SwaRon SS: You are my 'It'Boy!FINALE UP on Pg29] - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
nice update
n emotional to
sharon was thinking 2 much about what will hr think n all
n opps dazzler doesnt want her to be paired with a weakling swayam
bt she is ready to face dem coz of him
bt wat he did
he rejected her
Why???
hr really doesnt love her???
n if he loves her y he did dis???
so many questions
bt nly u have to answer
update it ASAP
n thanx fr d PM
Love
Mansi
PS-m fast to comment dis time
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
wow chitra...
its damm awesome..
i loved it...
so emotional..
i was expecting this only..
i really hope swayam will fall for her soon...
and confess too...

do continue soon
thanks for the pm

with love
keechu
Edited by keechu91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Interesting.
Loved how you displayed Sharon's nervousness and her friends's concern for her.
Felt bad for Sharon but I am sure Swayam has something in mind.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Ages, it's been ages to read or imagine a nervous Sharon and you helped me sooo much
You write beautifully and reading Sharon like this was pure laugh and bliss
The dazzlers questioned her so much poor Sharon wait but she shouted I should say poor Dazzlers xD
and Sharon didn't stop and declared her love in front of everyone once again
Why does Swayam says the same?Whats wrong?I wanna know ASAP in the next Chapter
by the way, when I say ASAP I say ASAP! You always postpone the confession or something
Great chapter and do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Wow!! Total contrarary to the show..swayam doesn't feel for her is very hard to believe, we are accustomed seeing Swayam head over heel in love with Sharon always 😉 I absolutely loved Sharon's turmoil, this is soething out of box, I am totaly loving it.
Poor Sharon, hope Swayam fell for her soon.
Thanks for pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
hello...
finally iam here..
read both the chapters
it was really a treat to read...
the weakling and dazzlers...
dazzlers rules... and most importantly sharon broke them all
it was nice wen sharon blurted out infront of every one dat she love swayam
unexpected yet too good
sharons confusion was amazingly written
swayam says no to sharon awww
i wanna know wats wrong
as i can smell something is surely wrong
so please update supersoon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
OMG. This is an amazing story.
Sharon in love and Swayam rejecting her.
No communication at all and then again Sharon in love. 😳
I'm so excited for the new chapter
Please do update soon.
Sorry for the delay in feedbacks. Busy with studies
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
This is something different..great update.. Let's see how d story proceeds
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
omg wat t hell gal u just swiped me of the floor
how cum i m reading tis now...
the introduction clearly communicates
the main idea n the concept of the story
it was engaging n i din realised wen chap 2 was over
i was panting for more 🤢
the structure in itself explains wat as
a writer u hav become
it captured my attention n much more than that ...
swayam the weakling n sharon the dazling
thr chemnistry was explosive from the tym
sharon came wit a poker face to wack the smile of liela's face
n to top it all 1000 degres uff sumone betta stay away
from her 😉
i m in luv wit tis sharon
she had no care in the world
she was claiming him in front of everybody ...
courage n love wat a combination 👏
n then the second best part of the chapter
her saying out loud in front of her frns was sumthing else
the dazzlings reaction was well written
but the best part was the talk
swayam rejecting her n his concern for her
wat a contrast to give
u justified swayam
n sharon wat can i say my heart went out to her
her first luv confession tat too like tis
i know u r cruel but itni ... god hav mercy on us
n tis tym dont let moon or star witness everything
becoz i will not leave yu at all 😆
do update tis one soon ...very soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
"Wassup Swayam?"
Swayam was sitting on his bed in some deep thoughtsabout Sharon as Neha, his bestie, slumped on the couch.
"Swayam? Swayam?" Neha waved her hands in front of his face breaking his reverie.
"Yea. . .Yeah. . .Hi Neha! How are you?" Swayam finally answered gathering himself.
"How am I? I thought we just met two hours ago Swayam" Neha said making a weird face.
"Ummm. . .I mean yeah. . .You here?"
Neha looked at her best friend and sighed.
"Swayam are you high?"
"What?"
"Its okay if you have gulped down some shots of vodka or tequila or a bottle of beer. . .I wont tell Uncle I promise" Neha said sympathetically. He looked at her clueless and rolled his eyes.
"Don't roll your eyes at me like that. . .It was your plan to watch a movie together at the weekend and that is why I am here but you have very graciously seemed to have forgotten everything" Neha pouted grumpily.
"Oh Yeah sorry I forgot!" Swayam apologized genuinely.
