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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dhruvi_parsh

Omggg

M hell excited abt nxt chappy...
Moi cant wait
Do update soon
Nd take care...i hope u r not badly injured
Thnks for pm
Love
Dhruvi


m fine dearu...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
thankiee dearu...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‰
patience...๐Ÿ˜†
keep smiling...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
take care...๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahi2012

Hey preety! my lovely sis!!
So sry 4 late rpl.

its ohkiee didu...๐Ÿ˜›


Really superb concept!!!
Wid a moral.
Loved ur wrk!!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

thankiee...๐Ÿ˜‰

K dis iz d post 4 part 1.
Omg!! Sanyu iz in dance bar or brothel!! I suppose!!! ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜’
Evryday she hs 2 fi8 4 her dignity!! ๐Ÿ˜’

Bt i loved sandy n pichku'sbonding.
Flashbck ws awesm. ๐Ÿ˜Š
Hope he vl save her frm dis hell.

lets see...๐Ÿ˜†

Love,
Mahi โค๏ธ


thankiee dearu...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‰
patience...๐Ÿ˜†
keep smiling...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
take care...๐Ÿ˜‰
love u tooo didu...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahi2012

Nw post 4 part 2.

Again amazing update. ๐Ÿ‘
That disgusting person!! ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
He tried 2 assault sanyu!!! ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

N evn that nazia sold her!!! ๐Ÿ˜ก
Her so called baaji!!! ๐Ÿ˜ก

Bt damn twist iz sandy's pichku is parth!!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
I tho8 pichku iz rd!!! ๐Ÿฅบ

Then wht abt our rannu!!! ๐Ÿ˜”
Chal koi nai at least parth saved her.

N wht's d precape!!! marriage!!! ๐Ÿฅบ
Let's see.

Waiting 4 d nxt update.
Love,
Mahi โค๏ธ

P.s tfs 4 social message.


thankiee dearu...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‰
lets see...๐Ÿ˜ฒ
patience...๐Ÿ˜†
keep smiling...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
take care...๐Ÿ˜‰
love u too...๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahi2012

Hey Awesm teaser yaar!!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Really xcited 4 nxt part.

Sarth's marriage iz done. ๐Ÿ˜•
Bt thnking really. ๐Ÿค“

She ws waiting 4 her hubby 2cm.
Bt she received a shock!!!
Wnt 2knw abt dat person.
Iz he rd!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

lets see...๐Ÿ˜†

Plz tell that rd iz nt negative character.
Plz release d mystery soon.
Evn wnt 2knw hw sanyu ws trapped in dat hell.

ohkiee but have some patience...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Plz update asap.
Waiting...

Love ya
Mahi โค๏ธ

P.s. tk cr of ur self my lil sis.

N ya 4 ur dis amazing ff



wow its awesome didu i loved it...โญ๏ธ


thankiee dearu...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‰
keep smiling...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
take care...๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago

hey guyz m up with the next part of

MY EQUATION OF TRUST
MY EQUATION OF TRUST (DARK + MATURE)

do tell how was it...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


PART:3


26th JANUARY


Precap: sanyu was being molested by a cheapster...pichku uff parth came ther to rescue her...and parth asked her to marry him...


He smiled and cupped her face and then said stopping her to chatter up more... "shhh... Sandy me tumhe sabka answer dunga but pehle tum muje ye batao...will u marry me... ????...'' and after listening to this she was shocked...she was confused and was somewhere happy also..but was not able to register things...she was numb whereas he was looking at her with his questioning eyes...and then he shooked her up while saying in his questioning voice... "sandy..."..and to this she came back to her senses ..Blinked her eyes to look up at the reality and said out of confusion and happiness... "yes I will marry you..." And to this he hugged her tightly and she also hugged him back... they hugged each other for sometime and after that he broked the hug and asked her recalling the old memories in his questioning yet sweet voice... "btw sandy kal 26th hai...26 january 2003...do saal ho gye hai uss hatse ko...btw tumne mujhe uss din bulaya kyu tha...????..." and to this her eyes became moist and she went back to her past...


**FLASHBACK**

26th January 2001...GUJRAT...AHEMDABAD...


