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luvbug

@luvbug

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Posted: 10 years ago

#841

awesome update... wow loved the in detail description of the beautiful place... the convo btw arnav n his grandmother was awesome... experience does give u a little more confidence and patience 😊

wow the descriptions of the trail was perfect i could actually visualize the whole scene...oh n the first meet was P.E.R.F.E.C.T 👍🏼

Arnav start out as trying to help a fellow biker...but it turned out to be more than that...he is clearly interested and he even took the first step...even khushi is interested...but now that she knw who the guys is I doubt she will call...but i knw they r bound to cross paths again...wonder what will happen ...pls update soon... each chap is making the story more interesting and fun to read...

once again awesome chap...im going to go read it again 😊

Edited by luvbug - 10 years ago

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priya

@inlovewithtvk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#842

ahan arhi meet :-) that was quite surprising for me.i was thinking that they will not come face to face so soon.but u did splendid job sandy.their meeting was so great.they spoke to each other but their eyes spoke more.arnav gave his number but what about khushi she is gonna call or not chewing nails.dnt knw what decision she will take.
love the bond between grandmother nd grandson.she understand him so much.she is truely a smart lady ;-).waiting for their 2nd meet but i guess i will be not so soon dnt know yar

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Mayvs2013

@Mayvs2013

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Posted: 10 years ago

#843

so many things...wow let see how Kushi will react ...

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#844

oh read it again...but now this is going to be a long wk...how am i going to survive??? any plans for an early update?? pls pls pretty please 😳

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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#845

Amazing Chapter Sandy, I loved the description of landscape...Nilgiris..

and the first encounter was amazing :D

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sammymas

@sammymas

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#846

Beautiful story line...happy to be part of the ride

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oopppsss

@oopppsss

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#847

Thanks for the pm.Sandy dear you are not only an amasing writer but a gifted person who can know and express such profound emotions.I absolutely love the leangth of your updates.I really really appreciate it.Still by the end of every chapter I am yearning to read more.Arnav and Khushi meeting accidently is not new to us but this first meeting is so surreal.Dont know how they will meet again because I am sure Khushi is not going to make this call or will she??

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#848

Sandhya,

Many have said this before but I won't hesitate to repeat again, I absolutely love how you describe nature, it actually makes me feel I'm there at that moment and makes me yearn to be there some day for real. I spent few hours on wikipedia reading Nilgiri mountains, the western ghats, the eastern ghats..And feeling nostalgic :)

Loved Arnav and his Dadi's camaraderie. She is full of warmth and a source of strength for Arnav and the rest of the family I believe..Loved her words of wisdom, gained through actual life expereince that she shared with Arnav about the cycle, the ups and downs of market, the optimistic approach..

Allright now Arnav and Khushi's first meet (as adults); it was realistic and the progression natural..Khushi's apprehensions about a stranger approaching her while being injured, on a deserted trail, given her background/line of work are palpable and so are Arnav's reactions; He was calm & collected & behaved as a responsible adult; loved the whole scene..

Uh-oh - now she knows who he is; will she? won't she? But what would she say? as soon as she identifies herslef, her fears may come true??

This is a cliffhanger S, not fair!! 😉

Lovely update 🤗

Edited by kclovearshi - 10 years ago