A HIDDEN KINDNESS. A SanDhir Dark FF [Ch.16 on pg21] - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
Omgg.. interesting.. please update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
It was amzng yr

Aisha she's so clingy
That idiot boys planning revenge on sanyu
She's alone rd b ni h


I m sure sanyu akele hi unki band Baja degi

Cnt wait for it
Updte soon

Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

PART.12

R- Chal ab chalta hu... (Randhir bade goodbye to Parth and Arpita, who were sharing their compartment with 3 girls of G.C.E and 1 guy of E.C.E)

P- Are etni jaldi kya hai??? (Parth tried stopping him)

R-(In mind) Abe yaar...parth! I love you bro...but kabhi kabar tu dimag khata hai...kya bolu ki mujhe Sanyukta ko dekhna hai???

A-RANDHIR!!!! Kha kho gaye??

R- Nahi yaar...bas tired feel kar raha hu...see ya tomorrow!!

[Randhir waved them goodbye and proceeded towards his compartment]

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A- Warna kya?? (He asked opening his shirt buttons)

S- Dare you...esa kuch karne ki shochna bhi mat...get that...you know what?? Tum NAMARD ho...ek number ke FATTU...

(Sanyukta tried distracting him while she searched for the Swiss knife in her back pocket)

NOTE- That knife guys...which has a small knife and is kind of like a nail cutter.

A- Kya kaha??? NAMARD?? FATTU??...(Aman was losing his cool)...ab tu nahi bachne waali...

(For the 2nd time in her entire life, Sanyukta was feeling vulnerable, weak, scared. 1st being when Parth had left her)

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R- Hey beautiful! (Randhir winked at a G.C.E girl, as he made way to his compartment)

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He opened the door, and spotted one of the E.C.E guy standing in front of the compartment, quiet alertly.

R-In mind' Dal me zaroor kuch kaala hai...

R- Hey you!! Vo Aisha needs your help...vo tumhe bula rahi thi...bathroom ke paas hai vo...( He made up an excuse)

*Rehaan, made his way towards Aisha, in dilemma, not before taking a look in the compartment.*

R-In mind' Koi aawaz toh nahi aarahi...Chal chod, bhai hai na...bas yu gaya aur yu aaya

[And so he left the comapartment, running]

R-In mind' Chal bachoo...dekhte hai what were you up too??

[He waited for him to be out of his sight, and then peeped inside the compartment, and what he saw made his eyeballs pop out, LITERALLY]

Edited by spark23 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
Nice update but phr se suspense main chod diya :( plz update soon next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
japdi update kro...awwssome story hai..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
The update was awsme yr
Moi luved it to the core

Sanyu trapped still she's not weak

Rd on his way
He so slyly get rid out dat chomu
Bt what he saw inside dat he was so shocked
Cnt wait
Update soon

Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
NYC story
read in a go

thnkz fr pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
nice awesome fab lovely
very very nice amazing
love it. update asap.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
Awesome n fantastic update😳👏
cliffhanger!!!
Update ASAP
Eagerly waiting
thx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great ff
Read in one go!

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