Arshi FF/ Saffron Fields #11//Ch. 32 Pg. 115/ Thread 12 link Pg. 1 - Page 31

Originally posted by: mem1

<font color="#990099">I have to say, I totally agree with Jigs on this one...</font>

<font color="#990099">Don't get me wrong, I love this story, and I LOVE your writing Jenny, but somehow,. after every update, I keep wishing that something really bad would come out about La, to make us hate her and justify Arnav's actions.</font>

<font color="#990099">I find it hard to digest him having a full fledged relationship while his marriage is still unresolved totally. I know the marriage was a sham, and she lied to him and all, but if she still holds a wish to get back together with him, and she is reformed now, then it would be really sad.</font>

<font color="#990099">So, like Jigs said so eloquently, I would love for this to be resolved, once and for all, and resolved in a good way, with no questions left handing. Then I feel I can enjoy the A and K romance much better.</font>

<font color="#990099">I do have total faith in your writing , and know that I will love what ever you have in store!</font>

A big Muaaah to you and Jigs for what I need a lot of for this particular story...Faith:) Love you both and all of my readers who have stood by this story in the faith that I will always try my best to not insult their sensibilities in any way :) As my readers know already, I have a penchant for choosing sensitive topics for my stories...and that is because I want to grow as a writer by endeavoring to pull off writing convincingly about these admittedly awkward topics... reincarnation, child bride, tragedy, widow remarriage, hidden dreams of a BS-SI fan;). And you can imagine the headaches I've had in trying to do justice to all of these..,lol.

Showing Lavanya as an out and out vamp would have been the easier way out ..(Like I did with Sean of ALS) but I wanted to challenge myself by showing her a somewhat likable but emotionally challenged human who's made a mess of her life by making bad decisions. Am I trying to prove that my protagonists always make the right decisions ...no:) Nor am I trying to romanticize being in reelationship with a still married/ almost divorced man...Not at all. It's about two people, Arnav and Khushi who have this inexplicable, undeniable connection with each other and how their emotions become inextricably intertwined ...and lead them to make certain decisions...which cause repercussions like all decisions...how they deal with these repercussions. How in the process of finding their way back to each other...they discover new things about themselves and life in general...

And I'd better go before I reveal the whole plot here...LOL.

Love you guys and really, really appreciate your honest feedback.. 🤗

And your faith..❤️

Originally posted by: sman

I was reading all comments over the weekend and thought a lot over Arnav's situation..


.I do not want Arnav - La to get together just bcos La seems to be regretting now.. I hope they have a amiable solution and La moves on..I hated her in the beginning but now I feel her pain..she loved Arnav but messed up big time..poor girl..

Next update might change my opinion about her completely.. hee heee

Great job Jenny..you are depicting their emotions to naturally..love u..
and the teaser, that is to die for..meeting Arnav will sooth Kushi's heart.. and I feel on her birthday, Sujatha will have a heart to heart with her..she is after all a mother..that too desi..they can't stay angry for long..

Originally posted by: canapoem

And I had thought Shailu was not a Lavanya bhakt all these days. 😆

Haaa haaa I am only Modi Bhakt officially... just a bit of sympathy for La..when she was hating Arnav, I hated her..but now she is regretting..so a bit sympathy..my heart melts u know.. ;-)

Originally posted by: mem1

I have to say, I totally agree with Jigs on this one...

Don't get me wrong, I love this story, and I LOVE your writing Jenny, but somehow,. after every update, I keep wishing that something really bad would come out about La, to make us hate her and justify Arnav's actions.

I find it hard to digest him having a full fledged relationship while his marriage is still unresolved totally. I know the marriage was a sham, and she lied to him and all, but if she still holds a wish to get back together with him, and she is reformed now, then it would be really sad.

So, like Jigs said so eloquently, I would love for this to be resolved, once and for all, and resolved in a good way, with no questions left handing. Then I feel I can enjoy the A and K romance much better.

I do have total faith in your writing , and know that I will love what ever you have in store!

Kavi, your Kabhi alvida na kehna example is superb..I never understood why didn't Rani like Abhishek's character..Karan Johar kept saying sometimes people just dont like each other..no reasons..I felt how stupid of him..but now I understand..It's Jen's superb writing which is bringing out a emotional side of me..else I am so practical..!!

Aha! Interesting...

Originally posted by: jduke

Lavanya loved Arnav heart and soul and no matter what she is not ready to leave him. She wants to be tied with him forever as Mrs. Raizada. But the point she is missing is her love / feelings will never be reciprocated and there is an end to her try and try philosophy. They have reached a stalemate point where there is no reconciliation. Lavanya has to move on but I know it's easy to say than done. She has to find her soul mate who can instigate those lovely feelings in her to move on. Will there be such a person? Only time can tell us.

So true Jay..hopefully her doctor NK can help her..he really seem to like her

Originally posted by: canapoem

Geeta, I so agree with you on the points you have made.

When in a love triangle, if the third angle is a villainous person, its so easy to hate them and wish for their exit ASAP, but here Lavanya is a human just like you and me. Agreed she has made a lot of mistakes in her life, but who doesn't?

That what makes this story different from the others and hats off to Jen for even thinking of such a plot.

I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter to understand how and why did their marriage fail???

(Though the story lines are totally different, but once I had even mentioned that even in the movie "Kabhi Alvida na Kehna", there were no antagonists yet the marriages failed and most unlikely couple just clicked? Why? There are no straight forward answers to that question.

I always respect and love Jen more here because something which Karan Johar attempted to pull it off, Jen is doing a better job at it.)

Arnie is tense, chutki became Cupid and khushi's birthday, sound super interesting Jenny!!! We love you more... Ab yeh Wednesday kab aayega !!!;(...