A SWARON FF : IT ALL STARTED WITH A SMILE part 27 updated pg:144 - Page 81

Originally posted by: --RENU--

again awesome update.. 👏

they are getting married soon.. ❤️

it was cute and finny update...😳

I loved whole update...

their fun , their cute antics is just awesome...👏

waiting for next update...😳

keep it up ani nd nabanita...👍🏼


Love Renu di..🤗 😳

Originally posted by: ndcdance

Tooo cute..over the silly yet sweet confessions of the gang...
Haha..i like Sharon's warning..
Tks for the pm..

Originally posted by: --Keechu--

Totally loved it...

so sweet part ... and i totally admire swaron here...

but i want to read more and more...so update fast ...

waiting for their marriage

update fast...

Originally posted by: --NupurSwaron--

Amazing update once agn...nw really words seems less to describe ur writng

Awww ...swaron r gettng married

Swayam teasng sharon by sayng gobar seeing her mehendi n hw sharon said ki dulhan ko lagani padti h mehendi lovng it hw dey r celebratng n enjoyng every ritual before dre wedding

N d funny part was wen all d boy playing cricket n swayam broke d glass n immediately left d bat 😛

Guys ek ques h pucho i think Ye jawani h deewani is ur fav movie in beyond commitment u made dem watch d movie n in dis u made dem play d game😆

Bt d whole idea of game was super fun n swaron moments wre best n last part wen sharon take d sip as she has cried many tyms for swayam n he sees her was awesome 😊

Update soon .😊

Originally posted by: SalmanShahidSm

Amazinggg...
This story is cute
swayam ne window pane toda... Dant baaki sabko padi 😆
mehendi=gobar 🤣
Game was nice :)

Thnxx for the pm
Update soon plz 😊

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Aww cute update... Sharon warned swayam 'agr mehandi dark nai hui toh dekh lena'...:P dat room part ws superb...:D D game ws nice... swaron moments were so gud... luvd it.. update soon thnx fr pm

Originally posted by: mythreyii

As said read did one too in a go
Beautiful off loved it swarons characterisation is nice. Starting 4m d interview in prologue every chapter had its own moments of joy and beauty
Taareys marriage and d moments der like Sharon's loneliness coming in front of swayum... Den taareys teases towards dem.. D nainital trip was nicely penned including swaron dance @ party..
Den d growing feelings and especially d airport part of shar friends and den d birthday part full of fun swaron moments heart @ right side... And swayum coning in terns with his feelings to swarons confrontation @ Sharon's place... Den d internet history part and crying in d bathroom all we're good.. And den d karvachauth and safari incident was lovely cricket team banalo was hilarious
At d end marriage all girls are not scared of ghosts... Behave like a normal girl
And d game part was nicely penned
On d whole a lovely and beautiful ff positivity in it makes me dis as my favor. One
Sorry lamba hogaya
Cheers
Mythreyi

Originally posted by: --Ecstasy--

Nice update.

Boys are always fun, they were playing cricket during mehendi ceremony.

Taarey are cute as always.

Swaron part was nice.

The last part, the game was interesting.

Loved the update.

-Shivani

Originally posted by: nature2

Loved the chapter..

Smooth, beautiful and SwaRonish😉