SANDHIR FF: MY EQUATION OF TRUST (DARK+MATURE)LINK TO THREAD 2!! - Page 53

Originally posted by: sudipto-69

hey!

sorry for very late comment

i know ma tumhari har part pa comment nahi karti

sorry for that but i haven't time mera exams chal raha hai

so muja hamasha time nahi milta har part read karnaka ya comment karnaka really sorry dear

but really every part was just mind blowing i just love this ff and your writing style you are really awesome writer... your every update teaching us something.

aweiii thankiee for the compliment and its ohkay dear i understand 😉😉

chalo stop my bak bak come to the update

its a mind blowing superb fab lovely lovely lovely

lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely

amazing fab outstanding part.

Rd was furious... he was dam angry because sanyu na ussa jo bhi bola(sanyu na ussa kya bolatha?? mana previous part abhi tak nahi para but pakka abhi read karungi)😉

lol koi ni padlo

he was very angry that's why he through everything in his room.

suddenly he got sanyu's diary... he felt something unknown connection with the dairy

at last he start read the diary... he felt guilty and very sad... he was very upset

he heard a sound... and he saw sanyu was attempting to suicide...

she was so much broken... and hurt... poor girl

Rd kissed her and clam her down... and she fallen asleep

Rd felt a relief... and again he stared reading the diary

he read about parth and he again felt sad and guilty

its very true dignity of a person is the most imp thing in this world

its my the personal opinion abt life

a girl or boy can't leave without his/her dignity...

you portrayed sandhir's emotion, pain, beautifully

really feeling bad for them poor souls...

thankiee dearu...

Rd resumed reading
He felt he was not alone
He has sum one with him

really beautifully writing outstanding

precap sound very very interesting and exciting

thankiee thankiee thankiee

keep it up. 👍🏼

love it. update asap.😊

and ya mana agasa jin jin part pa comment karna miss kardu uska liya very very sorry ha...😉

its ohkiee anushka

Love-Anushka.❤️

Originally posted by: dhruvi_parsh

Resss

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Unresss

Yeyyy moi first...moi first...

Yippiii...

congo dear 😆😆😆

Now coming to d update...

It was so awsome...

I loved it to d core...

Amazinggg...

The way u hv portrayed emotions...its too good...

I must say u r a gifted writer...

haww sacchi he bhaggu ye me kya sun rahi hu lol i know dear m just a starter...esa kuch nahi hai..😆😆😆

U hv beautifully penned d whole update...

Nd especially i loved sanyukta's emotions penned by u...

thankiee...😳😳

Nd now m eagrly waiting abt nxt update...

Update ASAP

moi in love wid this ff...

me too😆😆

So pls update soon...

Wid all love

Dhruvi

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Ress


Unress


Dhoka dhoka mere saath dhoka hua h
Mi 5 min lia kya gi meri first position cheen gi muse

koi ni rashi i know u r the topper dont cry plz...

Moi crying a bucket full 😭 😭
Moi second
Damn moi super upset 🤢

oh ho its ohliee dear dont cry😉😉😉

Bt meko cmmnt krna h so for few mins I will keep my sad mood aside n will happily cmmnt on update

lol..u too a nautanki like me 😆

The update yr kya kaho
It was perfect
It was my favourite chapter so far

I so luved it yr
Cnt tell u how much I luved it

Bt I m angry with u
I totally disagree with ur note at starting 😡
Really how can u say it boring
It was superb

oh actually i thought so thats why...

Don't u dare call it boring next tym
Ni toh moi apni ak47 nikal lungi 😆

lol phir me bhi bullet proof jacket nikal lungi😆😆😆

It was so beautifully penned it
The line jb tk hum kisi k humdard ni bnte tb tk dard hum se r hum dard se ni judta
Really true
N in sandhir situation it perfectly implies

Rd feeling the same pain dat sanyu suffered
He's getting attached with her pain

Rite now he only want to make her smile
N keep her happy
He's trying so hard to get her normal

Her miserable condition stabbing his heart
Whenever he saw her he felt a pain in his heart

She has becone lifeless
She's walking lyk a robot without any emtn n feeling

Rd cnt see her lyk this
He want to support her
Bt stuck with his past
He's scared dat she will hurt her lyk he got 2 years back before

Bt this tym he got his guards off
He supported her
He was concerned for her

He's trying so hard to make her believe dat she's pure
Bt sanyu she's not responding at all
And this is frustrating him more

He's giving her tym
Pura din nikal gya bt still she's the same

Rd ne kya ni kia books laya soup laya bt sanyu not responding

He cnt take this anymore he slapped her
This tym the intensity in his voice made her realize dat he's telling the truth
She broke in his arms
Both crying in each others arm
Sanyu letting out eveyrhing
Rd hugging her n soothing her
Both were crying n letting her pain out


Rd panicked when he saw sanyu was not there
He was worried for her
Bt he let out a sigh of relief when he saw her in kitchen

Precap intrstng
Excited for next
Updte soon


Goes back to cry mode 😭

hey bhaggu yeh toh mere jaisi nikli 😆😆😆

Luv u
Keep smiling

Originally posted by: shavi2311

wow...nice updte...

really loved it...

dis updte gave me relief...

i lik the way sanyu nd rd behaved...

their hig was just a strt of their relatnshp...

LETS SEE...😆😆😆

very well written...

THANKIEE.😳😳😳

Originally posted by: pari1995

amazing as always yaar

i soo loved it

precap is exciting,really wanna know abt sanyu's behaviour

lol lets see...😆😆😆

update soon

thanx for pm

love

pari

Originally posted by: angelicdeepti

Has been waiting for this update...

Nice one

Continue soon

Originally posted by: mrdodokk

Standing ovation for this part...seriously man you are too good...

haww sacchiii moi in shock thankiee dear...😳😳😳

emotional part...
Both crying and sleeping in each others embrace was super cute...
So finally she came to know that she is still virgin...
Thank god finally she believed him...
And sanyu's behavior?precap? Very excited...

suspense u know..😆😆😆

Loving this more and more...
Thnx for pm...
Love
Harshita

Originally posted by: Sagl

Lovely update 👏

Aww rd is feeling guilty now

I loved the way he bought books and soup for her 😳

ME TOO😳😳😳

Sanyu was so frightened

But koi ni apna rd hai na 😉

Aww they both slept in each others arms 😃

And next day he got so worried on not finding her

But wo to kitchen mai h 😆

Precap interesing 😊

Updatyy soony 😉

Pm ke lie shukriya 😃

AAPKA ABHINANADAN

Originally posted by: don girls

awesome update

they made up