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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sudipto-69

its so classy and superb aweosme fab lovely lovely lovely

you describe everything superbly.
ya revenge track bohot interesthing hona bala hai.
just love it. update asap.😃

Thanks dear ..will update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutikag

i really loved it..randhir on the verge of taking a revenge from his beloved n sanyu not aware of it,its going to be a very interesting plot to read.they wud make love but wid a camouflaged persona...really waiting for the next update...thanku for the pm n update soon

Thanks dear ,yup will update soon doll😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: archakan

awesome dear... eagerly waiting for next part... pls update soon yaara...

Thanks dear ..yup will update soon :)
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you'll get to know soon dear😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SanDhiraddict

Bien...tres bien.

I just read these three (including the prologue) updates at once and found a mysterious and classy read. Loved it. Sent u a buddy request and waiting for next update.

Thank you dear :) accepted 😆will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 3


A/N : Thank you all ..for your wonderful comments and your suggestions are always invited :)

Happy Reading

They were swaying in sync...the rhythm of their bodies was as intoxicating as the moist air their sensual bodies were emitting ..

He brushed her stray locks behind her ears with his eyes locked with hers .She was spelled by his looks ,his eyes looked as if he was mentally fighting against a decision but it was evident that one overpowered the other ..
"Aren't you too fast shekhawat", she hushed biting her lower lips sensuously
"Aren't you too slow agarwal", he sniggered
"Let me show you , how slow i am ", she widened her brows ,
The heat between them radiated on their faces , the hair on his skin became vigilant, she immediately pressed her cold petals on his plumb ones .Their hearts were racing and they found themselves in a place about which only couple in love knew, a heavenly place
She immediately turned away and chuckeled , he clutched her arms and guided her closer ...they immediately closed their eyes
They were savouring the moment together ..
A gentle lingering touch of lips , hesitation poured on both parts initiallly ,as if they were breathing the moment , but it vanished in few minutes as they got the approval from each other that no one would step back.
Their hands were wandering , their bodies pressed closer as their desire reached it's peak
She felt weak on her knees , she started melting , she leaned on him as if she couldn't control more , their tongues were dancing together mixing the flavours of lust , agony and thirst ..
He slowly guided his hands to untangle her ribbon , thus allowing her locks to flutter in silence immitating the silken blue curtains flying with the wind hanging to the window
"I love you Randhir, i am craving for you ", she moaned ...as he ferried her along to the bed
He winked ,"i know"
She sank down into the deep green bedsheet and waited for the sensuous storm to envelope her and tease out her every secret corner with love .Her world seemed to dissolve
His hands made way to her robe and he pulled her sleeves down ,soon he started planting kisses all over her nape , she hissed in pain as he bited her along , little did she realize that it wasn't out of love but out of frustration ...
Gradually ,He explored her every goldie curve , slowly they took turns to remove each other's clothing until all that separated them was her excited breathing blowing gently on his chest
Randhir pulled a duvet around their frame ,and took her in his embrace , he silently wept the pearls which had made way through her eyes and sighed .
"Treasure them sweet heart you'll need them afterwards ", he thought and the bedside lamp flickered spreading the darkness around...
"Randhir"
"When you're with me , there is no where else i'd rather be"she mumbled as
She slept peacefully in his arms mistaking his embrace as the most safest place she could get
But he was nowhere near sleep , his eyes didn't even show a pinch of drowsiness , he was continuously staring at the wall in front .
And the song continued to soothen the atmosphere

*****

Aucun voyage, aucun visage, (no trip , no face)
Aucun nuage n'a pu me faire pleurer autant,(no cloud could make me cry as much )
Mais je dois dire qu'aucun sourire (but i must say no smile)
N'a su me faire souffrir d'amour si tendrement (could make me suffer from love so tenderly)
*****
The twilight melted away but left it's darkness behind, the early morning ray flooded every blade of grass , shining every leaf
but the wind still carried the traces of the cold night which passed away ..

She twirled and yawned ,
Bonjour randhir ...she moaned lazily expecting a "good morning hug "from him
"Randhir"
She opened her eyes just to find herself alone in the room , he had left already ...
She widened her eyes with shock ..
A note kept beneath the pillow caught her attention ..
**
Morning sanyukta
J'ai quelque travaille importante
Je suis desole ...
Au revoir
**
Sanyukta i had some important work to do
I am sorry , bye .

"Mere mehboob qyamat hogi , aaj ruswa teri galiyon mein mohabbat hogi"

Have a nice day :)

Edited by MAHAK1234 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres
moi 1st yippyyy
it waS AWESOMEEE update
it is really very interesting story
love to read further
w8ing for ur next update
thanks for pm
lots of love
sakshi
Edited by cuteparsh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was so so good...loved it yaar
N plz tell na y Randhir is taking revenge from sanyu?? xP
Btw I loved there night part *ahem ahem* xD
Update soon darlo...waiting to read more from u
N thnxx a tonne for pm

Love
Neha :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey dear awesm update. 👍🏼
Jst loved it. 😊
Itz getting vry interesting. 😊😊😊
m feeling bad 4 sanyu!!
their past may be whtevr it iz bt nw sanyu really loves him.
She vl be really hurted.
Love 2 read moren more.
Bt plz dnt mk it sad end.

Waiting 4 dnxt update.
Love,
Mahi ❤️
Edited by Mahi2012 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
This like button is so stubborn 😡
wat an update. . Exceptional. ..
but why Randhir is behaving like this???
Please disclose it...
Thanks for the pm. .
Keep smiling ...and updating also 😆
Edited by thundercute - 10 years ago

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