SwaRon SS: You are my 'It'Boy!FINALE UP on Pg29]

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

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Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 10 years ago

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Reserved.
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Apologies for not commenting on the previous chapter. Though it was phenomenal.
Quite refreshing to see Sharon face the first rejection. But then Swayam isnt a very tough nut isnt he? :P
Already started cracking.
The update was amazing. Your writing has this flow to it which makes it really attractive.
I loved how you handled the Dazzler image of Sharon while doing the lovergirl part.
Good job Dude :D

Eager to read more :)
Cheers
Nishi :)

Edited by Nishi.Kss - 10 years ago

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Rachel

@.Vrushanholic.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

just read all the chapters togeter and its a beautiful story...
loved the concept of sharon in love with swayam ^_^
nicely written... the weakling dazzling fights and sharon;s public confession!
nicely written...
thanks for the pm..do update soon

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dvrushu

@dvrushu

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

loved this part too...😊⭐️
swayam was doutfull about sharon sudden confession and love
and sharon was hurt and on d werge of breakdown
i loved the tag "mr.messedup hair" 😳
do continue

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Samaira

@cherry_vrushan

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Lovely update... 😭 Feeling bad for Sharon... I loved the Neha and Swayam part a lot 😊 All n all a mind blowing update :-) Thank god u're being regular in updating this story :-* Update the next part soon (wid some romance 😳 ) and do PM me :-) Thanxxx for the PM

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@Incorrect

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

For me..

sorry iam late

this chapter was put up very nicely

new facet of sharon was shown

swayam being confused

thinking dat did he really misjudge sharon

his confusion was very well penned

sharon being broken

but still holding herself together was heart touching

the diva touch of sharon in the chapter

reminded that she is still the dazzler sharon raiprakash

so all in all a very well penned updated

ab jaldi update de

love

shini

Edited by shiningshannu - 10 years ago

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

well done dear.. swayam is thinking over sharon.. swayam neha bond is really nice..lovely poor sharon.. unable to argue.. swaron convo is nice.. thanks 4 d pm