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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update, emotional & painful! Thanks for doing this in spite of your DD. Best wishes for that.
It is apparent that there is going to be a major upheaval in their lives, with Lavanya relapsing because of the revelation! Can one blame her completely, in that state of mind still undergoing therapy? Is Arnav to blame, avoiding her calls, exarcebating her state, & then admitting his love in those words? Is Khushi as much culpable because she ventured into this relationship in spite of knowing his marital status?

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Posted: 10 years ago
When i first learned lavany's story i felt bad for her.
but after reading this part i cant help but hate her.
she is such a selfish selfcentered person.
she kept lieing to every one even her own family.
she destroyed one persons life with her so called love.
sorry but i just hate her.
i just hope khushi hold her stand. but knowing khushi's charecter i doubt it.
all the best for dd.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update jenny. I feel so bad for Arnav and Khushi. All the best jenny every thing will go smooth and safe. Don't worry. Take care.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jenny - it's already Saturday where you live so today is the DD. My prayers are with you for a safe delivery and wish you lots of joy in welcoming this new addition to your family. Take care and when you are able to, let us know how you and family are doing.

This update just hit me with the force of a sucker punch in the gut. I knew it was coming and yet it surprised me. You totally nailed all the roiling angst that was going on in everyone's hearts and minds.

I am sooo angry. Why is it that out of everyone, I am always more sympathetic and in sync to Arnav than the female characters In your stories, be it Lavanya or Khushi. This mans suffering is making me cry. Yes, he made a mistake by sleeping with Lavanya but has he not paid the price...how much more can he take. Her mental state is beyond belief and her father and Manya are enabling her in her delusion rather than helping her. It's unbelievable that the father is angry at Arnav and sister is angry at Khushi.

The mothers here...both Arnav's and Khushi's again bring out all the repressed resentment I ever held against indian mothers. Sujata is even surpassing Arnav's mother in terms of being judgemental and rigid. At what point do indian mothers ever let their love be unconditional and act supportive? Does she not realize the trauma that Khushi is going thru? Must she add more burdens on her already conflicted soul?

The symbolism of the phone breaking was amazing. With the phone two hearts and their hopes and dreams broke. Love that Arnav now can admit he loves Khushi and I second him by saying to Lavanya ...DEAL WITH IT. I absolutely loathe people that try guilt and emotional blackmail as tools and Lavanya is master of it. Woman has no pride, self respect or dignity and yes she is disturbed and I have no sympathy for her at all. She is so far from reality.

All in all, I am feeling pretty bleak and scared for Khushi who is walking into the Kashyap ambush...and Gupta guilt trip...

Please please do not let Arnav and Khushi blame each other...let their love at least have dignity of separation without any recriminations.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Shit ! Why cant this Lavanya leave them in peace ??
Anyway, all the best dear and will wait for your return and next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
After five days without any internet finally i have limited access ...as i thought lavanya is a mental case, she will do any thing to hurt arnav and khushi ..i am just hoping for ray of hope...love this story and today is sat evening in india...and hopefully you will have your bundle of joy in your arms very soon...love you and bless you
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jenny, today is your big day. Good Luck Jenny. Hope you have a safe delivery and hold your bundle of joy in your arms soon!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh Jen! What an update!
I'm still wondering what hit me! All it takes is a moment for your world to come crashing down!!
the chapter began with a nice, cute little scene of Anita and Aman. Even that ended on Aman's reminiscence of Khushi, which was like a bitter aftertaste, you know.
And Lavanya...oh, that woman. I am torn between utmost pity & sorrow for her and intense fury at her actions. I can understand she is in a terrible place...but hanging onto that misery...to the hope that things deserve to work out with Arnav? she is almost delusional. I wish she hadn't taken such a drastic step. I wish she had considered for a moment that Arnav is not with Khushi to spite her or take revenge; he's in a bad place too...he's just lucky to have found a person to love. She of all people should have known you can't control who you fall in love with.
I understand Manya's stance. She doesn't know of Lavanya's mistakes and thus blames Arnav. It just pains me to see that while defending her sister, she is going to devastate Arnav and Khushi's life.
I can't explain what I felt when I read about Arnav's cell phone breaking and how the first thought he had was of the recording of Khushi's wishes. It just broke my heart...it felt like with the phone all their dreams and hopes were splintered into a million pieces, "buried in that wreck somewhere".
To imagine that everything is going to change, their lives are gong to be torn apart is extremely saddening.
But I have faith that their love is the deep and everlasting kind. And I also know you with your brilliant writing and ideas are going to bring out the best in even the worst of scenarios. So with a bit of apprehension and a bit of anticipation, I look forward to the next phase.

Last and not the least, my best wishes to you for this new phase in your life!! Rest up and take care. Hope that hereon, it's smooth sailing for you both. Lots of love to the little one! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.wish you a safe delivery and waiting for the good news.
I hope there will be a happy ending and a great bloom in Saffron Valley finally.
God bless you Jenny.

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