Series of os- perfect spouse..! UPDATED 7/11/14

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Posted: 10 years ago
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So this is really a happy moment for me...!!
Perfect spouse ki second thread .!!!! Yepiii...!!
Really on cloud 9..!! I am so happy to receive so much love
From you all...!!! Thankkk yoouuu sooo mmuuuccchhh...!!
This is also very less...!! So for the new thread an update is coming soon ..!!
Stay tuned..!!!!

THREAD 1 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4172041/series-of-os-the-perfect-spouse-updated-15-10-14

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Posted: 10 years ago
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SAAWAN AAYA HAI...!


" randhir you remember the day when we both used to hate each other after u insulted my dad and we were assigned a task...!! And we went somewhere out of rookie...????



" ya I remember that was one of the best days of my life...!!! I just want to keep that memory stored in my mind...!!!




FLASHBACK



" you stupid now hum kaha jaye??


" main stupid you told me to take left turn...!!! Said randhir



" randhir main Chal ke thak gayi..!! And Iss road par koi aa bhi nahi raha...!!



" because you wanted some quite place...!! Mujhe toh pata bhi nahi tha tum kaha lekar jaa Rahi thi mujhe..!!


" now let's not fight..!!!



They were walking since 1 hour but no sign of any car or house ..!!!



" Arre randhir dekho..!!! Waha Ek jhopdi hai..!!


" Haan Dikh Rahi hai but it's still so far...!!!



And suddenly it started raining heavenly ..!!! They both got under and tree by the side...!! They looked at each other...!!! Both were looking hot...!!!



Mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai
Mohabbat barsa dena tu, saawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai




Randhir and sanyu walked towards each other and held each other's hands...!!



S- randhirr..!!


R- hmmm...


S- uss hut main chale...!!



R- hmm chalo..!!!



They both ran to the hut...!!! Totally drenching in the rain..!! They reached the hut and looked inside the dark hut...!!! Randhir brought few Wooden sticks and burned fire...




Sabse chhupa ke tujhe seene se lagaana hai
Pyar mein tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyar kisi pe, pehli baar aaya hai

Mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai



He lit the fire and looked at his angel..!! She was drying her hair with her dupatta...



She was looking smoking hot ...!! She walked towards her and caressed her lips... Sanyu looked into his eyes...!!!! She stood on her toes and kept her lips on his lips...!!!




Kyun ek pal ki bhi judaai sahi jaaye na
Kyun har subah tu meri sanson me samaye na
Aaja na tu mere paas, dunga itna pyar main
Kitni raat guzaari hai, tere intezar mein



It's not the first or the second time they are kissing but the third time also the kiss feels new...!! Their lips were moving in perfect sinc...!! Sanyu could feel his hot breath lingering n her face...!! Same came was with him...!!! They broke apart but still there eyes full of desire...!!!




Kaise bataaun jazbaat ye mere
Maine khud se bhi zyada tujhe chaaha hai
Sab kuch chhod ke aana tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai

Sabse chhupa ke tujhe seene se lagaana hai
Pyar mein tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyar kisi pe, pehli baar aaya hai




He slid the sleeves of her kurti and planted wet kisses...!! She turned around touched the wall..!! Randhir opened the string of her kurti...!!!
Sanyu blushed and faced him..!!!



He capture her lips again and picked her up and carried her near the born fire...!! He placed her on the mat... He traces his finger on her arm..!!! She turned her face and looked towards the fire...!!




Bheege bheege tere lab,
mujhko kuch kehte hain
Dil hai khush mera ki khayal ek jaise hain :)
Roko na ab khudko yun sun lo dil ki baat ko
Dhal jaane do shaam aur aa jaane do raat ko
Kitna haseen ye lamha hai
Kismat se maine churaaya hai




He bent down and kissed the crook of her neck..!! He shivered on his touch...!!! Randhir snaked his hands under her kurti ... Sanyu's hands went to his shirt buttons...!! She fumbled with the buttons but then succeeded with his help...!!




She removed his shirt and checked out his perfectly built body...!!! She hugged him and pulled him close...




Aaj ki raat na jaana tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai




Sabse chhupa ke tujhe seene se lagaana hai
Pyar main tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyar kisi pe, pehli baar aaya hai




Randhir kissed her on her forehead and then her eyes and then nose and then her red cheeks and at last he pecked her lips...!!! Sanyu digged her nails inside his back...!!!



Randhir removed her kurti and turned her... He kissed her back and neck...he unhooked her b*a and pulled her close...!! They could feel each other's cold body on each other...!!!



Mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai
Mohabbat barsa dena tu, saawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai


Randhir covered her with his shirt and pulled her closer and closer...!!! Randhir kissed her on her breasts...she was blushing hard and randhir noticed that...!!



R- you look more beautiful while blushing...!!!


He gave love bites on her neck and chest...!! Sanyu turned him and came on top of him and have love bites all over his chests and perfectly built abs...




The rest of the night went feeling each other...!!!




FLASHBACK OVER...!!!



S- wow...!!! Randhir baarish chalo na...!!



She went outside and jumped in the balcony and randhir went near her and picked her up and rolled in the balcony...!!!!


All the neighbours were watching them and smiling seeing there cute si sweet si khati meethi Jodi...!!




So here I end...!! Rest is upto your imagination... Pls do leave your reviews...!!




So everyone knows that it's karishma's birthday...!! So happy birthday karish...! Loved u loads ...!! And this is for you... Muaahh
Edited by Paravi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow I am first
it was nice os
short sweet and hot
keep updating your other ff
vrinda65 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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u knw wht is d bst part of ur update .
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dey cmpletly r drnchd in d rain of luv,purity n trust.mst say gr8 update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Congratulations for your New Thread! :D
And Happy B'Day to your friend Karishma. Enjoyy!
Now, coming to the update.
It was so beautiful! Sandhir baarish mei..
Tip Tip Barsa Paani
Paani ne aag lagaii
( I don't if the lyrics are write. But, still... :P )
AndI love when a forehead kiss is thereIt's so sweet! :')
Please update soon!
Waiting
And thanks for the PM. :*
Lots and Lots of Love
Zyra.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey! Janavi
lovely,sweet n romantic OS😳😳
Lovely, nicely n beautifully written👏👏
love it to the core❤️
Beautifully you've described the scenario
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice awesome lovely lovely fab
amazing superb fab.
love it.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanyugracy27

wow I am first
it was nice os
short sweet and hot
keep updating your other ff




Thanks...!! Which one do u want?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrinda65

u knw wht is d bst part of ur update .
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dey cmpletly r drnchd in d rain of luv,purity n trust.mst say gr8 update




Aww..!.! Thanks dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zyra

Congratulations for your New Thread! :D

And Happy B'Day to your friend Karishma. Enjoyy!
Now, coming to the update.
It was so beautiful! Sandhir baarish mei..
Tip Tip Barsa Paani
Paani ne aag lagaii
( I don't if the lyrics are write. But, still... :P )
AndI love when a forehead kiss is thereIt's so sweet! :')
Please update soon!
Waiting
And thanks for the PM. :*
Lots and Lots of Love
Zyra.






Thanks a lot Zyra...!!!
Glad u liked it...!!!
And paani Mein aag laga di...!!! 😆

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