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Pdrover

@Pdrover

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1021

Awesome update
Khushi and her family equally affected by Anjali's disapearancr as Anjali's family. Loved khushi's grandma
What will be Arnav's reactions, he was attracted to the girl who was with his sister when she disappeared

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UV_Arshi

@UV_Arshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1022

Firstly, thank you for giving us such a nice long update!! 😃🤗

Th first part showed the significant role of family in Khushi's life. She has caring parents and also such a loving aunt and grandmother. They have done their best to help her fight the demons of her past and of her mind. It must be so painful for them to see her carry that burden in her heart, to this day. It was so apparent when her grandmother asked her when she could have her old granddaughter back. One incident has defined her, affected her psyche to such an extent that she has lost her essence or has suppressed it in some deep recesses of her mind...

The only good thing here could be that she has finally decide to face it, deal with it, at least.

The second part started off rather well...

Khushi in a saree...nice! [Not for her, it seems 😆] Arnav's appearance was quite a surprise and I liked that he hadn't taken her lack of initiative to heart. Still his charming, flirtatious self! His interaction with Madhu was cute. Oh, did I mention I love this 'Madhu'! Such a strong, determined and independent woman.

I understand Khushi's reticence...to her, Arnav is the key which may open the 'Pandora's box'. And especially after the whole scene that Aarti Raizada created...it seems that Khushi was not entirely wrong. Although, I understand that Aarti is hurt...this kind of behaviour is rather uncalled for, especially that comment about her name...She has no clue, that the incident has damaged Khushi, too. But, I don't want to judge her...I shall wait to know more.

Arnav's reaction...it must have been a blow, for sure. As of now, we don't know what picture he has in his mind about the whole incident. He didn't even look at Khushi...that doesn't seem good 😕 But, again, shall wait and watch...

You left us hanging, Sandhya...!! Can't wait to read what happens next...

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Raadhiya

@Raadhiyaaa

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#1023

wat will be arnav rreaction
omg di pls update next part soon

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Milsha

@Dandelion.

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#1024

That was soo intense.. i was like no no no! Not yet not yet!!! I wanted to see more of their nok jhok. I wanted to see him trying to woo her. But that part where he puts on his sunglasses.. god.. I could picture that scene in my mind.. he is gonna hate her just like his mother does :'( Oh my poor Khushi..

She has already suffered and still is suffering so much.. I dont wanna see her hurting more.. Judging by the details you provided about arnav I have a feeling he will make Khushi's life a living hell oh god!

Coming to the good part.. I love love love khushi's aunt and granny <3 they are gems.

A fantabulous update yet again ;) Thanks for the pm! :-)

A bit sad hearing about irregular updates.. but I understand.. Enjoy your holidays! X

Love,

Milsha xx

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@addicted25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1025

👏 👏 👏

Well Sandhya, first my apologise, I seem to have missed chapter 2, read all of 3 and thought back, what fall?. None the less here I am.
So they finally meet, interesting that she fell, but he was there for her when she did, I suppose that counts too. She is very aware of people around her, what happened all those years ago, that left her this way? I take it it will be a few more chapters to find that out. But his curls and his beard must have been overlooked by his smile and his care for her. Just as she realises she likes someone, she realises he is her Highness's brother. 😔
As for chapter 3 I loved the chat with the grandmother, to be so close to your grandparents must be very special, expecially the way they communicate. Her aversion to wearing a sari is sweet,I totally understand! But the meeting was so sweet until his mother arrived. Oh dear is he going to spend the rest of the story fighting his feelings for her, or actually try to find out what happened to his sister, by what must be the only eye witness. I hope so. I can understand Artis disdain for her, but would her family have held Anjali responsible if domething had happened yo knushi? Beeinv an only child woukd have been heartbreaking even more so.

Thank you for pming me with the updates. I promise I won't skip again 😕

Edited by addicted25 - 10 years ago

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janu

@Janu75

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#1026

Khushi and her atha and pati ...they are awesome ...children share a lot with their grand parents as they have more patience and time than their own parents...I always envy those bondings...

Coming to holding grudge foe so long against a kid doesn't speak good of Arnav's mom even though she had to undergo a heart break at the loss their daughter...

Now Arnav has obvious intentions to show a liking to khushi ...now that he knows about khushi how would he react to all of this...is he going to fight against the odds..

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#1027

OMG!!! what the

nice update. no one knows what khushi is going through poor girl

thanks for pm

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redpetals123

@redpetals123

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#1028

Iam speechless dear. What a beautiful story read all the parts till now, you have a unique way of writing I was and is a great fan fan of DND and was fortunate enough to read it before you decided to remove it.

Hence I thought of reading hands on time since I love your way of writing.

Prologue was just like a faily tale which beautifully described an eternal friendship between two small girls, I just loved the prologue.

The mystery is awesome and iam curious to know what happened to Anjali.

Arnav khushi meeting was awesome, but when he will know who she is will their equation change which has not even started.

Khushis pain has been described beautifull how she is living her life in regret and is on a quest to find her answers regarding Anjali.

This story is going to be emotional as well as mysterious i guess eager to read it ahead.

Please pm me when you update.

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joviha

@Joarshi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#1029

god i loved the updte...
u have potrayed each character very well...and here started the story...now how arnav is gng to react to khushi...iam really excited to read more...
thks for the pm dr...
waiting for nxt updte...