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Thank u Jazz, really sweet comments..yes, i tried giving the 'Saptapadi' chapter a poetic trance partly coz i'm very bad at romantic-rotic stuffs & partly coz i wanted to maintain the innocence in Arnav-Kavya's passionate love...now bout Swayam-Swarna love story is another pure but forbidden love & it reminded him of Kavya once left him for him, so he knows Swarna leaving Swayam would break him & the girl's love is pure would always show Swayam the right path & Bout Yudhishtar part..well i have some serious conflicting issues with quite alot of mythological characters like i had earlier in part 10 given bout Ram & Krishna's role in Mahabharat...bout giving face to characters based on Mahabharat well to be honest many r insired from there like truly Devdutta's character s inspired from Mahabharat's Karna..Karna could have been a great worried but his worng decision to prove his superiority from arjun led to his destruction kinda like Devdutta's actions r leading to same path...Rajlakshmi's character has the nture of Subhadra of Mahabharat infact Swyam-Swarna r pretty much inspired from Arjun-Draupati, there too was a forbidden love, Draupati loved Arjun yet could never openly express, yet never had the freedom to be with him...been his wife & Arjun loved his Panchali yet could never openly claim her as his wife, had to share her with his brothers though Swayam doesn't need to shre Swarna but their would never get approval, never have the freedom to openly claim each other...tell me what u think😊

Thanks for the PM>

it is nice to see a historical aspect to arhi

can't wait to see what happens next