Arshi OS: One Last Kiss

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Swaran13

@Swaran13

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Sad ending 😭

Written well though

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anjale

@anjale

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

OMG it had done sm ting terrible 2 my little heart yaar cant take it but loved each and every words ...red all the words twice

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

oh no a sad end :(
but loved how u wrote it :)

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

U made me cry! Vry emotional os.

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Parii...

@Parii..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Superb
Emotional and sad ending but like it

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Beautifully written... made me emotional
awesome <3

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Brilliant OS 👍🏼
thanks for the PM

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Superb os but sad ending

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nagina

@jeb1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Great os but love to see happy ending

Thanks for pm me

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..ashiya..

@..ashiya..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

No happy ending?😭😭😭

But true said, not every story ends in a happy note

Coming to the story, awesomely wriiten shot, Rhea.

This was simply beautiful.

I always wanted the same track in Arnav where he repents for all his hurtful cheap words for Khushi.

Khushi had gone through a lot so forgiving Arnav easily would be unfair on her part.

But was he really to be blamed for it all? It was Shyaam who played the games right, so why not punish him??😭

That was painful and heart touching.

Now waiting for its sequel eagerly.

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