The Revenge - A dark sandhir ss(Link to thread 2 added)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey everyone,m here with a dark ss of mines ... i posted it earlier on fb ... but now i am posting here too ...
Hope you all like it ...
And i will continue only if i will get good response ..

So here is the 1st part


THE REVENGE



The story begins when sanyu is sitting in
randhir's room ..oops their room ... full of
flowers & candels.. wearing bridal lehnga of
golden colour ... she is waiting for him to
come ... as this is their first night,so she was
nervous ... She was remembring how they fell for each other ... how they become lovers from enemies ... how he proposed her .. how vardhan sir was always with them for their help ... how
the things were going perfect ...She heard the
voice of opening of door ... randhir entered the door and closed it ...Sanyu got up from bed and hugged him from behind ... and rested his head on his back..

He turned to face sanyu and cupped her face ...

S- finally randhir we are
married now ... kitni obstracles ayi hamare
raste mein par now every thing is just perfect

R- yea baby now everything is just perfect except
one thing

S- and whats that??

R- the revenge

S- what are u saying Randhir ??

R- bhul gyi mujhse revenge lena ya plan change hogya??He tighen his grip on her face..

S- ahhh randhir dard ho raha h ...

R- tumhein dard ho raha h?? Mujhe bhi hua
tha wo sab kuch jan kar ... u could be so cheap
socha nhi tha maine kabhi ...

S- ye kya bakwas
kar rhe ho tum

R- bakwas nhi h ye sanyukta aggarwal oops mrs.sanyukta randhir singh shekhawat .. now i will show u ur place ...

S- kya bol rhe ho randhir mujhe kuch samajh nhi aarha ...

R- koi baat nhi dhire dhire sah samajh ajayega.. aur haan is farm house mein tumhari chekhein sunne k liye bhi koi nhi h ... so apni energy bacha kar rakhna, bht zrurat padne wali h tumhein energy ki ...

saying this he started moving towards her ... she was moving back ... she fell on bed.

S- randhir just stop
it .. i know tum mazak kar rhe ho ye sab ... she
got up from bed

R- oh common sanyukta u bitch ye koi mazak nhi h

S- mind ur tounge randhir ...

she said showing her index finger to him

R- oh to ab mujhe sikhaogi?? Mein batata hoon tumhein ...


He threwn her on bed and started kissing her aggresively ... he was giving her rough kisses ... she was loosing all her energy ... she
was feeling as if some one is taking her all
stregnth out of her body ... he was so rough on her ... he removed all their clothes and coverd
them with a blanket ... she was becoming
weak ... with every step of randhir's wild love making,, not exactly love .. it seemed to be hate ... she was loosing her energy ... for the first time in life she was feeling so helpless ... the person who saved her from all the problems is now giving problems to her
and the person whom she loved the most is the person who is giving her pain ...

S- randhir plz
chodo mujhe ... plz i cant tolerate it ...
she was crying,her face was now red and white blanket was now covered with blood marks ...

R- abhi bohat dard dena h tumhein sanyukta ... i will make
ur life hell and welcome to hell..

S- rann... dhir ... pl...ease ... cho ... do
She was feeling
very weak that she was not able to speak
properly ...

R- aise kaise chod dun abhi to begining h sirf ...
S- plle...ease ... raan...dhir ..
i .. wi..illl .. die ..

He released her ...

R- chalo chod dia tumhein .. i love u so much

S- but i hate u ...tum janwar khin k ... mujhe gussa araha h khud par k aise insan se pyar karti thi mein ... u are so cheap ...

R- pyar ki batein
tumhare mujh se achi nhi lagti sanyukta ...

Saying this he change side of his face and slept ...
sanyu was also tired so she too dozed off ...



So guys,here was 1st part ... will continue only if i will get good no of comments ...


And for pms, buddy me & like,cmnt whenever i post 😳


INDEX


Part-2

Part-3

PART-4

Part-5

Part-6

Part-7

Part-8

Part-9

Part-10

Part-11

Part-12

Part-13

Part-14

Part-15

Part-16

Part-17

Part-18

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newmoon18 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was nyc
Would luv to read it

Update soon wtng

Pm me for sure
Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow..i love dark ffs...
ye wala ff to lagta h total dark h..
am really excited...
and ye revenge??

I have send u the buddy request.. do accept it and plz send me pms..
agla update jaldi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Superb Dear!!
Loved it...
Conti soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
Amazing writing...!!
Update soon...!!
Can't wait
Revenge 😲
Love Janavi
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Nice update continue soon and thanks for the pm😊
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Awesome !
Plz pm me and update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: newmoon18

It was nyc
Would luv to read it

Update soon wtng

Pm me for sure
Keep smiling 😊





Thank you so much ..
will post only after getting good no of cmnts ...
vl pm u for sure
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Paravi

Awesome update
Amazing writing...!!
Update soon...!!
Can't wait
Revenge 😲
Love Janavi






Thank you so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: thundercute

Wow..i love dark ffs...
ye wala ff to lagta h total dark h..
am really excited...
and ye revenge??

I have send u the buddy request.. do accept it and plz send me pms..
agla update jaldi...






Thank you so much
i have accepted ur req
vl continue wen i vl update
vut i vl update only after getting good no of likes & cmnts

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