PEHLA PYAAR PEHLA EHSAAS(PART12) 25. 09.16 - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
hey...firstly sorry ...i knw i m commenting after ages... but was busy...
nd about the story...it is going awsumm.
m so loving it...
so it will be worth reading how armaan gonna make up to riddhima...
i hope everything will get back to normal soon...
do cont soon...
will be waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
armaan reply to vivek is nice
vivek ka plan fail hogaya
now dont know what he will do
loved rahul and armaan conversation
hope riddhima forgive armaan
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
finally u updated thank god
vaise baat kya h ur not regular these days :-(
or its been month that u update
and that too a small one
now coming to the parts it started where its end
loved the part its splendid

so my armaan is feeling guilty hmm so bad but he deserve it bechari ridhz ki baat bhi nah suni
loved vivek shocked expression when armaan scold him nd after so many try he didn't able to divert armaan mind

loved the scene in the dining table b\w ridhz nd avantika nd armaan he for the first time laugh or smile seeing the family enjoying their time

loved avantika nd ridhz bonding :-D how ridhz is doing avantika hair massage nd avantika saying her not to do it as she herself is tired
then armaan nd rahul bonding is really nice nd beautiful they r not the real sibling but can understand each other more than that
loved how rahul just by armaan look can understood wat he needs
and also he is angry wid armaan but he took water for him
loved their conversation how cutely armaan say sorry
nd how armaan got scared after rahul say him ridhz is very strict he he he
so armaan waits for ridhz in bb court nd when she didn't come he gets tense for her hmmm so kuch kuch shuru ho hi gya hmm
so he is taking interest in ridhz
let's see how he is going to apologise to ridhz nd wat will ridhz do
do update part b super soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey,
It was a really nice part

So Armaan is feeling guilty and
he wants to apologise to Riddhima

Riddhima-Avantika scene was really nice

Hope Vivek does not do anything bad to Ridz or Armaan

Waiting for the next part
Do continue soon

Take care...😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey guysss
pata hai maine sochi thi i will comment for full part 7
isiliye i didn't comment after u both post 7 part (A)
i was waiting when u post the next then i can comment on full part
See i'm back with my comments

Comment for part 7 (A)

This vivek is so evil
abhi bhi varka raha hai armaan ko
But finally armaan ko bhi kuch akal toh ayi
Good to see that
Wohooo armaan rocks vivek shocks
& then the dinning hall scene was just superbbb
Like the way riddhima scold avantika
Then rahul brings water so sweet
then they talk
when armaan said na maaf karde to mujhe yaad aya

Maaf kar aye fitna dil,
Aye fitna dil,
Aye fitna dil


Then armaan was regreting tab rahul said na maan jayegi di to yaad aya

Dil kehta hai
Ek din haseena man jayegi
Haseena man jayegi


Then tch tch bechara mffi bhi nhi mang payi so sad na
Armaan is tensed for riddhima sunke badi achi lagi


ok now going to the other half of this part
I mean comment for part 7 (B)

the way riddhima care for armaan & armaan loved it just tooo goood
Are wah yaha o rahul muskaan badi shant rehti hai
i like this one
Btw holi hai
isi baat pe ek song...

Dekho aai holi rang layi holi,
Chalee picthkaree uda hain gulal
Banke hain ghata mann jhum utha,
Rang chalke hain nile hare lal
Rang reli me rang khelungee,
Rang jaungee
Rang gehre hain abake saal
Abb hame koi roke nahee,
Abb hame koi toke nahee
Abb hone do ho jo bhee hal

Awww
riddhima care so much na
i like it
lv the convo between rahul-muski&riddhima
now riddhima kuch to karegi na to make them all together as family???
& armaan ne puch bhi liya
wah wah kafi progress ho rhi hai usme
the dinner part was awesome
i so enjoyed it
Wah wah kya sunaya riddhima ne i so pleased
but the way riddhima make him understand it was just tooo goooddd

Finallly holi agayiii
Riddhima ne toh kamal kardiya
the song sequence was nice

& last me precap wali song
maine na 😔
nhi bataungi😳
but waiting for it
lved it
lvs u both
continue soon
Tc


Edited by Ruppkotha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update ...
Awesome ...
Loved it <3
Armaan likes riddhima soo much and values her friendship alot :)
Armaan is falling for ridz ...
Waiting for next part eagerly !!
Continue soon !!
N thnxx for pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb part
i loved how riddhima made armaan put colours on his parents
and the way she explained to armaan
finally armaan oming close to his parents
urghh yeh vivek
post soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part

Finally, Armaan asks Riddhima for an
apology and she forgives him

Riddhima cares a lot for Armaan's parents
as well as the family, and
their bonding is really sweet and Riddhima's effort
to get Armaan closer to his parents is really appreciable.

The holi scene was nice and loved it when
Armaan applied colours to Riddhima's cheek,
their friendship is getting stronger and eager
to know what will happen in the upcoming parts

Loved the whole

Continue soon
Waiting for the next part😊

Thanks for the PM

Take care..:)
Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
again an awsumm part megha...
really loved the way u described everything...
armaan's feelings...how he is attracted to riddhima...and for a change...he is obeying everything whatever riddhima said...
soo cute...
loved the holi sequence...
plz continue soon...
eagerly waiting for next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Megha...Thank you so much for the pm...I'm so glad you sent it to me if not I would not have come across this amazing story...I just read the whole seven parts n less than two hours and I just want to read on...
It is a really nice story line and I just love how Avantika and Harish bring Riddhima and Muskaan into their family as their daughters first...and I also love Rahul's character as a younger brother...but most of all I really feel for Armaan, he's a young vulnerable person stuck in his past...I hope Riddhima forgives him and have feelings for him soon...
Once again thanks for the m and do continue to pm me your updates...I hope you update soon because I'm so eager to read on...well done and thanks for sharing...
Fizz x

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