Arshi OS: One Last Kiss

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Pearl_Oyster

@Pearl_Oyster

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: broken.silence

Rhea has written many OSes Kiraniya but you never happened to notice😛😆

Dun worry.

now that I have finally grown a pair of functional eyes, I am going to scan each piece you have written 😆

Just, sit back and watch 😛

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.brokensilence.

@.brokensilence.

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Pearl_Oyster

Dun worry.
now that I have finally grown a pair of functional eyes, I am going to scan each piece you have written😆
Just, sit back and watch😛

Haan shauk se padhna par padhne ke baad tu pagal hogayi toh mujhe matt bolna kuch😆

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suri2610

@suri2610

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Ideally this is what would have happened between them... Very well portrayed ...awesome

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stg1

@stg1

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

this is beautifully written, and very very sad 😭 i know khushi felt she had to do this for her self respect and self worth and arnav deserves it and so much more, but still 🥺 really hoping u write a sequel where after some time has passed she has forgiven him and they meet somewhere out of the blue and he tries everything to woo her back and she makes him work hard for her

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..aashi12..

@..aashi12..

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

whoa that was simply outstanding

hats off girl for putting in just the perfect emotion and pain

was really a heart touching one

keep up the good work and keep writing!

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..aashi12..

@..aashi12..

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

please give us a sequel with a happy wala ending soon :)

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sanz.12

@sanz.12

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

👏👏👏

tht ws an awesum wrk. i luvd the os. it hd so many feelings nd pain bt just in the appropriate manner

she left him?😲😭😭 y? u cud hav punished that snaky shyaam naaa😭 why punish our arshi?😭

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sanz.12

@sanz.12

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

bt tat ws also neended i guess. he ws really bad to khushi.😭

the last kiss😭 no i am srsly crying i cnt hold back my ters.😭

plzzz giv us a happy sequel soon😳

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--rashi.a--

@--rashi.a--

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

So a parallel IPK track?

That was a lovely one must say!

I don't fllow much of the writers but you make me want to change that

coming to the os:

that was a fantastic one. love it totally. with all the dialogues taken from the show itself it made me relieve the moments. thank you for that

it ws painful an dheart touching one but arnav did deserve it. and khushi said it right, trust is the basic element of relationshipn and arnav lacked it for sure.

but being a fan i would want to see a happy ending so waiting for the sequel eagerly. do post int soon😳