JUNOON- EK ZID- NOTE ON PG 5. REVAMPMENT IN PROGRESS.

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JUNOON- EK ZID

HAR INSAAN KA KOI JUNNON TOH HOTA HAI,

KISI KO SUCCESS SE, TOH KISI KO PAISE SE,

KISI KO PYAR SE TOH KISI KO POWER SE,

IS KAHANI ME PYAR HAI,

KURBANI HAI,

NAFRAT HAI,

MAUT HAI,

AUR JUNNON HAI.

(EVERY PERSON HAS AN OBSESSION,

SOME FOR SUCCESS, THEN SOME FOR MONEY,

SOME FOR LOVE, THEN SOME FOR POWER,

THIS STORY HAS LOVE,

SACRIFICE,

HATE,

DEATH,

AND OBSESSION)


INDEX

CHAPTER 1- PG 2

CHAPTER 2- PG 3

CHAPTER 3- PG 3

CHAPTER 4- PG 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow new story...
Awesome start...
Just loved it...
Do continue soon...
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Hey this is an amazing concept. All the four couples are ma favourite. Please continue soon. Very well written. The suspense built up was fantasw. Update soon
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Nice start
interesting
cont soon
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interesting start. waiting eagerly for the next update
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Chapter 1

A boy yawning loudly shifted to his right side. He jumps and hits his head hearing the alarm clock ring close to his ear. Rubbing his head, he glares at the tiny girl laughing at him seeing him rub his head as she stops the ringing of the alarm clock.

Bo: wait, watch what will I do to you now.

Gi:CHACHI

And the girl ran her arms flailing with the boy running behind her. they reach the kitchen where two ladies turn with a twinkle in their eyes used to this daily drama. The girl comes and hides behind them. the boy said "mama, don't hide her. today, she will have to face the consequences."

Mama: rolu, why are you troubling my poor pari?

Bo: poor. She? Mama, she put the alarm clock so near my ear that I jumped hearing it and hit my head.

Girl's mother: pari? Is he saying the truth?

The girl quietly nodded her head. She said "but mama, I did it for his benefit only. I thought that if he kept on sleeping like a kumbhakaran then we will be late for our picnic."

Bo: you called me a kumbhakaran. You, you are kumbhakaran. Yesterday, you were sleeping so deep that drool came out of your mouth.

Gi: did not.

Bo: did too. And I have the picture also to prove it. and I will show it in your school

Gi: no, you will not.

And the both were back in the catching game with she running behind him as the ladies laughed looking at their children's antics.

Lady1: what should we do with them sushma?

Lady2: nothing, they will sought it out among themselves. See, after half an hour they will be coming arm in arm helping each other and torturing us with their pranks.

Lady1: I always pray that their innocence will always be preserved.

Lady2: I always pray that god should protect them against all troubles.

And both the ladies went back to work, smiling when their children's noises come to them.

After 7 hrs,

Both of them are huddled together as they watch their whole world crumble. Pari is motionless just staring into the space while rolu is making sure that they don't find them. rolu said "pari, pari." Pari looks at him her eyes devoid of anything. He cups her face in his hands and said "I am going to see whether the coast is clear okay." Pari still does'nt say anything. Rolu comes out of their hiding place and checks whether the coast is clear. He walks a little ahead when he hears a sound which he now knows very well. He turns around to see a man grinning at him as he said "found you." A gunshot is heard seconds later.

HAPPY NEW YEAR.😊

Edited by abjeya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well written. Cant press the like button as my browser doesn't support. Superb. So Khushi wants Arnav to kill her. It was rhea and Arjun convo. Very thrilling. Update soon
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hey guys,
i know that you are all expecting the next update of this story but i have got a news. i am rewraping this story. somewhere i am not satisfied with the updates so i had to rethink this story. so, i am going to post the prologue first again. it will be posted by this week.so please comment and do tell me whether it is okay or not.
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Chapter 2

Daniel has been the security guard of R securities for the past 3 months in the official manner. In an unofficial capacity he is a killer. He likes to call himself as a contractor who contracts his best skill to the highest bidder. And his best skill is to assassinate. And he had the perfect murder planned in his mind for his latest target. ASR. The elusive and mysterious businessman who is known as midas of the business world. Whenever he takes over the ownership of a losing company, he is able to make the company which was having losses into the companies having the most profits. Daniel memorized the whole file on ASR and burned the file. The main office of his business was housed in the same building of R securities which is the subsidiary of his business. Daniel had memorized all the routines of the people surrounding ASR and was able to confirm his hunch that ASR stays back after the rest of the staff goes home.

Daniel waited for the next security guard to come and waved to a person his charming smile hiding his loathing for the security guard.

Ram: hey danny, how are you doing today? Any incidents?

Daniel hated to be called danny but he smiled imagining taking a thin rope and choking ram and relishing the sound of his last breath. Maybe he will come back to finish ram off and steal some information also.

Dan: no, nothing happened. Ready for a long night?

Ram waved the magazine and his flask which had his coffee and said "yep, I do. Hope you have a good sleep."

Daniel nodded his head his mind already in his plan on how to kill ASR. He waved to ram as the lift closed and then pressed the button for the 4th floor. Getting down he pressed the ground floor button so that ram will get the impression that he is going to the ground floor. Daniel then goes to the lift at the end of the gallery and taking out the card he swipes it. this card can get him access anywhere given to him courtesy of his employer. Putting the Bluetooth on his ear he dials his phone and after one ring his employer picks up the phone.

Em: all set

Dan: target will be acquired in 10 minutes.

Em: the jammer is working in the lift I see.

Dan: I told you that when I take a job I do it thoroughly.

Em: that was even said by the assassin before you. 2 days later he was found being the food of the crows.

Daniel wonders how many assasins have failed before him. He takes a deep breath and clears his mind and concentrates on his mission. He takes out his gun and puts the silencer on it. As the lift reaches the top floor he feels the wild rush of the adrenaline. The lift opens revealing no one on the floor. He steps on the floor and with a confidence born from experience he checks the loop he had put on the camera on that floor. He chokes his chuckle knowing that his employer won't be amused with his behavior. He can hear the quite breathing of his employer as if his employer is waiting with the anticipation of his favourite sound. His gunshot. He heads to the door and sees a light beneath it. Taking out his portable thermal reading machine he sees that the reading of a single person highlighted by a red and orange colour. He knocks on the door and hears a voice say "who's is there?" he plays the voice of his secretary which he had recorded "its me, ASR. Nisha Gangwal." The door opens slightly. And Daniel pushes it wide and shoots at that person. After firing two shots, he sees that the back of the chair is turned. He said on the phone "its done."

Em: I need visual confirmation.

He takes out his camera and walks towards the chair. Turning it he stares shocked at the two shots he made on the doll. Hearing the voice of the door, he turns and sees ram. The next second, a gunshot is heard and Daniel falls down a bullet on his forehead. Ram walks to the body as he hears the room slowly becoming filled. He picks the Bluetooth from daniel's ear and said "better luck next time sikander." And cuts the phone.

hope you like the update. please comment or hit the like button.

Edited by abjeya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update dear..
Lots of q's 😕 ...
Wow sik failed 👏 ...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm

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