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sarahjac

@sarahjac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1041

Chapter 2

First thing first, are you a biker yourself? A hobby you don't pursue but know everything there is to know about? If not, then dear lady, you and Mr. Google make an awesome pair...

About the meeting. I totally get where Khushi is coming from, a girl alone, physically hurt, top it all a crime reporter, would conduct herself exactly the way she did...It was funny that she tried to focus on his features as they might come in handy in case she needs to report a crime later...ha ha ...

The conversation had the right kind of wit, tact...I had a goofy grin right till the end.

Now that she knows who he is, would she make that call? A lot of inner battles to be won before that happens. And if she does make that call, I wouldn't want her to hide who she is...easy said than done.

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1042

Omg... That was a shock... And how can arnavs mom blame khushi for anjalis missing... They were small kids for God's sake. It was her responsibility to look out for her daughter. She is so bitter. And her high handed atitude is unbearable.. I feel sad for khushi... She must be feeling like hell.. and I guess arnavs demeanor also changed ..
She is lucky to have such strong individuals as her aunt n grAnny...I hope they help her... And there seems to be some vile person on loose..is it the same person who saw khushi on train?
Can't wait for next part...

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ipkkndkasr

@ipkkndkasr

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#1043

Nice update.
Waiting eagerly to read next update.
Now what will be arnavs reaction? 😊

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sarahjac

@sarahjac

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#1044

Chapter 3

Memories, they sneak in from deep recesses, no matter what..you can not really shut them out.

Which memories have the power to jolt your today? A very happy memory is successful in only putting a warm smile on your face but the sad ones.. they somehow have the power to shake you up entirely...its human tendency to delve into the gloom...am as clueless as Khushi.

Uma Rao reminds me of Naani from DND, she's just so cool, wiser because of her age and knows how to keep up with the ever changing times..she is awesomeness personified. And for Madhu, the dark blue mug says it all.

So yes Khushi did go through therapy sessions, this is what I wanted to know while reading chapter 1 and couldn't understand why Garima was so perturbed with Shashi's revelations.

Aarti Raizada, if you bleed you want the entire world to bleed, her bitterness is proof enough. I don't know if it's the right way to handle grief 'cos you can not counter pain by channelizing it into hatred.

With this meeting Khushi has gone back to being that 8 year old who needs to be held in a tight embrace, who just needs someone to tell her that it was not her fault.

PS: Can I just say, your epigraphs are simply spot on...I was just wondering how much time do you spend choosing a perfect one.

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headtotoe

@headtotoe

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#1045

Hey Sandhya... Loved the update !!

First part looking back into Khushi's childhood and her important relationships in life was endearing. The house you described with its resident were so real...

Second part came as a whiplash.. The impending face off and the reactions had me in jitters.. The moment Khushi had been avoiding so vehementally came upon her unannounced and that too involving a person who she had just started unknowingly dreaming about...

One moment I was smiling away to witness a flirtatious and never say die Arnav and the other moment it was shielded and covered by the dark aviators and I am left wondering what next???

Sorry for being late.. AD is acting like a bitch..

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Ishque

@Ishque

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#1046

You said you have given a long update but dear to tell you the truth your writing is never enough . You stopped it at the crucial stage. finally the truth came out and arnav knows the reason. Hope you get time to update the next chapter soon. Paati was a woman with the courage to fight and khushi needs a shoulder to share her grief.

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Aman3010

@Aman3010

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#1047

Just one word-WOW!!! What a story!!!! I am speechless...waiting for next update

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#1048

That was excellent update...

I feel sad for kushi, i understand Raizadas lost their child but cant they see Kushi also suffering same like theirs..

but i am wondering how can any one dont know about Arnav as a raizada? I am eager to know about Arnav's reaction and the next part...

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#1049

Sandhya read through all the chapters today. Had been holding myself back fromstarting to read the story as I knew I would want to resd all of it togetger... but in the end couldn't resist anymore.

This story is better than I had expected to be! You have surpassed yourself in it. The ease with which you have woven Arnav and Khushi's seperate worlds is just amazing. The story is so good that I didn't mind not having too many Arshi moments although I won't lie when I say I am anticipating a lot of it in the upcoming chapters. 😉

Looking forward to more...