Betrayal - An Uncertain Future! Complete! Sequel Link on First Pg! - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshika_arshi



obviously to see this update after sooo longgg...really missing it...also i just love to read the story based on ipk track itself...there are many stories on it but a very few of them are innovative because in most of the ff/ss...khushi goes away/thrown out...then we come to the real her with a loads of possessive brothers...hope there will be something new here...plz continue soon...
If u get time, plz check my ff which i started almost 2 years ago but had to put on hold due to unavailability of net connection in my pc but now thought of starting it again from mid june after my final year exam...link given in my signature..


Ok! I have to confess, there is one possessive brother in the story, not kidding! Hope this does not deter you from reading my story! I assure you though that my story will be different from what you have read till now because I have read many stories here on this track but none of them focus on the emotional impact of Arshi's decisions on themselves. And I will focus on that. Which does not mean this story will be emotional. It will just be realistic. Which means the brother will be possessive but he will also be supportive and he will make sure that Arshi have a healthy relationship, not what they showed in the show. The brother will help in building up a relationship based on trust, give and take, communication and where both work to build a good relationship.

And about your story, i will read it but not now. Coz I have got seven stories ongoing with eighth in hiatus. And I want to finish 5 of them in next month, get the eighth one out of hiatus and end it in June. Got a lot of work to do. So I have banned myself from reading any stories except my own!😉 Hopefully by the time I start reading your story you would have started writing on it too and I will get regular updates!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was great update
pls continue soon
Thanks for pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
it's an unexpected twist

hope she will not betray by arnav

hope e for good
waiting for next update

thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: phillips_2909

it's an unexpected twist

hope she will not betray by arnav

hope e for good
waiting for next update

thanks for pm

No! Its not Arnav! That much I will promise!
Thanks for the review!
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Posted: 10 years ago
I think Khushi will b betray by Garima r Payal..

Update was Awesome...

Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic update
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ShiningHearts

I think Khushi will b betray by Garima r Payal..


Update was Awesome...

Continue soon...

Gasp! You almost guessed my plot!!!!😲😲😆
Thanks for commenting!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Twist pe twist... Trying to digest..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arnav surprised us by standing up for khushi . Hope his plans to trap Shyam will work out . Nani's decision is wise and right one , Anjali needs a reality check
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!! superb update dear...loved it

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