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Posted: 11 years ago
Its awsome dr ...
lovely update nd sad also
Do continue
update soon
Nd sorry for let reply but my final exam nd than external exam is just over saturday so i hv no time to read it
Nd thank you for p.m me dr
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NRGANATRA

Its awsome dr ...
lovely update nd sad also
Do continue
update soon
Nd sorry for let reply but my final exam nd than external exam is just over saturday so i hv no time to read it
Nd thank you for p.m me dr


Thank u so much dear
dats okk
vl try 2 update asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey..! I really loved d story..! Great work
Waiting for the next update..!! 😊 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dharanisethuram

Hey..! I really loved d story..! Great work
Waiting for the next update..!! 😊 👏


Thank u
vl update asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
why aren't u updating??? You said dat its already written..so y so late..!! That's nt fair..plzzz update😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part - 15


Sanyu went to prepare food and on the
other side .. vardhan & randhir were playing with ehsas ...

S- chalo sab log khana kha lo ...

E- yea mumma coming ...

S- jaldi se aao .. aaj apka fav khana bana h beta ..

E- oh wow ... rajma rice bne h??

R- arey wah mere bete ka bhi fav rice h ...

E- papa apka bhi fav rice h??

R- haan .. par bachpan se nhi .. jabse tumhari mom k hath ke bne huye rajma
rice khaye h tabse ..

E- papa .. mumma ne apko 1st tym rajma rice kab bana kar khilaye the...

V-haha .. village mein right?? ... he started laughing

R- ji sir

E- village mein kaise papa?? Aur appu ap hase q??

R- lambi story h beta .. phir kabhi sunayunga

E- okk ...

S- chalo beta .. khila deti hoon mein apko apne hathon se .. phir mujhe bhi khana h ..

E- okk mumma ...

Sanyu started feeding him with her hands ...

E- mumma .. papa ko bhi khilao na .. apne hathon se ..

Randhir coughed lightly ... sanyu gave him water

S- ye kya bol rhe ho beta .. ap chote ho isliye apko khila rhi hoon .. aur ye kita bada hogya h .. khud kha sakta
h ..

R- haan beta .. apki kha lo jaldi se .. phir
mumma ko bhi khana h na...

E- papa apko kitni baar bolun k ye sirf meri mumma h .. ap inhein mumma mat bulao ...

R- okk beta sorry .. apki mumma ko bhi to khana h ..

E- no papa .. mumma apko khilayengi aur ap mumma ko khilao

S- no beta ..

E- okk phir mein bhi nhi khayunga ... he said folding his arms on his chest and closing his mouth

R- plz beta

E- no means no .. huhh ..

S- maan jao beta

E- never mumma ..

R- okk fyn ...
he said making a sad face ... a fake one .. but from inside he was happy

S- okk khilati hoon ...

Sanyu took some rice in her hand and started feeding him ... he opened his mouth ... when sanyu was feeding
him,he started licking her fingers .. she was irritated due to his action did by him ...

S(in mind)- koi baat nhi bachu .. abhi sabak sikhati hoon tumhein

E- papa .. ab ap bhi to khilao mumma ko

S(in mind)- ab ayega maza .. mere
sath panga lerhe the na .. ab batati hoon

R- haan haan beta ...but if ur mumma is okk with it

S- yea m ok with it ... she faked a smile ..

Randhir took rice in his hand and put in sanyu's mouth .. sanyu bited his fingers with all her force .. but he didn't shouted ... she increased the force .. now she was feeling taste of blood ... she immidiately left his fingers .. randhir closed his eyes .. as he was feeling the pain ... vardhan understood this ... randhir got up from his chair and started going towards room ..

E- papa kaha jarhe ho

R- wo beta mein washroom jakar araha hoon ...

he said smilling,but his eyes were moist and his voice was heavy .. Vardhan too followed him to his room ...

R- sir ap q agye ... ap khana khayie na

V- dekho randhir ye baat tumhein bhi pata h k is sab mein sanyu ki koi galati nhi h

R(crying)- i know sir galati meri hi h .. mujhe apne pyar p trust karna chahiye tha .. aur sanyu ko itna torture nhi karna chahiye tha .. par sir us tym p mujhe ye nhi pata tha k chezein itni complicated ho jayengi .. agr pata hota to directly sanyu se puchta

V- dekho randhir abhi bhi tum apni life ko improve kar sakte ho ... aur ye kaise karna h ... tumhein khud sochna pdega ...

