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👏 👏 👏 Choti absolutly brilliant. Loved evry chapter, from their second meeting to her first date with nk... which had me rolling about! Snails ! Even my stomach heaved!
her throwing up on nk, him nursing her better and she retuning the favour. Her appalling cooking. (Oh by the way you have left me with a lasting image. BS in the kitchen cooking ) Their date , hot moments and the final him covered in red glitter proposing. I have to say I absolutely hated the towel dance scene so out of character, the dancing would have been enough for us phankis to sigh...

right need to sleep, and will start another of your stories tomorrow a big muuwh for your story, editing and posting and completing ab fab

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Beautiful story
Wonderful updates
Loved them
Well written
Enjoyed it

This was such a cute ff!!! loved it!!

awesome story...enjoyed reading the ss..

Amazing story

Hi Choti

Bahut acchi kahani hei, re nand kisore. Agar aur bhi achi kahaniyaam likhogi tho will make jalebis and break 100 narials too.

Likha karo
Love
Anna

wow..👏it is amazing..really a different plot..i enjoyed each and every part of this story..i'm laughing like an idiot while reading ..seriously no one can confess his feeling like our dear ASR😆""Could I wash the dishes for you?"😆😆but i like the way how you portrayed their feeling for others in their absence...loved it..thank you for the amazing writing..

Its such a beautiful story..I read it in one go tonite!!

You write incredibly good. Really. I read the entire story together and it made my day. Ita awesome. Do write more. U adore ur writing skills.