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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

well...I don't want to guess.I want to go with the flow.bcz its very interesting.Let there be suspense. I've become a fan of ur writing.Have u written ffs b4?

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

I find Thammi mysterious.I feel there is a hidden meaning in her noticing Arnva.Kavya Arnva becoming one in rain was passionate.Now Kavya knows what a physical relation is.Wishing to see their holi scene too.A luv scene with colours.

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

u have not replied to my previous message.plz reply.Have u written ffs b4?

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Pastellitesoulx

@xMIC.Dropx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Loved all chapters till now.
It was so interestin!
Continue it soon.

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Thode badmash song 4 Krishna...its my fav song n now only I realized that it can b perfect 4 Lord Krishna.Diya scene was nice.Devdutt looking at Kavya?mysterious.What a twist abt Thammi n guruji!loving 2 read more abt it.Rajlaxmi's part is full of suspense

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

I agree with Arnva.Ram had only one wife unlike other Gods.I respect him 4 that.But he didn't have d courae 2 defend n support his wife.bcz of that the innocent Sita suffered a lot.Will Kavya be his model?Thammi the face of Guruji's sculptors n kavya;Arnva's sculptors' face.that wud b nice

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

no wonder.Kavya aroused erotic feelings in Arnva.but I liked Kavya stopping him.Bcz a woman wants 2 surrender 2 a mn only when he touches her with luv.

loved the dialogue n I must say u used d perfect pic 2 depict her emotion.

"Only desired not beloved." Kavya smiled again.. but it only reflected her ache

liked Rajlaxmi caring 4 Kavya.Hope Arnva does something.but y did Devdutt chose Rajlaxmi over Kavya?2 gain Kavya?