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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
OMG. YES YES. AN EPILOGUE PLEASE!
And please do let us know what Khushi's marriage thing was all about..
So excited to read more. Please an epilogue!

PS: can i just shoot Divyani with her licensed gun?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: -Angel.Candy-

Woah that was so beautiful,truly mesmerized by your writing style.
I don't like devyani,she is such a delusional fool 😡
khushi is still writing letters to arnav even if he never replys to them.okay arnav never gets those letter,all thanks to his actress friend devyani.but she still writes them,aww she loves arnav unconditionally.
Khushi is not married yet.how?arnav saw her in wedding as bride na??
Poor arnav,in all these two years he suffered most emotionally though financially he is successful film-maker.
Waiting for arnav to do something.let's see what will he do now!🤔
Can he kickout devyani from his movie?i want it badly.take sridevi as khushi suggests.😳
Main bhi kush aur khushi bhi kush😆



Poor Devyani, with all the wrath directed at her, she's already dead. 🤢 😆

Thank's a ton for letting me know how you feel about this.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Sanaya.Barun

OMG. YES YES. AN EPILOGUE PLEASE!

And please do let us know what Khushi's marriage thing was all about..
So excited to read more. Please an epilogue!

PS: can i just shoot Divyani with her licensed gun?



Thank you. Khushi's marriage will be cleared in the epilogue. 😃
PS: Good idea. 😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
after looking at the pic...i have started hating Divyani more! i could have tilerated if u had put the original Divyani's pic!😆
the first part reminded me of Jab we mate...though i admired this Khushi more than Geet.
2nd part reminded me of Om shanti Om...theres nothing similar...but anyways the name popped up in my mind!!😆

Now coming to the story...i loved n enjoyed every bit of it...its nice n refreshing...also letters r veeery romantic!!!!
all in all it was a wonderful read:))
now i want epilogue n more coz its not like i get to read stories like this often😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: -HEAVEN-

after looking at the pic...i have started hating Divyani more! i could have tilerated if u had put the original Divyani's pic!😆
the first part reminded me of Jab we mate...though i admired this Khushi more than Geet.
2nd part reminded me of Om shanti Om...theres nothing similar...but anyways the name popped up in my mind!!😆

Now coming to the story...i loved n enjoyed every bit of it...its nice n refreshing...also letters r veeery romantic!!!!
all in all it was a wonderful read:))
now i want epilogue n more coz its not like i get to read stories like this often😳



You mean this one wouldn't hurt that much?




😆

I guess train journeys do give the vibe of Jab We Met.

Ok, I hadn't realized about OSO but as you said, maybe the retro Bollywood background does make it appear a bit like that. Honestly I hadn't thought about the two movies while writing this. 😛

Thanks a lot for dropping in.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Epilogue pls. It's a beautiful story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Butiful os pl gv us epilog n pl clarify khushi maraige when i read devyani thought nani oh no its sheetal as always bit* pl pl write epilog tanx for sharing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Title of this story grab my attention... what a story it is.. surely i fell in love with it... u wrote it beautiful ly dear.. . Arnav's emotion u wrote it beautifully... please write epilogue too..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Epilogue please for this beautiful story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: archana.mh17

That is so so wonderful, yet so heartbreaking!

If you hadn't mentioned a part 2, then, I'd still not complain-it still would have been a great standalone piece, even though it is so heartbreaking!


Thank you so much dear. 😃 Part two has been posted. I hope it lives up to your expectations.

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