part was awesome . Total true . I was laughing at this one 🤣

"W...What? I m not blushing. I m... yes I m angry with you. The way you act, all of a sudden...so...so strangely sometimes...it startles me...and ...and"

"Oh...you are a terrible liar"

"What do you mean...I m not lying."

"Yes, you are. Its clearly written in your face that you will be the coy bride' if you ever decide to get married in your wedding night," she said crossing her arms over her chest raising her one brow and a teasing grin in her face.

Karn's cheeks become more red after hearing Swarnali. With a pouting face he said, "Will you tell me what have got you now or otherwise I have no intention to get my leg pulled."


Love u di for keeping this part ❤️ .
"Officer Brookes, the in-charge of this case from now on. And all the clues and facts sum up against her including the statement from her senior colleague Dr. Greg."

"Dr. Greg...made the statement against Swarnali. Oh..why am I not surprised?"
😡 What the ... ! This idiot . Poor Swarnali and her father . They have to face so much and everyone thinks she is a traitor !

"You speak Ancient Greek language," Swarnali spoke shocked.

"I have a lot of other qualities you are still not aware of," replied Karn in a teasing tone.

"Don't worry, I will dig those out soon," replied Swarnali.


I m waiting for u to find it out and Karn speaks Greek ! Wow

Look Buddy, you got this kingdom of Anga from Duryodhan as a token of friendship and now its your responsibility to develop and nourish this kingdom to new heights so that no other rival kingdom cannot compete with its richness of culture, strength in military & economy. Make your kingdom self-sufficient, and prove those wrong who carries the notion that kingdom of Anga which resides the suta class is the most uncivilized kingdom in Aryavart. You have a great opportunity in hand to make Anga a dream kingdom for everyone. In your kingdom, no one will be denied to practice any skill or occupation of their choice because of their caste. You can understand this better than me. And the people of Anga are very fortunate to have a great, strong & far-sighted king like you to lead them."
God Swarnali's words are so good and totally correct . 👏Hats off to u Swarnali .

"It worked...it worked," exclaimed Swarnali.

"Yes, it worked, its magical buddy. I never expected that I will get to see such rays of light at night," replied Karn in an excited tone.

Yes yes it worked 🥳 iss Baat pe party toh banti hai 😆😆

She suddenly felt warm hand above her left upper palm holding the railing. She turned towards Karn who was looking at her in an exciting way she never saw before.

"May I now ask you a question."


What question which question ? Di I hate u for leaving in this cliff hanging part . I would kill u for this . By the way if the question isn't a worth waiting one then Hemangi di 😡 Meh itne ched kardungi 😆😆
~TBC~
If u don continue soon then ...


~SPOILER~
Karn-Draupadi Swayamvar Face-off 😳
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Edited by Texie-Shady - 10 years ago

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