"You want something?" Tea or coffee?" Neha asked eyeing him suspiciously.
"I don't drink either of them Neha! Don't you know that?"
"I do . . . But Dr. Sheldon Cooper says whenever someone is upset offer them a hot beverage" Neha said fluttering her eyes.
Swayam looked at her and finally smiled in whole two days since his encounter with Sharon.
"Is it Sharon stressing you?"
"To be honest Yes."
"Did you talk to her?"
"I did"
"Well?"
"Well. . . I am not able to judge what is going on. . .Sharon Rai Prakash is a Dazzler. She gets what she wants. She is someone who does not take shit from anyone. She is rude, stubborn, mean, and arrogant and still every other guy in town is ready to die for her and one day she comes and announces in front of whole college that she loves me-Someone who doesn't even exist in her world."
"Did you tell her that you don't love. . ."
"Yes I did"
"Hmmm. . .So the chapter is closed! Why are you so tensed then?"
"Because from whatever I know about Sharon . . .She should have been mean, rude and blunt. . .Damn! She should have shouted on me but in real she was silent . . . She said nothing simply nothing. It was just not what I expected. . .she looked hurt." Swayam said everything in one breath.
"Swayam! It's okay! She probably didn't know how to react . . . You must be the first person in the whole world who has rejected her. It must have been a shock after all you did burst her bubble that she can get everything she wants. I am glad you rejected her . . . She doesn't deserve you." Neha said offering him a Coke.
As much as his mind nodded in agreement with Neha, a part of his heart frowned at her words discarding it totally. It just wasn't ready to accept that what he saw in her eyes other day in abandoned corridor after him rejecting her was not genuine. What he saw was something different advocating her words she said in canteen.
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"How dare you sit here?" Its Dazzling's chair. Don't you know that?" Sharon glared at Vishakha. Yes, she loved Swayam and adored him but then it applied to Swayam only and not his team. She was a dazzler and loathed all weaklings except for his Mr. Messed up Hairs. Yeah! She called him that in her imaginations. It was way too much unlike Sharon to call him like this in public even in a fight.
"Excuse Me. . .Is your name written over here? Or is it like you own this place? If you don't know this is a public property." Vishakha fought back.
"Nobody dares to talk like that to Sharon Raiprakash. . .Especially not a Weakling" Sharon gave her a disgusted look.
"Oops . . .I didn't know that! But then who cares? You fell for a Weakling at the end of the day and got rejected too . . . Must have hurt na?" Vishakha taunted her.
Sharon fell silent for a split second at this and Vicky took over.
"Who the hell is he who will reject Sharon??? Sharon is Class while that Swayam is nothing more than Crass . . . He better knows his deserved place! Bloody Weakling" Vicky barked.
Sharon couldn't listen to anything after that. Yes! Swayam Shekhawat has rejected her she cannot fight this back . . .She loved him crazily and he, well he feels nothing for her, absolutely nothing. Sharon gulped the bottle of emotions threatening to break through her eyes and turned to leave when she bumped into Swayam. They both stared in each other's eyes till a tear escaped Sharon's eyes and Swayam gaped seeing her like that. She broke the eye lock and ran out of the canteen.
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"Sharon?" Swayam entered the rehearsal hall.
"Ummm. . .Swayam? You here? You. . .You need anything?" Sharon said wiping her tears and looking everywhere but at him.
"I want to talk to you" Swayam said firmly.
"About what?" Sharon said.
"Is everything okay, Sharon?" Swayam said surprisingly concerned.
"Yes. . .And let's just talk professional Swayam. . .I don't think you want to talk about anything professional and I don't want to talk anything except for Upcoming Dance Fest." Sharon said walking out her way off the hall.
"Sharon. . .Sharon. . .Sharon wait" Swayam called out to her but she didn't stop.
Swayam pulled her by her arms and pinned her to the wall blocking her way with his hands on her either sides.
They both stared in each other's eyes. The pool of emotions which Sharon's eyes exhibited hit Swayam like a Tsunami.
"Please Swayam" Sharon whispered looking into his eyes pleading to let her go before her break down. He couldn't believe that Sharon Raiprakash who was looking so strong in her mean avatar before his friends some minutes back can be so vulnerable in front of him. Never ever in the period of him knowing her he has seen this soft side of her. He backed off quietly never leaving her eyes and Sharon retreated away from his scorching gaze.
"Have I been too judgmental about Sharon? Have I judged her wrong?" Swayam muttered to himself.
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Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 10 years ago

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