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smashingsim

@smashingsim

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

sounds interesting...

waiting for the update...

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ArshiAsya

@Alai123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Interesting concept

Continue soon!

Thanks for the pm😉

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

interesting.. i'm glad Khushi is going to do just that.. waiting..

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Sounds interesting Looking forward to reading more

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Interesting I want English translation 4 Hindi diaogues

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: chavvi16
HEHEHE
i look forward to this as well
but who is taking vengeance
and against whom

Arshi will take vengeance against Shyam, who else?😉

guess will find out sunday
well no i wont

Yup! You won't! Others will but you won't!😭

hmmm so it has the usual jhatke of kalpana huh

Yup! Filled it with twists!😃

well thats good news for me
cant wait to see what this brings us
so bring it on
and arnav time to think like ASR and not arnav
go khushi
and of course kalpana
anything that saves us from that contract marriage am fine with

Yup! No contract marriage but marriage will happen!😃

Thanks for commenting bestie!😃

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: crazyforsarun
RES!
Unres!

Woohoo! I'm 2nd place!

Lungi dance lungi dance lungi dance lungi dance...

😆 Congratulations! And nice dance!😆

OH Man! This looks interesting!
Can't wait for the story to begin!
I never actually had an idea like this!
Like Khushi actually stopping Arnie from filling her mang
Completely new take!
Looks fresh!
Continue this soon!
I would love to see how the story unfolds
Can't wait for the curvy twists and turns!

Even I am excited to write this story! And the concept is by Asmi! I just took her idea and spun it into a story! So you should compliment her!😃

But of course the twists I mentioned in the story will be mine! I cannot let any of my stories go without twist, you see! Those are my trademark!😳😉

Hope you enjoy the first chappy of this story!

Thanks for commenting!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: fffan123

Hey Chavvi, I am really expecting lots and lots of twists in this series. Whether we have contract marriage or not, that is yet to be seen ... 😉

Well said, Asmi! Well said!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: shiv456
nice concept

All thanks to awesome Asmi! She gave me the concept!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: fffan123
Hey Kalpana that was one wonderful intro. As I said to Chaavi, I am looking forward to a twisty, topsy, curvy ride via this series.
One request dear when you get time, as usual, character sketch i.e. Name, Photo and Age of character. Let the nature of the character be a Shroud of mystery.

Even I am excited to write it!

CS is postponed to next part in the story!😉