Arshi OS: One Last Kiss

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Premeer ki Chahat

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Posted: 11 years ago

UNRES😆
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AWWW NO!!!!!!!!😭😭
NO HAPPY ENDING!!!!!! 😭She left him and went on the train? NAHIN!!!!!!! 😭Khushi!!!!!! 😭DAMMIT!!!!!😭😭😭
Who is to be blamed in all this? Arnav? Khushi?🥺 NO WAY PUNISH Shyaam NOT THEM!!!!!!!!😭
He realized everything and phir bhi she left him but who could blame her? She suffered so much!!!!!! 😭
I really had a hope at the end but you made a sad ending...which added more intensity!!!!!!!👍🏼

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!!!!!!!!! Hat's off 👏

ps: iss chakkar mein I forgot to congratulate myself: first to comment!!!!!! 😛😆 *eating mango and chocolate cake🤣*

Edited by MariaArHiholic - 11 years ago

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zohakhan7

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Posted: 11 years ago

This is a brilliant os

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Misnomer

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Posted: 11 years ago

This was good ..

But i hate sad endings ...

On the bed crying bitterly

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ipkknd12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice story.. but please make it a ss and give us a happy ending.. please...

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hotchic.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Some stories get wonderful with a sad ending just as yours! It was lovely! Arnav deserved it!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

ahhh this was his punishment for not trusting her
and hers for loving him
she is right where there is no trust no relationship can work
if only he found the truth before she told him
but that wasnt meant to be
when she said she is leaving for a minute i thought oh no hope she doesnt try suicide
but then she didnt
why should she right
but yes it was the only way to go for her
she loved and yet her love didnt trust her
so sad but thats life too

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago