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Rachel

@.Vrushanholic.

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#91

awesome update!!
loved the library part!!
so interesting to read...
do update soon

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Dew..

@Dew..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

First of all apologies for not commenting on the previous chapters, blame my exams for that !!
& about this ss, the story i must say this is quite refreshing...
ekdam Hatke !!
one by one chapter is passing the story becomes more interesting!!!
ur mind & ur hand's Magic is shining troughout in this story,
i just not love the whole update but also the small small thing u put up,
every line every word has some impact ...
last but not the least i can say that im in Love with this ss
& i really wish it's a long story not a short one...
btw loved the tag
''Mr. Messed up Hair''

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Amy

@Amy21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Amazing:)
Finally swayam is thinking abt sharon :)
Do update soon

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Even I like 'A walk to remember'. A beautiful novel.
coming to the chapter. Story aage bad rahi hain. :D
Update soon.
Really nice story. Well done. 👍🏼

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#95

chitra...

wow..its awesome...

i loved ur this story very much...

do continue soonnn.

im waiting ti read more...

sorry for late and small cmt...

im busy sorry

with love

keechu

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No name

@Incorrect

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

heyya iam turned into a late latheef 😆😆

the chapter was intense in its contents

both the gangs r working together dats really seems gud

angry swayam and sharon finding him cute was a strange combo

though i liked it

sharon reaching for a romantic novel no wonder swayam vl b surprised

swayams thoughts and perception towards sharon changing bit by bit

was shown nycly

all in all a lovely chapter

do update soon

love

shini🤗

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#97

read all the chapters together nd its a beautiful story chitra😊

loved the concept of sharon in love with swayam.. it was damn interesting..

nicely written... the weakling dazzling fights and sharon's public confession

nd quite refreshing to see sharon face the 1st rejection

loved the tag "mr.messedup hair"

Loved the wallpaper thing Swayam getting more n more confused

nd library scene was so cute

loved laila sharon

waiting for next part.. update soon..

