Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #5 OS 8 1~7 Link to #6: Pg 1

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stg1

@stg1

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#431

awww, khushi ke aansoo 😭 got scared that this was the last chapter but looks like there's one more part at least, phew, i sigh with relief 😳 also, this was truly beautiful and u r a genius ⭐️

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@piaviviandsena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#432

Haye wht a beautiful update. I totally luved it.

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arpitasen

@arpitasen

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#433

Awesome...but is this the last chapter? please no...

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sarozz

@sarozz

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#434

Awww such a lovely update...loved it

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831628

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#435

Simply love the way u write. 🤗

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#436

Amazing update.. Arnav met with an accident.. :( And Khushi was so broken but now alls well and they are all set to get married.. 😳 They both are really very very cute... Love their nok jhoks...

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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#437

The confession was super cute!

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#438

applaud to the echo

was it the last update of The other woman

HOPE NOT

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#439

Last four updates...as usual amazing.
He was worried for his lady love...
She was praying for him to her DM and threatening her DM that was the best part.
And now she told her wish to marry him...awww Arnav babua ki to nikal paid...

Soni si Dulhaniyan (honewali) ka mil gaya chumma...

Waiting eagerly for the nest parts...
Love n hugs for both of you my dearies.
Take care of yourselves.

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#440

One request...
Smitaji I am reading Keeping Khushi...don't ask me how many times I read this story ...One of the Best story on Arshi. When I read the part when Arnav came to know about Khushii' s accident and Mamiji' s dialogue one idea ka janam hua in my mind.
I would love to read about Arnav n Khushi where Khushi is living with the Raizadas when she was just 8 or 10 years old. They fall in love ... I can't describe this idea in proper word hope you understand it. If possible I would really love to read this type of story in your style.

Love n hugs.

Edited by Divyahet - 10 years ago

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