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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#1031

Superb update. Beautifully written. Loved reading it. It was so engrossing. Felt bad for both Arnav and khushi... Arnav for unknowingly trying to woo khushi and khushi for being subjected to the guilt of ruining raizada family's happiness by Arnav's mother. Wonder how will Arnav feel now about khushi. Looking forward to the next update and a more private meeting between Arnav and Khushi. 😳

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vibha92

@vibha92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1032

superb part!!...

loved uma n madhu!!...strong n amazing ladies!!...

khushi has such a beautiful family!!...

loved d mandir scene!!...arnav was trying to please khushi, loved his talks wid madhu n thn kya ho gya!!!...:(

god!!...cant even blame d mother!!...she has lost her child afterall!!...bt firbhi!!...she cant blame khushi for all tht n tht too so fircely!!!...poor khushi!!...:(

arnav's reaction shocked me!!...he didnt even spare a glance to her!!!...

cant wait for d nxt part...

thnx for d pm dear..:)

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1033

omg the bitter truth is finally out in front of arnav and im cringing just thinking wat will be his reactions now. but i just hope that he wil understand that khushi was a victim as anjali was. its just that khushi is still suffering from that incident. when asll this happened she was just a mere child. she cant be judged on something that she was not to be blamed for and i know arti has gone through so much pain but still lashing like that on khushi was not right.

i loved khushi bond with her grandmother and aunt. they seemed more like friends than family. awesome update sandhya. n i can understand ur tight schedule. enjoy ur time with the family

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#1034

Please Arnav use your brain...it is not Khushi's fault...I love Khushi's grandmother and Aunt...loved their conversation. The moment Arnav's came into the picture everything changed.

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1035

And the penny drops. Way to go, Mrs Raizada. Khushi had nothing to do with Anjali's disappearance. Why blame a child? And why would you blame her family? HER town? Please.

Khushi's grandma is such a wonderful person. She reminds me of mine. And her aunt is seriously cool. I guess she needs these two to support her, what with the shrew trying to make her life hell now.

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Deepthi

@-prodigy-

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#1036

That's absolutely ridiculous to blame khushi, she was just a kid like anjali was...I get it aarti raizada had gone through a lot if greif and these words are out of the grief more than anger maybe, but to blame khushi as she was the sole reason of the disaster is totally out of line ..

I'm so eager to know arnav feelings towards this..what is his feeling abt everything happened ..did he blame khushi for that just like everyone else years ago? And now what will he do ? I'm curious :D

And yeah I thankfully don't need an index as my mother tongue is Telugu and I studied in chennai so I know Tamil ..bring it on :D

P.s thank you for giving a long update :)

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sarahjac

@sarahjac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1037

Yeah...am verrry late and to my surprise, we are already on to the second thread...way to go girl!

I equate childhood with purity...most natural untainted form of a being, its devoid of prejudices. The sublime carefree joys and ahh that precious friendship, it all came across so beautifully in your prologue. And to have it end where it did...hmmm...leaving a child with a burden of guilt, a sense of loss is not what I expected...You just know how to turn it around don't you?

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#1038

So now he knows who she is

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sarahjac

@sarahjac

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#1039

Chapter 1

And we witness the plight of a child all grown up still living with burden of loss, the panic attack so well described, wonder how her growing up years were like..

I can't fathom the fact that Garima was shocked to hear the reason why her daughter resigns each time...As a parent you watch them grow, you even understand those unsaid words. I am sure both Shashi and Garima must have seen Khushi facing these demons, she has been having panic attacks, so why does it come as a shock to her if Khushi sees Anjali in every victim or wondering about her reasons for choosing a career in crime reporting against much more lucrative options.

I am writing these comments as I read a chapter, I may end up sounding like a total fool when I reach the last published update.

About Khushi...3 jobs in 5 yrs...nothing new...people do it a lot these days but they have reasons which lead to monetary growth more often than not..but Khushi, it's her frustration that compels her to quit. I guess she is trying her hard to mask everything, but soon reaches a saturation point... A dead end, which is when she opts an easy way out. So after living the same cycle thrice she has finally understood that she need to face her past, but can she really achieve something revisiting places, people & memories two decades later? Only time (and Sandhya) can tell 😛

The man reading Khushi, is he Arnav? Whoever he is experienced enough to deduce a lot by simply observing body language, a shrink perhaps?