It was 7:30 in the morning and our very own sanyukta was just moving to and fro on the terrace of their school building...was continue blabbering the things..."pichku... Vo me mme...ttu ...hum...saath ...I mean..i love you yaar...*pause* (she banged her palm on her head and then said making an angry frustrated face...out of irritation..)...uff sandy...tujhse toh itna bhi nahi ho sakta..ese bolegi tu use I love you.. bhaag jayega voh yahase..."Yeah you all are guessing it right she was preparing for proposing him..his pichku who was her teenage love..she was moving to and fro out of nervousness..was bitting her tongue on her mistakes... was blabbering things..scolding herself on her mistakes...just like a stupid lover...half hour passed like this... It was now 8 am...she heard a huge sound of applause and then went to the edge of the terrace to look up...and after looking at the scene her eyes twinkled up with proud and she stood up attention position while saluting her country ...yeah as it was the republic day so flag hosting was going on in the school...she stood up there looking at the march past going on in the ground and other functions...everyone was enjoying it...she was also enjoying by looking at the enjoying peoples...her eyes were glittering up with proud..proud to be an indian...next 40 minutes passed like that she was now looking up for his pichku in the ground and finally she got the glimpse of him...he was standing there with his friends enjoying the sweet poems by the sweet small kids...they were really very sweet...and after seeing him..she got very happy as well as nervous...but she composed herself and shouted his name loud...but maybe it wasn't audible to him...he didn't looked up..she shouted many times but nothing worked...just then an idea stroke up in her mind..and in the next moment a pebble hitted his head...and he looked up to see the source...and there she was smiling at him...showing other pebble from the terrace and signing him to come up...he made an irritated pout and moved towards the school building to reach the terrace... and by looking at him coming up she jumped up in joy...and looked at her watch...it was 8:45 now...she sighed a lil and said in relief... "bas do minute aur phir vo aajega..."and then she looked up at the sky to pray for everything to go on best and said in her sweet voice..."oh god...I trust you a lot...plz aaj sab kuch theek hi jaane dena..plz be with me god today I need you...bas vo aa jaye bas..." just then a plane crossed from there leaving the tri color smoke in sky and glitter in her eyes...she stood up at attention and said while saluting her country...trusting her country's citizens... "bharat mata ki ja..."but before she could complete her sentence she felt something and within a second fell down on the ground becuz of a strong vibration in the earth..along with that huge voice echoed in the city...everything became silent ...yeah for next two minutes everything became silent ...and after that a huge sound started coming up from the city...sound of cries...were audible in the whole city... ...she was confused...but within the next moment the building started shaking..vibrating loud...and it started falling down...and to this she shouted at her high for help..but nothing seemed to work up...the building was bending down...and with the gravity and motion she also slipped up to the open edge of the building...she was struggling to stood up but everything seemed to shaky...she was still not getting the things which were happening to her...she was now about to fall and the building was still bending up towards down...she was frightened...was not getting anything just then she caught up the ironic edge to get support..to hold herself..to not to fall up from building to save her life... just then the building stopped up at there...yes now it was not bending more down...it was struck at the point...but yeah was now tilt..tilted towards right..and she was hanging in the air...screaming up for help..for life...and after sometime she looked down...and the next thing which she witnessed was really drastic...she was hanging at a great height...everyone was running here and there in the city for life...many buildings ..many things were just destroyed..totally destroyed..many were lying on the ground...some were injured and some were died...all were shouting loud... the flag to which she was saluting an hour ago was now stained with blood...blood of many innocent peoples...the land was somewhere having breaks...and yeah within next 2 minutes within she figured up the thing it was EARTHQUAKE... the BHUJ EARTHQUAKE which stroke the Gujarat attacking lives of many at 8:46am on the 52th republic day of india on 26th January 2001 ...she was shocked was crying bitterly...by looking at the height...was hanging in the air..was screaming for help and life...just then something came up in her mind..yeah she finally got the thing in her mind about parth...she remembered that at last when she had seen him he was coming up in the building ...and then screamed loud...


**FLASHBACK ENDS**


She screamed loud in fear... "pichku..."..yeah she was now still at that point of her life...was still in her past...and after looking at this he cupped up her face... And said while jerking her a lil with concern... "sandy...sandy..." and to this she came back to her senses... Her eyes were moist now..and within the next moment she hugged him tight and said between her sobs... "I love you parth..*sob* .. I love you...*sob*..bas yahi kehne ke ..*sob*.. liye mene bulaya tha tumhe.. *sob* ..muje nahi pta tha ki yeh sab...*sob*..." and then he interrupted... "shhh..sandy its ohkay..ab sab theek ho gya hai..me aa gya hu na...now come on just get up...aaj hamari shadi bhi toh hai..dekhna iss 26th January ko sab theek ho jaayega..." And to this she wiped up her tears nad broke the hug and asked him with lil concern... "btw tum waha se nikle kaise aur tum yaha kese..."... he smiled to this and said while cuping her face in the sweetest voice... "uss din me building me jaane ke liye nikla toh tha par jaa nahi paya tha principal sir ne muje bula liya tha..aur yaha..yaha toh vo me ab ek naukri kar raha hu...business hai...u see m even paid nice for it...achha ab chalo aaj hamari shaadi hai..hume bohot saari chheze bhi karni hai..." and to this she smiled to this and went up with him in the medium sized house where he was residing... he introduced her to the other people who were living there too..there were 3 more boys and 2 girls...sanyukta got mixed up with them within no time becuz of her friendly nature...and the whole day passed up like this only in completing the rituals...shopping for the marriage...and all ...well it was a simple marriage where only 10 to 20 people were invited who were may be the co workers of parth...


Soon the night came...they were done with the other rasams like mehendi..haldi...and other things and now it was the turn of pheras ..the marriage and they stepped up for it...


Finally the rituals of the marriage got over and both of them smiled by looking at each other...and then parth asked her to have lil rest in his room to which she blushed hard and went for their room...