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Everybody was gathered at the party. Students from different colleges were in St.Louis to perform and to enjoy the biggest Dance Fest of the year.
"Bharat ?Are You there? Yeah don't let anyone enter without passes."
"Simmi???Sound check??? Okay!Good!"
"Vicky where is Vicky???"
"Relax Sharon! Everything is under control . . .Dont worry!" Swayam kept his hand on her shoulders and comforted a super hyper Sharon. Sharon always wanted everything perfect. . .One mistake and God can only save the person from her Fire Dragon Avatar.
Sharon smiled embarrassed and said "I just hope this evening becomes successful"
"It will. . . After all you have organized this" Swayam smiled.
" We . . .We have organized this. . .Together" Sharon replied meeting his eyes. Her last word barely audible.
Swayam stared in her eyes and they both got lost for a moment and Swayam's heart did a summersault flying in the air.
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"We. . .We. . .we are try. . .trying our. . .be. . .be. . .best. . .we. . .ass. . .ssure you that youuu. . .are prov. . .provided with the be. . .best facility from our coll. . .ege. . ." Amar stammered.
"Lolzzz. . .Isn't there anyone else with whom we can talk? I mean Next Dance Fest will be here with your speed of spee. .eee. . .ch" A guy mocked him.
"Excuse Me! Behave Yourself! You cannot insult anyone here. If you got a problem . . .Talk and sort it out! But if you are here to Insult your hosts here. . . You are messing with the wrong people" Sharon yelled at the guys of KR College who had been insulting and mocking Amar for his disability since quite a while.
"Woah! Attitude is good babe but not with us. . . If you are the host then we are also here to give one of the most awaited performance of the evening. . .So ask this stammering machine to allot us a separate private room and that too fast not at a speed of his one sentence" The other guy scoffed.
Sharon looked at Amar's hurtful face. He stood there lowering his eyes. She glared at the stupid guys.
"Separate rooms huh?? Get Out. . .Pack your bags and Leave Right now"
"Sharon. . .Wha. . .what???" Amar tried to intervene shocked and surprised by her decision but the draggers in her eyes shut him up.
"What happened Sharon?" Swayam asked coming up to them sensing some problem.
"One second Swayam. . ." Sharon said without glancing at him.
"And you Get out and enjoy booking some "Separate rooms" and when you are done with your holiday. . .Be ready to face the wounded reputation of your college. . .Because I will be sending a letter to KR college authorities telling them how Unprofessional their students behave. . .Out" Sharon yelled as they walked off in gritting their teeth.
Swayam was standing there utterly shocked and confused with the whole situation. He tried to say something but Sharon forwarded her hand silencing him and turned to Amar.
"And You. . . You know what . . .Learn to Get up and stand up for yourself because no one will respect you till you respect yourself. Because the way you are leading yourself you will become a Weakling for life. World is too cruel to respect your simplicity . . . No wonder you a punching bag" Sharon said and walked off in anger.
Swayam stood there analyzing her every word. He was shocked to know this Sharon. . . After the bookstore incident and reading that classic novel which left his eyes wet in the end. . .He knew Sharon was more than what she lets the world see. . .And she just proved him right again. Being a friend of Amar he hasn't ever said anything like this to Amar in a fear of hurting him but she so boldly put forward his truth of life in front of him.
"I always thought so wrong about Sharon. . . She stood up for me. . . a weakling. . . She is good at heart" Amar said looking at Swayam.
"We all have judged her wrong. . .She isn't good at heart Amar. . .She is beautiful" Swayam smiled.
The Whole Dance Fest ended beautifully with Weaklings and Dazzlings performing together for the very first time in life covering the KR college performance. And it blew minds off literally in excitement.
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Sharon was gathering her belongings in the rehearsal hall. . .Everybody was already off for their homes.
"Sharon???" Swayam said surprised.
"You here. . .You didn't go home?"
"No. . .Was just going. . ."
"Sharon?"
"Hmmm. . ." Sharon said still gathering her stuff.
"Can we talk?"
Sharon went still and looked at him.
"Yes. . .sure? What you want to talk about?"
"I don't know. . .have I hurt you?"
Sharon went surprised with the question.
"Why are you saying like this Swayam?"
"Say na Sharon? Have I hurt you? Whatever happened . . .Whatever I said to you in the abandoned corridor. . . Did it hurt you?"
Sharon choked remembering his rejection and her eyes went wet.
"No Swayam . . . You didn't" Sharon replied collecting herself in choked voice. She didn't dare to meet his eyes.
Swayam came up to her and held her chin to meet his eyes.
"Then why these wet eyes?" Swayam winced seeing her hurtful face.
"I can't control what I feel for you. . .I just can't and to be honest I can't live without this feeling in my heart. . . I cannot force you to feel the same for me when you don't. . . But then I cannot stop myself too."
"I never knew you like me so much"
"I don't like you Swayam. . .What I feel is much more. . . My love for you doesn't hurt me Swayam. . .My expectation that you will love me did hurt me then. . . But after your rejection I realized that Love is not about expecting. . .It's about giving. . .And it's okay if you don't love me. . .My love for you will be enough for me. . .At least I think so" Sharon stated calmly.
Swayam flinched realizing her love for him. It was so pure. . . He disgusted himself at that moment for judging this beautiful soul so wrong time and again. He collected himself and finally said
"Will you fulfill a wish of mine?" Swayam whispered wiping the tear from the corner of her eye.
"A wish???" Sharon looked at him in surprised.
"Yes. . .Only you can fulfill it" Swayam said smiling holding her hand.
"What is it?" Sharon said as a smile finally played on her lips.
"A dance. . .with me" Swayam said and Sharon smiled widely.
Swayam forwarded his hand and she took it gracefully . . .And they both danced forgetting everything. . . And by the end of the dance Sharon had her head on Swayam's shoulders with her eyes closed and Swayam was holding her close to his heart and Swayam realized his heart never felt so much contentment and pleasure. . .But he decided to care for the reason later. For the moment Sharon was in his arms matching him with every step letting all her feelings open and at surface for once. Swayam unknowingly kissed her hairs and pulled her more close to him.
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Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 10 years ago

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#99

AddShona_PMs for further notifications of this SS :)

Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 10 years ago

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#100

Reserved. :P
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I just read Chapter 5 and 6 together and i felt like crying. (in a good way)
I really like the way you are showing Swayam's realization of the real Sharon.
A walk to remember.? Sharon is a diehard romantic.
Loved the way Sharon stood up for Amar and yet at the same time scolded him for being so simple.

The rehearsal hall part won my heart totally.
The dialogues were beautiful. It pierced my heart to be honest. And that's something which doesn't happen often.
Beautiful Chitra. Simply amazing. :)

Keep Writing.

Cheers
Nishi.

Edited by Rhapsody. - 10 years ago

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