Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I)

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sanam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

awesome i am confuse plz try to update soon

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@GhalibIsDead

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Reading a fanfic after a long, long while. Found this on the first page and checked it because of the title. Not disappointed at all. I think as someone has posted, what works in this story is that you have kept it real and yet given it just a little filmy twist. Also, I like what you have done to Akash & Payal. Especially love that you have turned Payal into something like the show version of ASR 😛

Also liking that Dilli has a big part to play in the story. Look forward to reading more. Interest has truly been piqued.

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meera06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

I am loving this story..

I like how you are giving us small insights about their past..so Khushi and La are not in good terms ..wonder what happened..

I wonder why Khushi said that she does not recognize Arnav and Payal..did Arnav hurt her that bad that she refused to recognize him?

I love NK for his witty comments..

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Uzii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Very different story n interesting n mysterious too,now what happened in past.

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yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Very intriguing start...prologue caught my eye and could not stop reading the chapter too...lavanya and khushi were inseparable and what might have happened that they did not talk later...what happened between Arnav and Khushi...she did not even recognize them...so many questions...can't wait to read more...please accept my buddy request...can you please PM me future updates...thanks in advance...

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

So Arnav and Payal are together because it's convenient. Compromise i'd say, wonder if it's enough to spend your life on.

Payal and Arnav come across as two very different people who have agreed to build a life on the few similarities they share.

NK comes across as an honest and genuine guy.

Indifference kills. No wonder Arnav can't gget over the fact that Khushi ignored him. But i'm sure there's a lot more to it. Something must have happened between them.

And whatever happened with Khushi and Arnav some what involves Lavanya too?

Looking forward to more!

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meera30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Small special corner for romance that sparked off in the wonder years. And so I'm here!

Your writing is crisp and vivid and your story layered

This one is a winning combination. :):)

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1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

There really is a Tewari sweet house in Chandni Chowk!

Did you know that?

Vrry interesting and intriguing story.

What happened between Khushi, Lavanya and Arnav?

For something definitely did happen, I think!

Poor Arnav!

Why did Khushi refuse to recognise him?

Will be waiting for the next chapter.

A vety interesting read.

Thanks Kishmish and Disha for the link!

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inamajar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Loving this already.

Did something happen in their sports meet, Did Arnav do something which led to the fall out between them & La & Khushi as well as their keeping away from Arnav due to this incident. Looking forward to La & K's conversation, since La made her feel welcome on day one at the new School they need to talk it out.

Is Khushi working along side Aakash and she is in Town on a break. From the looks of it, she is a colleague of Aakash and also Jalebi Didi who takes care of T& sons when in town.

Loving the description on Chandni Chowk & Hauz khas Village.

Ah a different Payal. From the looks of it Arnav just tolerates Payal , so how have they survived all this time and how are they going to manage IF they get married..

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g17jas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

This took me back to my school days in a south Delhi school and you've nailed your description of the school and the kids that attend such high society schools! I realized I was a fool once I left the school and moved to the US mid way through high school and I'm glad I did. I absolutely love Delhi though and this story has brought back some great memories. Can't wait to read what happened between Arnav and Khushi. Loving it!

Edited by g17jas - 11 years ago