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thumbi

@thumbi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#851

Sandhya,

I really loved your take on attraction in this chapter. We have all faced these situations in life, where we catch someone's eye and just go our separate ways at the end of the journey/time/togetherness. Khushi's thought on no need to act on the attraction was very real. :) And Arnav's willingness on taking a chance on the attraction was even more endearing. Loved it.

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#852

Fantastic chapter Sandhya...we trust you and will not ask for Anjali...we will go with the flow😊

Beautiful description of Nilgiris...one of my best friend stays there..after reading the description, I must visit her.😉

I loved the conversation between Nani and Arnav.

Must say your Khushi is stubborn and responsive girl...so, finally ARSHI met and what a meeting it was...during the bike accident. Loved the way Arnav gave space to Khushi. I think she remember something from the past after hearing his name.

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Vaish2003

@Vaish2003

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Posted: 10 years ago

#853

So happy to see u back again . WhT an amazing start to the story . I am already getting Impatient .

WhT i hv always loves abt ur stories is your passion for the nature . As a trecker I love reading all the details of the forests , the birds, the tress , the nature , sunrise , sunset .. Everything .you take us on the journey with ur words .. A very rare gift . Thank you ! Looking forward tome next update . This ride is going to be wonderful and adventurous .😊

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sincereme

@sincereme

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Posted: 10 years ago

#854

Amazing update. . I m loving this story..

Loved Arnav conversation with his dadi.. They share a very deep bond.. Arnav handles the tea business and loves mountain biking.. Interesting!!..

Arnav and Khushi met and what an interesting meeting.. Khushi's fear and apprehension was expected and with Arnav's get up, I can't blame her...😉 What's with long hair and beard??.. But on a serious note seeing Arnav in the woods, her past had come in front.. I thought she is going to have a panic attack But Khushi amazed me with her calm exterior and the way she handled herself..

Loved Arnav and Khushi convo and light flirting in between. . Arnav gave her his number but I don't think she will call him.. Let's see what will happen next..

Loved the update. . Continue soon.

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cute_sarun

@cute_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#855

This is getting more interesting now, wonderful update

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Monalisaa

@Monalisaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#856

Woow I like a cheesy Arnav and a serious Khushi go so well. What will Arnav do when he find out who she is.

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#857

Loved the update so cute loved the cheesy line and the wicked flirting but damn the shit will hit the fan when he finds out who she is awesome update thanks for the pm.

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Kiya

@Kiyaa-Rhapsody

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Posted: 10 years ago

#858

ah im so glad i discovered this today! I read almost all of DND, but when i went to finish it, i realized it was all gone :( boo, aw well. this tho - Flawless, flawless writing style, but im sure u you already know that! :) You should seriously contemplate becoming a professional author, if you haven't already! I caught up to all chapters in just 2 hours! ah I'm so excited for the next update, I'll be waiting!