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Meena

@chotidesi

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#491

Ruchi Di asked for it.

So.

Hmph. 😆

Putting this insanely unfair ending aside...

My favorite part of this was Khushi doing something for Arnav. I loved that part, so much. They have such a symbiotic relationship- two people who don't just do things for the other to do it.

They do it because they genuinely care, and they like seeing the other happy. I didn't feel at all like Khushi did that to pay him back- she did it because she knows what he likes, and she wanted to enjoy that with him. She thought about it, and spent money to give him an experience.

It's not about what they buy for them, it's about why they buy it, and you've done that very well. It's about the moments.

This story makes me so happy. I look forward to reading it- it's light, it's fun, and they're just so cute!

And now...

Put us out of our misery, Writerji! Please!

Love always,

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#492

I am res'ing...please don't throw anything at me!

And Jigs...69? 😆 Is that a hint?

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I will leave ^ up to remind you of your ramanchi in this update.

Now that we have that out of the way, stripping aside, I really loved the update. There are a good few developments in their relationship, and we also got to see how they handle their fights, and boy do they do it impressively.

I loved that she felt safe enough to reveal her past to him, and that he loves her enough to know that even if she loved Sameer for a brief time, she has moved on, and not behave like a jealous boyfriend.

Khushi's hesitation at Arnav showering her with wealth is understandable. It's hard for someone who has been independent for so long to accept that someone wants to take care of them for a change. But I am impressed by the way they handled the situation and didn't let it drive a wedge between them.

Khushi's surprise for Arnav was perfect! I loved that, for a change, she was the one surprising him. And his acceptance of her treat was nice to see as well. Shows that they can be partners in every sense of word.

And the ending...the ending...Jigs! You better update at 12 AM on Tuesday!

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

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Posted: 10 years ago

#493

Meetha meetha update for Jigs's meetha meetha readers / followers...

I loved the well balance view in this update

I loved Khushi's narration from heart that is straight

I loved Arnav's varying emotion that is irate

I loved their sharing and caring that denotes soul mate

I loved how Arnav was a pillar to Khushi's burden

I loved how graciously the confession was taken

I loved how 'love you' were freely given and taken

I loved how cold ain't a barrier for a dip in the ocean

I loved how Arnav's patient was shaken to the core

I loved when my world moved for 'tum theek ho'

I loved the promise, "I never left, nor will I ever leave you" meant

I loved the 'Arnav' to 'my Arnav' progressive assent

I loved it and can't help it when he mutters "unbelievable"

I loved it and part of that sunset at vineyard that is unforgettable

I loved it and still loving the cozy dinner date that is indescribable

I loved it and in awe of the thoughtful gift that is unbeatable

I loved how the 'weekend for you' turned to 'weekend for us'

I loved even the sliding of that zip and all that fuss

I loved poor Aranv's predicament and Khushi's blush

I loved how the top preview might turn into a plus

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#494

Page 69 😉

He just knew what she was fearing. Even before she could voice it, he was telling her he loved her and moreover respected her more! Jigs, I love your Arnav more and more with each update. He's so sensitive to her feelings and is right there for her at all times. And I so want him to have a moment alone with Sameer in a dark alleyway 😡

It was so sweet the way she was niharofying him And thinking ...

Sarke Jo kamar Se Woh Dheere Dheere

Pagal Hui Re Main Dheere Dheere
Tere Boxers Dil Le Gayein 😆

What a perfectly thought out treat for Arnav and so wonderfully described. Glad she wore the red dress. It really mattered to him. But, it was sad to hear that no one's ever thought of doing something special just for him. So often we think that just because someone has the wherewithal to obtain anything, why bother doing it for them.

I really like the way you always show Khushi's thought process Jigs, it just makes it so much more real. So she's wants to take things further... And now I want to squeal in outrage! Seriously? We have to wait?! Choti's hmphf is needed here!

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#495

Ruchi🤗

Jigs, now this page deserves some Stripping and ripping! 😉

Jigs, I will not forgive you for leaving us hanging like this! 😡

More later! Let me cool down a bit.

I don't have the sea here. I'll go take a dip in the river Seine! 😉

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canapoem

@canapoem

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#496

Jigs, finally I am commenting on the update.

Loved the update. Everything was just perfect.

Khushi telling about her past, Arnav's reaction and anger towards Sameer and the entire episode, and then later on they both dipping themselves in the cold water, everything just felt so perfect and so nice.

Hey, can they go skinny dipping next time????😉

Further loved it when Khushi planned the surprise visit to the vineyard and arranged for a dinner date at that place. This shows that Khushi never wants to be just at the receiving end whether be it professionally or personally, and wants to be on par with him in all things in life. She is a very independent woman and Arnav does recognise this and hope he can love and respect her for who she is.

Now I cant believe you stopped at such a cliff hangar!!!!!😲

Just something from Khushi to Arnav:

Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aanaa

Dheere dheere se dil ke churana

Tumse pyaar hamein hai kitna jaane jana

Tumko chukar, tumko hai bataana

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#497

Sorry guys, I am taking up one more spot here, but I had to appreciate Re re for her news feed.👏

Loved it, loved it and loved it more.👏

Re re the reporting was just so innovative and superb.

Re re, let me give you some more inside information about the happenings at Hampton. Please dont tell anyone that I gave you this information.

All the beach front and ocean access suites and cottages are getting completely booked. And the management is charging thrice the regular rate for such accommodations. Since Jigs has clearly said that the action might not occur in the bedroom, people suspect it could be even in the beach so all of them only want such rooms where in they can access the sea shore day and night without any hazzles.

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Jay

@jduke

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#498

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Finally Kushi is at peace after sharing her past with Arnav. I am falling more and more in love with this sweet heart Arnav 😉. Sameer is such a scumbag and he don't deserve not even ounce of Kushi's love.

I have walked through those vineyards along with Arnav & Kushi with your wonderful picturesque description 👏. Enjoyed reading their confession, kisses and partial bare hugs. Arnav is redefining the word control and I am wondering when did ASR become CSR 😉. What you stopped here?. Where are the so-called 69 moves? Yes, Yes, Kushi very much wanted to show top and bottom to you. Will you be able to control CSR after the display (Personally I don't want them to control anymore 😉)?. When will action starts Jigs ji?.

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Oliver.Queen

@Oliver.Queen

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#499

I want this Arnav. He is everything a girl would need. Understanding, caring, sophisticated and not to mention HOT! He is like every girl's fantasy. And Khushi is one lucky girl. I loved how he supported her as she narrated the past. Usually a sort of annoyance comes when a guy finds out that his girl had a past with someone who is not himself. But I love how he have her the necessary space and reached out to her. It is truly a bliss to see such type of love.

The update started off tensed and I thought it was going to be an emotional update...but u stumped me. At the end we are all left with imagining Arnav with those shorts. Seriously...and what was that at the end...bold Khushi. I loved it. Usual ff's it always shows Arnav as the person who is more open to sex and Khushi being shy but in here she was quite brazen yet shy. It was truly nice.

She would need some time to get used to his wealth. But I like how they are so open and frank in their relationship. What u see is what u get. It's nice to have such a rapport.

And that brings me back to...your Arnav...he is...😳...god...update quickly. Di when u said u r tensed about your next chapter...I felt myself thinking...is she tensed because of ahem ahem in the next scene. Hehe. Our expectations are all high Di and I am sure u would excel in the next update as well. Truly ur writing is awesome and I hope this thread reaches many more threads. Waiting for Tuesday. And it is tomorrow. That's one thing to look forward to.