Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #6OS 9(1~8)Link to#7 Pg1 (11/1)

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

awesome part...

OMG khushi totally in her sapno ki duniya...

aww the didn't meet,,,,,,,,

so khushi now in rm...

i hope this time they meet 2nd time...

update soon...

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surrazdan

@surrazdan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

so beautifull and innocent love story.. ur story takes me to fantasy world...

an imaginary world where evrything is possible

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Shyamala

@shyamidutt

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

You always write such beautiful heart warming stories :)

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Oh the love bug! One is completely tongue tied even if he made it to her front door and the other one is really bitten very badly. Barsaat mein humse mile tum sajan, tum se mile hum!

I really enjoyed reading the effects of Pehla pehla pyaar on both Arnav and Kushi. Brings back fond memories of when I fell in love. Come on, how many of us daydreamed and hallucinated just like her? The people around them think they are crazy but they are in love. He better come down for the pooja and see her or this is going to turn in a comedy of errors with him at her front door in Laxmi Nagar and her in Shantivan.

This one is bringing lots of good memories. Keep it up girls!

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cute_sarun

@cute_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#145

khushi is hallucinating about arnav 😆.. awesome updates

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Superb update
Khushi is imagining Arnav every where

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Lovely parts. Khushi is imagining arnav everywhere :-). Both are desperately missing each other. I am waiting when they see each other during the pooja :-)

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Lovely updates Smitaji...
Missing each others so much n Khushi ...ab kya boloo mai ?
Loveriya Jo hua hai.

Tu iss tarhaa se meri zindagi mein shaamil hai,
Jahaa bhi jaaoo yeh lagta he Teri mehfil hai. ..

Jo haal dil ka idhar ho rahaa he.. Woh haal dil ka udhar ho rahaa he...

Kya hoga jub dono roobaroo honge?
Hum waiting ji.
Take care of yourselves.

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Deepa

@deepa.e

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

Awesome both of you!!

I just love you both totally, so so so nice and simple you both of you are.

updates you killed it smitty!! i loved it totally totally!!! both are into each other to to much!! she is hallucinating and he is dreaming! wah wah wah kya jodi hao ye donon :):)

so thinking what will happen when they eventually meet?