A SWARON FF : IT ALL STARTED WITH A SMILE part 27 updated pg:144

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NUPUR AGARWAL

@--NupurSwaron--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#781

Amazing update once agn...nw really words seems less to describe ur writng

Awww ...swaron r gettng married

Swayam teasng sharon by sayng gobar seeing her mehendi n hw sharon said ki dulhan ko lagani padti h mehendi lovng it hw dey r celebratng n enjoyng every ritual before dre wedding

N d funny part was wen all d boy playing cricket n swayam broke d glass n immediately left d bat 😛

Guys ek ques h pucho i think Ye jawani h deewani is ur fav movie in beyond commitment u made dem watch d movie n in dis u made dem play d game😆

Bt d whole idea of game was super fun n swaron moments wre best n last part wen sharon take d sip as she has cried many tyms for swayam n he sees her was awesome 😊

Update soon .😊

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SalmanShahidSm

@SalmanShahidSm

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#782

Amazinggg...
This story is cute
swayam ne window pane toda... Dant baaki sabko padi 😆
mehendi=gobar 🤣
Game was nice :)

Thnxx for the pm
Update soon plz 😊

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#783

aaawww such an adorable update... so cute...

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Nishtha

@Nicky-nish

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#784

Aww cute update... Sharon warned swayam 'agr mehandi dark nai hui toh dekh lena'...:P dat room part ws superb...:D D game ws nice... swaron moments were so gud... luvd it.. update soon thnx fr pm

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mythreyii

@mythreyii

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#785

As said read did one too in a go
Beautiful off loved it swarons characterisation is nice. Starting 4m d interview in prologue every chapter had its own moments of joy and beauty
Taareys marriage and d moments der like Sharon's loneliness coming in front of swayum... Den taareys teases towards dem.. D nainital trip was nicely penned including swaron dance @ party..
Den d growing feelings and especially d airport part of shar friends and den d birthday part full of fun swaron moments heart @ right side... And swayum coning in terns with his feelings to swarons confrontation @ Sharon's place... Den d internet history part and crying in d bathroom all we're good.. And den d karvachauth and safari incident was lovely cricket team banalo was hilarious
At d end marriage all girls are not scared of ghosts... Behave like a normal girl
And d game part was nicely penned
On d whole a lovely and beautiful ff positivity in it makes me dis as my favor. One
Sorry lamba hogaya
Cheers
Mythreyi