15 minutes passed like this ...She was waiting for him... her hands were just sweating in nervousness after all it was her first night with his hubby..his best friend the only one in the world know whom she trusted...she was sitting on the bed in the bridal style...and was getting very nervous along with the happiness...she was busy in recalling the past sweet memories of her life spent with him...was thanking her parents...the god and everyone who had supported her from the heaven...just then the click sound of the door alarmed her...a shiver went through her body...she looked at the door with a blushing glow on her face but the next thing which witnessed took away the whole glow from her face...her face became pale...she was frightened...and then immediately she stood up from the bed and said while stepping back by looking at the him...while stammering... "...ttum..ttum kaun ho...hqa aur yaha kya kar rahe ho...????...parth ...parth plz come up..dekho koi aa gya hai yaha pe..."... yes there was someone else in the room it was not parth...it was someone else who was latching the door with keys...with his back turned to her...and soon her turned to her... She was frightened by his look ... He was a man of about something like 20 to 21 age... with perfect body but was in miserable condition..he was having an alcohol bottle in his one hand and his other hand had a cut mark..blood stains were there...his hairs were totally ruffled...and the most importantly..his eyes were red...red with rage... red along with a lil moisture in them..yeah you can say I kind of tears in them...he started moving towards her and she was moving back out of fear...and then while moving he said with a devilish smirk on his face while drinking the liquor from the bottle... "kaun hu me...me RANDHIR..RANDHIR SINGH SHIKHAWAT...the RSS..."


Recap: sarth talk and sandhir encounter...


AUTH'S THOUGHT: life is totally unpredictable... what a person believes in and what happens next...on 26th January 2001 something like that only happened..everyone was busy in enjoying the republic day believing the day to be the bliss but as I said its totally unpredictable... the thing which came up took everything from the people of gujrat...the disaster BHUJ THE EARTHQUAKE...destroyed the life of many innocent..some died and some lost everything... we can take the example of sanyukta of my ff only...wat she was expecting..from where she belonged and where she ended up in the last..so just wanna say that live each and every moment of your life as its the last one..enjoy it...


for pm's buddy me...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Edited by preety..bhumi.s - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Res
Unres

sabse pehle bata duin ki main Bohot Chota comment dungi toh sorry in advance...
**looks up**
** looks down**

Arre Neeche hai.. Par koi nahi main first huin
I know Maine first huin fir bhi late huin...
But kuch nahi Hota der aaye durust aaye..
Yahi Hota hai na?? ๐Ÿคฃ

Pata nahi.. But main Rashi ko Ek cheez bolungi..
Yeppii main first aayi ๐Ÿคฃ
Hahaha.. Agli baar ache se
Agli baar aur dedication ke saath aana..

So Maine yeh ff Pehli baar pada hai..
Main firse yehi bolungi ki main humesha itni awesome
Cheeze Kyu miss karti huin??

Chalo koi nahi...!! The ff till now is speechless..!!
It is an awesome ff...!!
Can't tell.. In love with it

And about the update-
It was amazing
But sanyu...
Her life has ruined...!

Really loved the way you are describing sanyu's emotions..
Loved the whole flashback
It depicted that she used to be so happy

But sarth shaadi???
Rd ka chakar bhi aur hoga...
Precap is damn interesting ...!!
Waiting ..
Update soon
Thanks for the pm
Love Janavi
Edited by Paravi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ress

Unress

Shit moi second ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Glares janavi ๐Ÿ˜ก
Chalo koi ni next tym I will stalk with more dedication ๐Ÿ˜†

The updt was awsme
Poor sanyu
Really life is unpredictable
We cnt tell what will hppn in next second
We should enjoy n live every moment

The whole fb scene was so emtnl
Sanyu was so happy and another second her world came down crashing
N she end up in this evil wrld

Bt I wonder sarth ki shadhi hui h so what is rd doing in rum

From precap it seems everything will be cleared in next update

Do update soon wtng

Keep smiling
Edited by newmoon18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsm finally rd entery but marriage parth ke sath ye sab kya hai...cant wait for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg yr
I like the way you sum up ideas ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
I really did not know about that bhuj earthquake incident
Actually i was not born on 26 jan 2001 ..i was born on 2 april 2001 ๐Ÿ˜†
Aprox 1 month late ๐Ÿ˜†
But yr that incident was really scary
I loved the way you portrayed sanyuktas scene with that incident
Omg they are married ๐Ÿ˜”
Aaye but our hero has entered ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž
Now the stry will take a turn
So excited
Update soon !!
Tysm for pm ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update!!
it was really very emotional n tragic ๐Ÿ˜ญ
OMG the fb was really very tragic!!!
such natural calamities destroy everything!!!
sanyu had to struggle so much to survive
so this is the reason how she landed in that filthy place ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
so it is rd in dat room with sanyu ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
bt how n why??? ๐Ÿ˜•
n he is drunk ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
m really scared for sanyu now!!
n where the hell is dat parth!!!
wat did he do??
n wat kind of job is he doing exactly ๐Ÿ˜•
yaar there r so many questions!!!
plz update asap
m w8ing!!!๐Ÿ˜‰
thnx for pm


with love
shreya
Edited by sweetshre - 10 years ago

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