Vardhan left the room ... sanyu entered
the room with a first aid box and started aplying bandage on his wounds ...

R- agar itna hi khayal tha to pehle hi q di ye chot

S- thek ho jayenga ..kam se kam tumhari tarah aise wounds to nhi diye jinpe bandage bhi nhi kia ja sakta .. anyways .. ye hogya h ..

She left the room ..

R- abhi bhi kitna khayal h ise mera .. she still cares for me ... he smilled

After some time sanyu enterd with ehsas ..

S- chalo beta ap so jao .. mein thodi der mein aa jati hoon .. she smilled ..

E- no mumma .. ap mere sath ho soyogi

S- par beta ..

E- mumma ap meri baat nhi manoge??... He made a sad face

S- okk .. fine ..Randhir was also laying on bed .. ehsas laid on bed and so did sanyu ... ehsas was laying in between them .. he holded their hands in a way that their hands were touching each other's
hands ...

S- beta ab ap sojao na ..

E- haan mumma so jata hoon .. par ek story sunni h ..

R- beta aj apko aur mumma ki ... oops sorry apki mumma ko story sunayun mein??

E- sure papa .. i know apki story best hogi

R- to story kuch aise h .. ek ladki thi sweet si bilkul princess,aur ek ladka tha gusse wala ... wo ladka pura din uske sath ladai karta tha ... itni zyada ladai ki uske sath ladna uski habbit aur hobby dono ban
gyi ...

E- par papa wo us ladki k sath ladai q
karta tha?? Wo ladki to princess thi na ..

S- wo isliye beta q k wo ladki us sadu ladke se zyada achi thi ... she said with a prouded smile on her face

R- haan beta apki mumma theek bol rhi
h .. wo ladki sabse zyada achi thi ... har cheez mein perfect thi .. aur phir wo ek dusre se itna ladne lag gye K ek dusre k sath ladai kiye bina unka man nhi lagta tha .. phir 2 saal ladai karne k baad unhein pyar hogya .. wo dono perfect
the ek dusre k liye ... ek k bina dusra
incomplete tha ... phir unki shadi hogyi .. aur shadi k baad wo ladka bht bura ban gaya .. ladki se daily ladai karta .. aur phir ek din wo ladki us ladke ko chod kar chali gyi .. ladka bht roya ... bas chahta tha k wo ladki wapis aa jaye ... phir kuch salon baad wo dono mile to us ladki ka ek beta tha .. dono ke pyar ki nishani...

He looked at his face ... he was already
slept ... then he looked at sanyu's face .. she was crying silently ... sanyu looked at him... for a second their eyes meet ... sanyu got up from bed and went to terece .. randhir went behindbhim.. she was crying putting her hands on railing ... randhir stood near her resting his back on railing .. he was facing her .. there was no sound audible there ..

R- sanyu i really love u .. i am guilty for what i did ... plz forgive me.. ek galati to bahagwan bhi maaf kardeta h ..plz ...

S- ye galati nhi thi randhir ... ye ek gunah tha .. agar mein chahti ton tumhein jail
bhi bhijwa sakti thi ... domestic voilance k case mein .. par mein pyar karti thi tumse .. isliye tumhein chot nhi pohncha sakti thi .. par ab plz meri life mein problems create mat karo.. badi mushkil se sambhala h apne ap ko

R- sanyu i know m very bad .. bht bura hoon mein .. par plz tum to maaf kar sakti ho na .. jaise collage mein har fight mein maaf kardeti thi ..

S- ye collage ki fight nhi h ... aur waise bhi its too late .. ab in sab baton ka koi matlab nhi h.. ehsas akela so raha h .. uthega to dar jayega

She left terrace, went in room and slept with ehsas ...


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vani86 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
😊 awsome update...😊
thanks for the pm...😊
continue soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb ya...
Just hpe she forgves him soon...
Ehsas doing everything to gt them 2gthr...
Loved it...
Thnx for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor sanyu still old memories use pareshan karti hai rd itna easy nai hoga sanyu ko wapas lana...cant wait for next part...

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