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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: JJKKL

Wonderful. The flow, the chioce of words, the title - everything is perfect.
I am still reeling from the nonstop dialogues of Khushi in the train.
Flustered by the amount of letters she wrote.
Impressed by how well she connected with Arnav in that short meeting
At awe of her patience to keep on writing though there was no response.
I felt so bad for Arnav that he had to witness Khushi in bride's clothes in his employees wedding (though I am sure she was not the employee's bride)
My heart was beating so fast when Arnav was searching for Khushi's letters in Devayani's cupboard.


Thank you so much honey. It feels so great to have you here. 🤗 Your comment put a big smile on my face.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: shree10

Rahat ki saans after reading part 2!!

But dusht, sadistic Aman, how could you stop there.. Rehem karo and give us third part epilogue whatever where they meet and "become one" !!😉

Then who the eff married Akash's cousin?



Watson behen, 😳 😳 😳 for all the endearments, nice choice of adjectives. 😆

Akash's cousin is the biggest enigma here.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Whoa.
Res.


Gosh, this, this is the bloody result of being out of action for so long. Your old friends become Booker nominees in a month's time.


Another giant res.

Seems that today would be spent in getting back my dimaag, hitting the webster's dictionary and trying to make a coherent response.


AMan I'll love you forever.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Anyway, I'll be the first to res for epilogue.

Mine. Mine. Mine.



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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Ria Behen, it took me a while to track the second part to this super intriguing story down but I finally did it and wow take a bow now mademoiselle!👏

Reading this story from the get go was like watching one of those movies that keep you glued to your seat in the anticipation of what would transpire next! I was so darn anxious all the way through, feeling all frustrated for Arnav bitwa at the same time blaming him for the all the wasted/lost time. Why oh why didn't he ever reply to Khushi, why oh why didn't he contact her earlier when he felt the way he did for her. After I was done berating Arnav, I found another person to blame and so I started hating on the Khanna lady ( I shall call her that because I kind of like her first name, it just doesn't ring any evil bia*** bells😆). I started feeling the relief that washed over Arnav after discovering Khushi's latest letters ( Thank heavens for that). Speaking of Khushi, btw what is this woman made of! Her level of preservance and unwavering care for Arnav is remarkable. Arnav is a lucky dude and so he did what he should have done a long time ago that is to give Khushi a call. Love, love, loved their Hello, hi and no bye byes on the phone.

Thank you for sharing this amazing journey with us, we can berate Arnav for the wasted time but he is very real. I am sure there are alot of people like him out there who don't express themselves out of their own fears or insecurities missing out on Gems like Khushi. Bring on the epilogue at your earliest convenience, Behna! x


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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Omg! What an amazing story!! Loved it to bits!
EPILOGUE please!!!!!
You can't leave us starving like that...need to know what happens and what happened?
Is Khushi married? or divorced or not married ever?
Will they meet and how will it be?
Is there a happily ever after (off course! Silly me 😛)
And most of all,...DOES ARNAV KICK DEVYANI'S ASS!!!!!?????

PLEASE!! NEED AN EPILOGUE OR PART 3 HERE!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OK, you have to give us an epilogue.This is a fabulous story. I love the idea of writing letters. Esp the way Khushi wrote them to Arnav, relentlessly, for 4 long years. What exactly happened to Akash's brother though? Or was that her twin sister by chance?My mind is literally coming up with all possible Bollywood-ish scenarios. Everything about this story was beautiful.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Arshix144

Ria Behen, it took me a while to track the second part to this super intriguing story down but I finally did it and wow take a bow now mademoiselle!👏


Reading this story from the get go was like watching one of those movies that keep you glued to your seat in the anticipation of what would transpire next! I was so darn anxious all the way through, feeling all frustrated for Arnav bitwa at the same time blaming him for the all the wasted/lost time. Why oh why didn't he ever reply to Khushi, why oh why didn't he contact her earlier when he felt the way he did for her. After I was done berating Arnav, I found another person to blame and so I started hating on the Khanna lady ( I shall call her that because I kind of like her first name, it just doesn't ring any evil bia*** bells😆). I started feeling the relief that washed over Arnav after discovering Khushi's latest letters ( Thank heavens for that). Speaking of Khushi, btw what is this woman made of! Her level of preservance and unwavering care for Arnav is remarkable. Arnav is a lucky dude and so he did what he should have done a long time ago that is to give Khushi a call. Love, love, loved their Hello, hi and no bye byes on the phone.

Thank you for sharing this amazing journey with us, we can berate Arnav for the wasted time but he is very real. I am sure there are alot of people like him out there who don't express themselves out of their own fears or insecurities missing out on Gems like Khushi. Bring on the epilogue at your earliest convenience, Behna! x



Behena...

Your comment made my day. It just made all the effort worthwhile. Thank you so much for this.
Hehe, I know with Devyani. It almost always make us think of the sweet and understanding Nani, so Khanna Lady it is. 😆
Edited by cineraria - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: barunaya

Omg! What an amazing story!! Loved it to bits!

EPILOGUE please!!!!!
You can't leave us starving like that...need to know what happens and what happened?
Is Khushi married? or divorced or not married ever?
Will they meet and how will it be?
Is there a happily ever after (off course! Silly me 😛)
And most of all,...DOES ARNAV KICK DEVYANI'S ASS!!!!!?????

PLEASE!! NEED AN EPILOGUE OR PART 3 HERE!!!


Thank's a ton dear. I am glad you liked it. 😃 I really hope to update tonight, maybe Arnav has a plan in mind for Devyani. 😆
Edited by cineraria - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: SS88

OK, you have to give us an epilogue.This is a fabulous story. I love the idea of writing letters. Esp the way Khushi wrote them to Arnav, relentlessly, for 4 long years. What exactly happened to Akash's brother though? Or was that her twin sister by chance?My mind is literally coming up with all possible Bollywood-ish scenarios. Everything about this story was beautiful.


Hehehe, I would love to know all the scenarios running through your mind. Thanks a lot dear. 😃

I still write letters you know, their charm never fades.
Edited by cineraria - 11 years ago

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