Arshi FF : An Unforgettable Night LINK #2 pg 152 dt.4.2.15

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peachygirl

@peachygirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

great update!!

is khushi in love with arnav?! why did she embroider the words ASR if she hates him as she claimes to??? eagerly waiting for next update! thanks for the pm😊

Edited by Shamli16 - 10 years ago

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Param

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

amazing update! good to see arnav-khushi have started warming up a bit.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊

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casker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

loved it.

sure the one who Kushi loves is Arnav. Its a rainy day he found Sheetal and Kushi hates rain because its a rainy day she lost her love.

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amita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Superb update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Feeling bad for both Arnav and Khushi

Both are going through lots of pain in their life

Arnav is noticing her without her knowledge its really good thing

Khushi is trying keep herself distance from Arnav as he wish but taking care of him secretly

Loved the way Khushi was worried for him and applied medicine on his wound

Arnav is softening towards her from his cold behavior

Hope they will find solace in each other and make good bonding and strong relationship

Waiting for next update eagerly

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Russell

@russelskhushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

very well written story... both are in pain...
i feel it was khushi in the balcony on that rainy day when arnav show her...

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neverbefore

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

There is such a feel a feeling of desolation running through this chapter. the funny thing is that I think they need each other to pull themselves out of that desolation. Arnav needs to hear Khushi's story and maybe that will help pull him out of his feeling sorry for myself phase...and maybe if he changes a little after that, Khushi might feel less despairing. It feels like all that's needed is a little shift but I can't see what would bring that about.

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Lovely update!!

Loved how well you used different incidents to bring out their relation!!

Yeah they are apart but still together!!

Hope now at least he will realise that he is not the only one suffering,

and hopefully they will recognise that they are together!!!

Hope to see you soon!!

Take Care!!!

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Rose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Teaser of chapter 5

She picked up the tray to keep it back in the kitchen when all of a sudden I asked her," do you still love him?" I had no idea what prompted me to ask that but I was curious to know. Surprised by my question her head shot up. But then like always she dropped her gaze along with the question that I'd raised and without uttering a word moved past me. I side stepped to block her way. My eyes were intense and probing. Once again she tried to walk away. Grabbing her arm, I stopped her. She was stubborn and twisted her arm to get free. However she didn't know that I could be equally stubborn if not more. Tugging her by her arm I made her look at me.

"Answer me dammit !" I spoke through gritted teeth. Her lips quivered and for the first time I saw her getting teary. I was unable to decipher what her tear filled eyes reflected. Were they hurt or accusing or both?

Blinking back her tears she replied, "Yes. I still love him." Her confession hit me hard.

Meeting my piercing gaze she added," And I will always love him. Only him."

Suddenly I had no reason to hold onto her. My grip on her arm loosened and my hand fell on it's own.

please buddy me for pm's

Edited by stranger2rose - 10 years ago