ArHi SS: Quiet places (Read warning) [Completed]

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

What happened in Arnav's world that he need salvation...a sexual release by force...interesting...love to read more

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Reveur

@Reveur

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Beautiful. We have had Cross. We have had Grey. We have had Gabriel.

What now, is leaving us tongue-tied, is Khushi.

I am waiting, patiently, for you to weave your magic. For I have no eyes to judge the yarn, but I can surely behold the finished silken sheet as a masterpiece.

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Isn't this every guy's secret wish to be dominated by their female counterpart but they may feel like they need to conform to what society expects of them - I.e. Be in control, take the lead and don't be overshadowed by the women? I love it that the tiger became putty in her hand when she lashed back. Yes ma'am, please and may I - not words we hear from the typical ASR. So yes just like Kushi, I am enthralled by this version of ASR. I think she is going to enjoy being in control for a while. I like that you leave much to our imagination. It makes it more intriguing.

Thanks for the scrap.

Edited by Raila1014 - 10 years ago

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Res...to come back and read

Edited by Polkadots78 - 10 years ago

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

WOW!!

How inadequate language seems to me... at this very moment... trying to respond... when it is that very language that yielded so beautifully to your poetic dominance!

This is storytelling at its best. You write like an old soul, wizened with the weight of all the magic and mystery your characters bear. There is an easy familiarity in the way you wield power over your language that she becomes pliant to your demands, bending and giving in ways that seem almost servile in supplication!

Quiet places it is...
Where stories speak their loudest
In between breaths
Where cadence is their racing pulse

I almost missed the story! The quiet spell that you cast with secrets you hide so well in between your sentences. But they are in plain sight for all to see! So, are they really secrets then? No, it is writing at its magical best..

Quiet places it is...
Where words put on their best shows
In between pages
Where magic weaves a supple spell

Edited by Mirabell - 10 years ago

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

hmm...

a new story from you..
These days I go after very few on-going stories, but I know I will always get something interesting from yours.. Your command on the language is of course the biggest strength.. but loving the genre too..

And the warning made it even more interesting...😉
I hope I don't find implications from the bits where there are no implications 😆

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Nikita

@nikita_88

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Interesting read! Been a while since I read your work!

Cont soon

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

This was amazing!

I cant wait to read more

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

this looks so interesting!! your writing is damn beautiful and so expressive. arnav and khushi fights over for control here but ultimately its the strong and overpowering khushi whom arnav gets attracted to at the end. I'm intrigued for the rest of the story now.